Date: January 27, 2007 05:58 am Title: Touch
Date: January 27, 2007 01:07 am Title: Touch
Wow. just wow. First, your writing is amazing. How you use the words to beautiful describe what's happening is amazing. Second, I can't believe that was all a day dream!! EEE wow
Date: January 26, 2007 09:41 am Title: Touch
Oh my gaaaaaaaawd..sooo hot!!
Date: January 26, 2007 06:09 am Title: Touch
This was gorgeous. Heartbreaking, but gorgeous. Wonderful voices for them both.
Date: January 26, 2007 04:24 am Title: Touch
First, the ee cummings - great framework for this. And the part in his living room is so sensual and rich, yet it feels like you rendered it in almost impressionistic touches of language. This line: They both know they're not going to lunch anymore...just scorching. And you also almost effortlessly capture Jim's intense desire/yearning for her, not just sexually, but thoroughly: you are mine and i am yours. The twist at the end - the icing on this achingly beautiful cake.
Date: January 25, 2007 09:34 pm Title: Touch
AH!!! I love that bit at the end about the red neck. It's so true! This was such a nice, sexy little story. And, it demonstrates why I would not mind a real Jim/Pam romance onscreen. The opportunity to see little hints like this? WOW.
Date: January 25, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Touch
Arrrrrghghghghghgh!!!!!! Only a fantasy? You're killing me!!!!! Damn, that was good though! :)
Date: January 25, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Touch
Wow! I wasn't expecting that ending. Fabulous!
Date: January 25, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Touch
You? This? No lie, I think I only breathed once the entire time I was reading. Amazing use of the cummings poem to set the tone of this. Ohhh the Jim and the Pam and the sexiness and the fantasies...
Do you ever not write something amazing?