10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2008 07:57 am Title: Brown Paper
Just finished reading this fic. It's absolutely amazing. I really hope you update it sometime soon
9 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2008 06:38 pm Title: Brown Paper
Any chance of you taking this fic up again? I enjoyed what you have very much. Reminds me of Mad Men and I'd love to see how you get Jim and Pam together. Even if it's a lost WIP it entertained me a lot. :)
Author's Response:
It's not lost... I promise.
I recently picked this back up again, but I'm working really hard before posting it because it's been so long and I don't want it to be a disappointment when I come back. But thank you so so much for reading
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2008 04:55 pm Title: Brown Paper
This story is amazing! I can't wait for you to update it. And all the photoshop stuff that you do is also great. I love the "Private James Halpert" picture! And it looks like you put a lot of time into this story. Great Job! :)
Date: February 20, 2008 06:52 pm Title: Brown Paper
I just read your story for the first time, and I am really impressed with your research into the time period and the story line you've laid out for Jim and Pam. Definitely definitely keep up the writing--I can't wait for the next installment! Also, I love the photo of Private James Halpert :)
Date: February 01, 2008 11:12 pm Title: Brown Paper
I don't know what it is about this story, but it sucks me in every time. Keep this one going, I love it.
Date: January 29, 2008 08:10 pm Title: Brown Paper
I was very excited to see you update! I've been following this story from the beginning.
Oh, and Private James Halpert? *swoon* I love a Jim in uniform.
Date: January 29, 2008 04:20 pm Title: Brown Paper
Great Chapter. But why are Pam and Roy still engaged? I thought that when she moved back in with her parents that she had ended it.
Author's Response:
So sorry to be confusing. I guess I hadn't made it clear enough. Pam was only at her parents for Christmas and after Jim shot her down she decided to keep being engaged to Roy although that clearly isn't where her heart is. :)
Three chapters left, and I promise I'll try to be less complicated. hehe
Date: January 29, 2008 08:34 am Title: Brown Paper
such an original idea!
10 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2008 06:27 am Title: Brown Paper
Oh, I love this story!!
There's just one thing I noticed in this chapter. In the sentence that says, "Jim sat on the floor unaware that it was possible to love her anymore." I think "anymore" should be two words... that changes the whole meaning of the sentence to be what I think you meant.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for pointing that out! I fixed it.
and thank you for being such a loyal reader and reviewer, I really appreciate it.