Date: June 01, 2008 09:14 am Title: Her Scarf
Mmm, very nice. I love the detail about the crocheting itself, and the way you make Pam sound like she's smiling with every stitch despite being discouraged (I wish I could knit or crochet with her patience!). Great job!
Date: January 23, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Her Scarf
I just read this three times in a row, to make sure I hadn't missed one syllable of loveliness. What a perfect metaphor. Or been as perfect despite the flaws..that absolutely sums up what they (could) have together. And the last three lines are killers. LOVE this madly.
Date: January 23, 2007 06:00 pm Title: Her Scarf
I forgot to reply, because the squeeness that is just generally you overwhelmed me, but I love this and the subtlty of it; you don't go OHMYGOD JIM IS HERE AND THEY ARE GOING TO KISS CAN YOU FEEL THE TENSION? you play it soft and light and perfect. *sigh*
*beta hat*: "fingers" appears 3 times in the last 4 lines.
*beta hat off*: AMAZING. Which you should know. *IS DED*
Date: January 23, 2007 02:24 pm Title: Her Scarf
This is the best prompt ever. I love the images you've put in my mind here. My favoritest part....
She trails a hand along his arm, fingers intertwining through the soft yarn. She leans forward as his eyes close. She whispers in his ear.
“I made it.” She feels his next word start from the tips of her fingers.
She can feel the scarf slip from between their fingers as his lips catch hers.
Date: January 23, 2007 05:47 am Title: Her Scarf
Date: January 22, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Her Scarf
That was just beautifully poetic. This was just a gorgeous line: He slides the scarf slowly from around her neck, long fingers catching on every imperfection, somehow smoothing each one out. They both make each other better when they're together!
Date: January 22, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Her Scarf
Just as the story says...beautiful