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Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3981 Read Count: 7313 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: July 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: What will be
Aw, nq. Happily ever after feels good after all the recent angst over season 3. The part about Roy not looking for her in the conference room was real and rough. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I needed some sweet with the bitter.
Dwight doesn't know when to let a joke go. Neither does Jim.
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Slash
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 590 Read Count: 2293 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Fun and Jimtense. Reminds me of "Exactly how much pot did you smoke?!"
Author's Response: Oh, yay, that\'s EXACTLY what I was going for so I\'m so happy you picked up on it. Thank you for the feedback!!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319 Read Count: 2266 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11680 Read Count: 13450 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Sound
Yay! So excited you've posted this one. Sense was the first fanfic I ever read, and it humbled me. Love it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Travel
Warnings: None
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3326 Read Count: 2969 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: July 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Gorgeous! I love Jim POVs, and you've done this so well. In my heart, they keep driving.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Travel
Warnings: None
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3739 Read Count: 10805 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Was that a shout-out to Canary? Hee. This is a fun story - continue!
Author's Response: Yes! I\'m so glad you noticed that.
Date: August 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
O hot goodness. Nice. :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 575 Read Count: 2472 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
"His hand was loosely curled on her shoulder, and when he leaned to say something she could feel his lips brush her hair." Um, yes please! You've created a nice moment here. I like the line about their shoes lining up. And how very like Dwight to call Ryan "the temp" when he's right there in the car. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Jim loves those little moments, too - but they have a way of not lasting, don\'t they?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4744 Read Count: 4923 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Woo-hoo! Which is probably what I said the first time I reviewed this, but it bears saying again :)
Author's Response: Thank you...again!
Categories: Other, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1929 Read Count: 1795 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
First, I love the second-person POV. It's like someone is making him admit all of this to himself. And I like fics that give Roy more dimension. Nice job :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 917 Read Count: 1720 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
"Sometimes you love her so much that you’re afraid you might start to hate her for all that." This is a great Jim POV. The section about hurting Katy so she can share the pain - terrific.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3340 Read Count: 3674 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OH! The sprinkler scene. Water drops and thumbs on wrists and unclipping barrettes... Eeeee :) Each one of these was perfect. You've created a great range of mood and of tension. Love it.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it. The sprinkler scene grew out of my pure unadulterated need to just write about WetJim. It\'s fun isn\'t it?
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1605 Read Count: 1836 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is beautiful. :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 923 Read Count: 1822 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Blame
"Every one except for the only one, and his tongue was silent, but he looked at her like he had always known who she was..." Beautiful (and true!) and your description of Jim opening the package and card was perfect. Great first fic! Now write more!
Author's Response: I can\'t begin to explain how nervous I was to post this. Thank you for the review, you\'re one of my favorite JAM authors.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1161 Read Count: 2093 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: July 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I think your last paragraph is your best - it creates a vivid image for the reader. Consider reading back through your story carefully for dropped words, spelling errors, etc. There are several folks here who are happy to serve as beta-readers if you want or need one. Just click Members, then choose Beta-Readers from the dropdown box. I hope you try your hand at Office fic again - the characters are fun to write for!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1231 Read Count: 2542 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: July 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I liked it. I've always thought that Pam knew exactly what she was doing when she took her hair down for Kelly. I can see Pam thinking all of these thoughts, even if another inner voice then told her she was being a little cruel. I was relieved that Jim was the groom at the end - if he'd been a guest, the thoughts would definitely have been cruel. Good Pam POV!
Author's Response: I would never do that to you! Well, actually I considered it, but I thought it would be too mean. :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1961 Read Count: 1936 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Fore
Love the 2nd-person narration. Nice Jim POV. (*dying to know what happens tomorrow*)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2098 Read Count: 4115 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ooo, you captured that horrible post-argument tension perfectly. Made my tummy hurt. But then...magic fingers!!! I love Pam's epiphany. Yay :)
Author's Response: Mine too. heehee. Magic fingers was my favorite part. Someday I may have to elaborate. ;)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Fluff, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: None
Challenges: Confined Spaces, Rain
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1254 Read Count: 3495 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: July 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Cute! (And poor Stanley)
Author's Response: Thanks!
He's so tired and everything's happening so fast.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 710 Read Count: 3281 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great Jim POV. You can feel his weariness.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1303 Read Count: 4225 ePub Downloads: 3
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OMG I LOVE THE SEXY TALK!!! Sorry to shout, but holy crap - that was...really enjoyable :) Just the thought of Jim making that last promise? *shudder* Um, sequel, please.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I do have a sequel planned.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Confined Spaces, Rain
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1894 Read Count: 4325 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Revival of the Fittest
Love these two lines: "...she slides her hand into his and locks their fingers together, mentally swallowing the key..." and "...and if he didn't make her feel like the person she's always wanted to be..."
And this one gave me a jolt - "she...kneels down in front of him, gently easing his knees apart to make room..."
Fun alternate ending :)
Author's Response: I\'m living vicariously, I guess. Thanks for reviewing :)
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Pam, Roy
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 797 Read Count: 1682 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Nice moments! I love the exchange between Roy and his brother.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Stranded
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1487 Read Count: 3193 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Really liked this line: "He silently begs everything in the world to keep still so that he can keep this moment,..."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1032 Read Count: 1257 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Said it before, saying it again. Jim's whisper is f***ing intense!! Gah! Chills.
Author's Response: Thanks again, nomadshan :)