Date: March 10, 2007 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great little story. I love how comfortable Pam and Jim are together, but at the same time there's this undercurrent of something more b/w them, like Pam noticing his hands and Jim being quiet for the rest of the ride.
Author's Response: Thanks! This was written back when I could bear to write something a little angsty. Now, not so much.
Date: October 08, 2006 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, poor Jim, having his heart broken yet again! I'd love to see more of this scenario, it's quite interesting...love it!
Author's Response: Thanks, McGigi! This story now makes me a little wistful for the Jammy times... sigh...
Date: July 16, 2006 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this line - "She was glad to get some space between herself and Dwight; he had been pointedly holding his arm across his chest so they wouldn’t touch, as though the two of them were eight and he was afraid of cooties." I haven't thought about cooties in years - it fits in perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks -- Dwight seems like a "cooties" kind of guy, doesn't he?
Date: July 16, 2006 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was perfectly heartwrenching. Poor, poor Jim. It felt so real - like it could have actually happened. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks -- don't you wonder how Jim stands the ups and downs with Pam? He never knows if he's going to have a "date" or Roy tickling Pam at his desk.
Date: July 16, 2006 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm not sure why but Dora the Explorer freaks me out.
I loved this though. That damn Pam, sometimes I don't think she realizes how much she hurts Jim.
Author's Response: Thanks, I know! I love Pam, so it would be painful to think she DOES have an inkling of the tiny ways she hurts Jim.
Date: July 16, 2006 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
"His hand was loosely curled on her shoulder, and when he leaned to say something she could feel his lips brush her hair." Um, yes please! You've created a nice moment here. I like the line about their shoes lining up. And how very like Dwight to call Ryan "the temp" when he's right there in the car. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Jim loves those little moments, too - but they have a way of not lasting, don't they?