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Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2007 01:27 pm Title: Yellow Roses

Ooooh, let the games begin!  Now she's his secretary, woohoo!  Love the flirting between them and, of course, the UST. 

Keep up the great work with this.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Yellow Roses

I am really intrigued by your story.  It's just so charming.  

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Yellow Roses

...in her breathiest voice...

Um, yeah. "Private Eye". You kinkster.

When you were describing her dress, I kept thinking, I hope there's no Angela in this office - oh, wait, it's the 50s - they're all Angela!

At any rate, I like the boldness of Pam here, even if she doesn't really know what the effect is on Jim.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Yellow Roses

I am SO happy to see you continuing this.  I just love the setting and the story and the characterizations and the details.  And I think I want her dress.  ...and, umm...."Mr. Halpert" indeed!  Yes, I can agree with Nomad's assessment.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 08:04 am Title: Yellow Roses

OMG, Pam & Jim with the 'hard boiled' detective banter -- too freaking cute.  (Are costumes next?  hee!)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 06:28 am Title: Yellow Roses

I love this chapter too.  I can hear Jim joking around with her....and they're into role playing huh?   Interesting...

I could also completely envision the look on Jim's face when he saw her in the dress, made my heart pitter patter.

Lovely job.  

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 06:06 am Title: Yellow Roses

I'm usually wary of AU's - so hard to pull off well (with notable exceptions like the amazing Hope) but I really think you're making it work here. They still seem like themselves yet the retro vibe comes thru too. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 05:35 am Title: Yellow Roses

Oh I am in love with this story :) "As though it had a mind of it's own,his hand started to reach toward her"....sigh....

Reviewer: colorblind Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 09:27 pm Title: Yellow Roses

Aww, that was the cutest exchange in his office!  I could just hear him speaking that.  Jim needs to .....  do something.  About Roy.  Run him over with his Caddy.

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