Penname: nomadshan Real name: Shannon
Member Since: July 09, 2006

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I'm neck-deep in novel-writing now, hence the lack of fic-age.

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Possibilities by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 23] 29
Summary: Another (overly optimistic, I'm sure) version of what might have happened immediately following The Kiss.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3981 Read Count: 7313 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2006 Updated: July 31, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: July 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: What will be

Aw, nq. Happily ever after feels good after all the recent angst over season 3. The part about Roy not looking for her in the conference room was real and rough. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I needed some sweet with the bitter.

Cage Match by kyrafic Rated: K+ [Reviews - 5] 5
Summary:

Dwight doesn't know when to let a joke go. Neither does Jim.


Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Slash
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 590 Read Count: 2293 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2006 Updated: July 15, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: July 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fun and Jimtense. Reminds me of "Exactly how much pot did you smoke?!"

Author's Response: Oh, yay, that\'s EXACTLY what I was going for so I\'m so happy you picked up on it. Thank you for the feedback!!

Summary: "I would save the receptionist," he blurted out. Jim POV drabble.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319 Read Count: 2266 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2006 Updated: July 15, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 6
Date: July 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Save Me

Nice moment.

Sense by proudgirl Rated: T [Reviews - 14] 18
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim's internal monologue from "Casino Night" and beyond. Includes the confession and kiss. Each chapter is set to one of the five senses.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11680 Read Count: 13450 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2006 Updated: July 15, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10
Date: July 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Sound

Yay! So excited you've posted this one. Sense was the first fanfic I ever read, and it humbled me. Love it.

West by unfold Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 21
Summary: Written for the Road Trip challenge. "And he doesn’t ask questions now when they’re more than 400 miles into this trip and he still has no idea where he’s going."


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Travel
Warnings: None
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3326 Read Count: 2969 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2006 Updated: July 15, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10
Date: July 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gorgeous! I love Jim POVs, and you've done this so well. In my heart, they keep driving.

Summary: Past Featured StoryIf they were ever going to move forward, Pam knew she would have to be the one to tell Jim she was ready--and she thought Thursday night might be the perfect time to give him the green light. Written for the Road Trip challenge.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Travel
Warnings: None
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3739 Read Count: 10805 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2006 Updated: July 27, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Was that a shout-out to Canary? Hee. This is a fun story - continue!

Author's Response: Yes! I\'m so glad you noticed that.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: August 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

O hot goodness. Nice. :)

Summary: Past Featured StoryA story for the Enclosed Space challenge.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 575 Read Count: 2472 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2006 Updated: July 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"His hand was loosely curled on her shoulder, and when he leaned to say something she could feel his lips brush her hair." Um, yes please! You've created a nice moment here. I like the line about their shoes lining up. And how very like Dwight to call Ryan "the temp" when he's right there in the car. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Jim loves those little moments, too - but they have a way of not lasting, don\'t they?

Summary: New Year's Eve, Pam attends Phyllis' wedding where a surprise guest has been invited.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4744 Read Count: 4923 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2006 Updated: July 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Woo-hoo! Which is probably what I said the first time I reviewed this, but it bears saying again :)

Author's Response: Thank you...again!

Awake by shannanagin Rated: T [Reviews - 14] 13
Summary: Past Featured StoryRoy regrets a lot of things.
Categories: Other, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1929 Read Count: 1795 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2006 Updated: July 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First, I love the second-person POV. It's like someone is making him admit all of this to himself. And I like fics that give Roy more dimension. Nice job :)

Summary: Jim on the Booze Cruise.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 917 Read Count: 1720 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2006 Updated: July 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Sometimes you love her so much that you’re afraid you might start to hate her for all that." This is a great Jim POV. The section about hurting Katy so she can share the pain - terrific.

Summary: Pam and Jim spend their Thursday Nights together.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3340 Read Count: 3674 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2006 Updated: July 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH! The sprinkler scene. Water drops and thumbs on wrists and unclipping barrettes... Eeeee :) Each one of these was perfect. You've created a great range of mood and of tension. Love it.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it. The sprinkler scene grew out of my pure unadulterated need to just write about WetJim. It\'s fun isn\'t it?

Summary: Past Featured StoryOur friends change us in ways that we can't even understand.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1605 Read Count: 1836 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2006 Updated: July 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is beautiful. :)

Author's Response: thank you!

Blame by lano Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 17
Summary: Pam blames the dress.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 923 Read Count: 1822 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2006 Updated: July 16, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: July 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Blame

"Every one except for the only one, and his tongue was silent, but he looked at her like he had always known who she was..." Beautiful (and true!) and your description of Jim opening the package and card was perfect. Great first fic! Now write more!

Author's Response: I can\'t begin to explain how nervous I was to post this. Thank you for the review, you\'re one of my favorite JAM authors.

Package by starstrucklove Rated: K [Reviews - 4] 8
Summary: A couple days before the Wedding, Pam thinks back to Jim and the different events in the past couple months leading up to the Big Day and recieves a special package in the process.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1161 Read Count: 2093 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2006 Updated: July 17, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed
Date: July 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think your last paragraph is your best - it creates a vivid image for the reader. Consider reading back through your story carefully for dropped words, spelling errors, etc. There are several folks here who are happy to serve as beta-readers if you want or need one. Just click Members, then choose Beta-Readers from the dropdown box. I hope you try your hand at Office fic again - the characters are fun to write for!

Mind Games by Smurfette729 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 11] 14
Summary: Pam knows exactly what she does to him.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1231 Read Count: 2542 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2006 Updated: July 17, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: July 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it. I've always thought that Pam knew exactly what she was doing when she took her hair down for Kelly. I can see Pam thinking all of these thoughts, even if another inner voice then told her she was being a little cruel. I was relieved that Jim was the groom at the end - if he'd been a guest, the thoughts would definitely have been cruel. Good Pam POV!

Author's Response: I would never do that to you! Well, actually I considered it, but I thought it would be too mean. :)

Fore by mixedberries Rated: K+ [Reviews - 11] 13
Summary: Dunder Mifflin holds a golf tournament. "You realize that all those feelings you thought you left in Scranton haven’t disappeared at all." Jim POV
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1961 Read Count: 1936 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2006 Updated: July 17, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: July 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Fore

Love the 2nd-person narration. Nice Jim POV. (*dying to know what happens tomorrow*)

In a Jam by xoxoxo Rated: K+ [Reviews - 17] 14
Summary: Past Featured StoryHeehee. Pun intended. Response to the Road Trip Challenge. Jim and Pam sit in traffic...then...they don't.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2098 Read Count: 4115 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2006 Updated: July 17, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9
Date: July 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooo, you captured that horrible post-argument tension perfectly. Made my tummy hurt. But then...magic fingers!!! I love Pam's epiphany. Yay :)

Author's Response: Mine too. heehee. Magic fingers was my favorite part. Someday I may have to elaborate. ;)

The Umbrella by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 21] 24
Summary: Jim and Pam run an errand.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Fluff, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: None
Challenges: Confined Spaces, Rain
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1254 Read Count: 3495 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2006 Updated: July 17, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 6
Date: July 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute! (And poor Stanley)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Summary:

He's so tired and everything's happening so fast.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 710 Read Count: 3281 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2006 Updated: July 18, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Jim POV. You can feel his weariness.

Summary: A conversation between two people on their way to becoming "more than that".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1303 Read Count: 4225 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2006 Updated: July 18, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG I LOVE THE SEXY TALK!!! Sorry to shout, but holy crap - that was...really enjoyable :) Just the thought of Jim making that last promise? *shudder* Um, sequel, please.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I do have a sequel planned.

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim dies of boredom, yes, again. Takes place after "Booze Cruise".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Confined Spaces, Rain
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1894 Read Count: 4325 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2006 Updated: July 18, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Revival of the Fittest

Love these two lines: "...she slides her hand into his and locks their fingers together, mentally swallowing the key..." and "...and if he didn't make her feel like the person she's always wanted to be..."

And this one gave me a jolt - "she...kneels down in front of him, gently easing his knees apart to make room..."

Fun alternate ending :)

Author's Response: I\'m living vicariously, I guess. Thanks for reviewing :)

Finally by tabitha Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 12
Summary: She'd waited so long for this day, and it had finally arrived.
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Pam, Roy
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 797 Read Count: 1682 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2006 Updated: July 19, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice moments! I love the exchange between Roy and his brother.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Summary: In response to the Stranded challenge. A flat tire leaves Jim and Pam alone in the woods.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Stranded
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1487 Read Count: 3193 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2006 Updated: July 19, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 6
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really liked this line: "He silently begs everything in the world to keep still so that he can keep this moment,..."

Linger by tabitha Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 7
Summary: One-shot, end of Casino Night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1032 Read Count: 1257 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2006 Updated: July 19, 2006
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7
Date: July 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Said it before, saying it again. Jim's whisper is f***ing intense!! Gah! Chills.

Author's Response: Thanks again, nomadshan :)