Date: January 10, 2008 08:35 pm Title: Red Lipstick
Cute picture of you demonstrating the straw! Your top fits right in with the story. I like the way the links help us visualize parts of the story.
Date: May 28, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Red Lipstick
OMG, this chapter was so cute. Pam and her famous sweaters, Jim buying her a coke (squee) and knowing to include a straw, and the obvious attraction between them. This is really getting good. That photo of you is adorable too! I like the visuals you include at the end.
Well, now that I've caught up, I will have to favorite this so that I know when you update!
Author's Response: thanks so much for all the wonderful reviews!! you are really too sweet. I'm going on vacation and plan to write while I relax so expect a new chap next week!! :)
Date: May 19, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Red Lipstick
This story is just so adorable and wonderful. I love how you've captured the 40's (not that I lived through them). I especially loved how Jim noticed the straw thing and that Pam even asked him how he knew. Very cute.
Date: May 16, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Red Lipstick
Ok, so i am a sucker for anything and everything 50's and i absolutely love this story.
I can't wait to read more!
Date: May 16, 2007 02:06 pm Title: Red Lipstick
Yayayayayay!!! Imagine me saying this about 50,000 more times and then you'll get an idea of how excited I was to see a new chapter!
And it was totally great too! I was too distracted by the content to look for grammar errors, so I don't have any to point out, but maybe I'll notice some on a second read-through. For now, just, thanks for updating! :D