Date: February 09, 2008 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL this was great. I laughed, I cried, I was frustrated for Jim and Pam...and that last line was wonderful. +)
Date: January 25, 2007 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL, I loved the reality of that story. I mean, what married couple (or any couple together for a while) hasn't had their sex life go stale? Great story!
There was only one thing that bugged me. When Pam said/thought,
"she was grateful he was so whipped"
I don't think Jim's willingness to get her chips in the size that she wants means he's "whipped". That comment seemed uncharacteristically . . . well, mean. :/
But still, all in all, a great story that was fun to read. :)
Date: January 23, 2007 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it! I love it because it is real. I'm married and this rings so true! Thanks for the laugh!
Author's Response: you are very, very welcome
Date: January 23, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love how the 'traditional' romantic stuff isn't what brings them together, but rather, the laughter. Ain't that the truth!!!
Author's Response: yay! thanks so much
Date: January 23, 2007 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have to admit, this story made me laugh quite a bit, and I think a lot of it has to do with the fact that it's maybe a bit TOO relatable! Hee. I think anyone who's been married more than a year or two will completely relate to this. It's nice to see the not-so-perfect side of Jim & Pam, too.
I thought the "shave the armpits" line was a little over the top, but not necessarily off the mark - I know my husband doesn't like to watch me do that. I would have toned it down a little bit. Nonetheless, I did laugh a lot while reading this!!
Author's Response:
ahh, sorry...I thought the same thing when I wrote it but didnt do anything about it...I'll think about revising
thanks for reading!
Date: January 23, 2007 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so true to life, and so true to them! Nicely done :)
Date: January 22, 2007 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
hehehe...glad they didn't stay "stuck" for long! My favorite part was at the end when she hit her leg on the tub and they both dissolved into laughter. That's so them. Good job!
Author's Response: why thank you, and thanks for reading!!
Date: January 22, 2007 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely awesome. I totally identify with it too (after being married for 7 years). Thanks for that!
Author's Response: Im so glad you could relate, I'm only at two years but hey, we all have these moments dont we?