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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 08:35 pm Title: Red Lipstick

Cute picture of you demonstrating the straw!  Your top fits right in with the story.  I like the way the links help us visualize parts of the story.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Red Lipstick

OMG, this chapter was so cute.  Pam and her famous sweaters, Jim buying her a coke (squee) and knowing to include a straw, and the obvious attraction between them.  This is really getting good.  That photo of you is adorable too!  I like the visuals you include at the end.

Well, now that I've caught up, I will have to favorite this so that I know when you update!



Author's Response: thanks so much for all the wonderful reviews!! you are really too sweet.  I'm going on vacation and plan to write while I relax so expect a new chap next week!! :)

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Red Lipstick

This story is just so adorable and wonderful.  I love how you've captured the 40's (not that I lived through them).  I especially loved how Jim noticed the straw thing and that Pam even asked him how he knew.  Very cute.

Reviewer: JimiousThePamazing Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Red Lipstick

Ok, so i am a sucker for anything and everything 50's and i absolutely love this story.

I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 02:06 pm Title: Red Lipstick

Yayayayayay!!! Imagine me saying this about 50,000 more times and then you'll get an idea of how excited I was to see a new chapter!

And it was totally great too! I was too distracted by the content to look for grammar errors, so I don't have any to point out, but maybe I'll notice some on a second read-through. For now, just, thanks for updating! :D

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