Penname: ammogirl Real name: treena williams
Member Since: May 14, 2007

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Summary: Past Featured StoryJim's almost gotten used to narrating his life into a camera lens for the consumption of strangers. Like having a blog, but more embarrassing.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Romance, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11663 Read Count: 20557 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2006 Updated: July 14, 2006
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: November 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jimmy legs is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. 

I really loved this one! 

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim receives a gift the day after Christmas. And then another one the next day. And again for the 10 days after. Is it a joke, or has his True Love come forward?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66510 Read Count: 86655 ePub Downloads: 28
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2006 Updated: January 20, 2007
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: August 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: On The Eighth Day of Christmas

So, I had to run and post this review immediately without even finishing the chapter...Lou Lou!  Oh my god!  It's my favorite perfume, I started wearing it as a teenager in England, and the last time I left there I brought back 4 big bottles...which ran out years ago.  And then not one month ago, I was returning to Germany from the States, and in the duty free shop, what do I find?  Cacherel's Lou Lou.

Oh, also, I love this story :) 

Summary: Past Featured Story

"It seems odd, in the ironic, slap-in-the-face kind of way that since her incident, it’s been easier to let him go."

Something bad happens to Pam. Very Dark.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35653 Read Count: 92889 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2007 Updated: January 26, 2008
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: August 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Hate

Sorry life has been so crazy for you, but so glad you updated!  I can't believe how much I have been looking forward to an update of a Pam rape story but you are addressing it so well.  And like so many of the other chapters, this one had me in tears for most of it.  

Can't wait to see what comes next. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

MEMBER'S CHOICE - An alternate universe where Pam and Roy had a wedding, Pam goes to art school in New York, Dwight owns a restaurant and Jim works for a job in advertising that he likes a lot more and gets a lot more money at.
Basically? Dunder Mifflin never exists. And everyone meets under different circumstances.

The characters are pretty much the same -- personality-wise -- they just have different roles and work different jobs.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Creed, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Pam, Roy, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Holiday, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67523 Read Count: 136218 ePub Downloads: 17
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2007 Updated: June 15, 2007
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: June 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: Calm Before the Storm: The Ex Factor

Because of C & W I have turned into a serial refresher.  If I pay you a million Schrute bucks will you do nothing but post chapter after chapter?  

Seriously...you are fabulous.

Summary: Past Featured Story

“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly.  Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33558 Read Count: 116123 ePub Downloads: 31
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2007 Updated: July 24, 2007
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Date: July 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts

Oh my god. I sometimes forget that I am reading about Jim and Pam, because the way you describe and detail everything is so real.  When Jim saw his sweatshirt on Pam, and the only-ness of those two at that exact moment in time...that was every moment I've ever had like that, ever, all at once.  Its not cheesy, and its not over-the-top, and I definitely, definitely love this story.

Author's Response: thank you I'm soo glad it isn't cheesy, cause there's always a little bit of a risk with stuff like this.  So thanks so much!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed
Date: July 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Burn and beat

Okay, I was a little nervous at Pam's initial lack of spine, but she pulled through!  Count me in as loving it!

Author's Response: lol counted! thank you!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: July 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Mom and Muhammad Ali

Sooo...I just realized I could not only review stories, but RATE them as well!  Mark is so inappropriately appropriate...the perfect roommate.  "I'm in love with you"...that was so good, out of the blue, after all that, in that setting.  

You write so real, like...you know how some people can draw a portrait, and it looks like someone drew a portrait, but then some people draw and it looks like a photograph, because the details are so good and its so true to life?  You write like that.   

Its fabulous. 



Author's Response: wow thank you!!!!!! I know exactly what you mean about some people who can paint like photographs, and that is such a huge compliment to my writing.  Thank you thank you thank you!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: July 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Stories and Pam

Awww Stablergirl thank you for this story.  I just love it so much, and I'm sad that its over but glad it ended when and how it did, and I will definitely go back and read it anytime I need something to fix my mood.  Also, can you write MY love life too?  Just kidding.  Sort of.

Author's Response:

LOL!! I ask myself that every day...  But hmm...ammogirl and Jim Halpert? maybe?  I'll consider that ;-)

Summary:

What would have happened if Jim had been a little later getting back to the office?


Categories: Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: David Wallace, Dwight, Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Challenges: Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15236 Read Count: 44784 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2007 Updated: January 29, 2008
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Date: July 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh jeez...crying into my coffee.  This chapter and the last...phew.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim and Pam's first date, using the constraints of the 55 word challenge.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 589 Read Count: 3789 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2007 Updated: July 10, 2007
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed
Date: July 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Their First Date In 55 Word Moments

Can you please please PLEASE expand this into a full story?  It really is so perfectly written.  

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I don't think it would work as a longer, regular story. But I appreciate the thought and the review.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year or two before the cameras arrived, Michael takes the staff to the Poconos for a camaraderie event.  Much unresolved sexual tension and angst ensues (uh, between Jim & Pam, not the entire staff).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Angela, Creed, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Roy, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90021 Read Count: 139925 ePub Downloads: 50
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2007 Updated: October 02, 2007
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Date: July 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

I don't know how you guys do it, this exceptionally spot-on characterization and dialogue.  Why are you not spending every moment producing more chapters?  Why?

Author's Response:

Ha - believe me, if I could make a living writing this stuff, I would be happy as a clam to spend all day every day writing and writing and writing....  But alas, haven't won the lottery yet.  (And, uh, it's not looking likely that I will, given the fact that I don't actaully play....)

Thanks so much for the review - and I'll be updating it this weekend!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed
Date: July 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Sacred Geometry of Chance

God, poor Jim...it just never stops, the wanting to scream at Pam and tell her to get a move on.  I wish just once that Pam was a bad girl.

Author's Response:

I know.  Seriously, if we fanfic writers could be prosecuted for doing mean things to the characters, I'd be doing a life sentence for what I do to poor Jim, ha.  But JK plays angst/desire so well that I just can't help myself.

And I am so with you on the Pam as a bad girl thing....

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: July 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Running To Stand Still

Wow, Pam thinking she's not good enough for Jim...I have never thought of it that way, ever.  Silly, silly Pam.  

It almost hurts to see her walk away from that, and makes me a little angry at her.  I mean, sure, what she and Roy have is comfy and known, but it really is only half of what she could have, at least.  

I want to yell at her, and then I realize...oh yeah, story.  



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's one of those moments in the text that just sort of...came out.  But I could see her thinking that, particularly after having been with Roy for SUCH a long time, you know? 

And hey - I'm glad you want to yell at her even though it's just a story!  :o) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: August 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Doors You Opened I Just Can't Close

Ahh...so NOT the ending I was preparing myself for.  Its really perfect as it stands...but I still can't wait for the AU chapters!  Yay!

Author's Response:

Hee -- well, the AU may take you in the direction you were expecting.... :o)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: August 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: *Chapter 11: Sometimes You Can't Make It Best You Can Do Is To Fake It

Please tell me these AU endings are not one-shots! 

It speaks volumes that Pam is immediately pissed...I totally believe that subconciously she's not even upset, just relieved.  This is her chance!  Go Pam!

 



Author's Response:

They are absolutely not one-shots; I'm generally constitutionally averse to writing one-shots (though I've managed to do a few, hee). 

And (in my version, at least), you're totally right -- I don't think she'd be angry or even really upset...would be too distracted by trying to figure out how to find her way to Jim's apartment....

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: September 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: There's No Chance For Us; It's All Decided For Us

I should hate having to go through this tunnel first but I can't, because even the parts I don't want to read are done so well I can't deny it.  I am so glad you warned us, though!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much -- seriously.  I worry about how dark this one has gotten, so it's good to hear that you're enjoying the ride...sort of, LOL.  (Happy ending guaranteed, I promise!  ...That sounds like a "massage parlor" slogan, doesn't it?  Hee.)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: What the Head Makes Cloudy the Heart Makes Very Clear

You have the next chapter all ready to post, right?  Right?

I can't wait until the AU is finished so I can go back and read it all at once :) 



Author's Response:

Well I'm pathetically behind on my review responses, so the next chapter in question has already been posted.  ...And the one after that is absolutely giving me fits.  :o) 

In any case -- am shooting to finish this before the premiere (fingers crossed)....

Thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

While MTT was down for a brief time one night, I wrote a couple 55 word fics in the TWOP thread about Jim and Pam reading fanfic. I will likely continue this as a long running series, referencing my favorite stories and also newer stories as they come about.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1180 Read Count: 50673 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2007 Updated: October 04, 2013
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed
Date: July 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Mistakes

Poor Pam, I wonder if she knew how deviant she really was?  There's a lot of smut out there for them to discover!

This is such a fabulous idea! 



Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the comment!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A glimpse into the instant messaging history of Jim and Pam. Written with the intention of expanding on what we see on the show, as well as to tie up some loose ends. There will be a conversation for each episode through Season 3.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Helene Beesly, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Larissa Halpert, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Instant Messaging
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16909 Read Count: 239353 ePub Downloads: 19
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: December 27, 2016
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: August 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: Performance Review

I've loved all the chapters but this one really made me laugh.  I can so totally see Jim trying to get Pam to say a different name!

Author's Response: Yeah, he's a teaser like that, but it also totally flirtacious. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: September 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 51: Beach Games

This one brought a tear to my eye.  Yay for Jim's realization!  I actually had to read that bit twice, the first time through I was like, heyyyy...good job on that.

I've really loved this series, and am a little sad it's ending soon!



Author's Response: Yeah, it's been really fun, but it will be archived here on MTT and always ready to be read again ;-)

Summary: Past Featured Storytheir flaws might just doom them.

(first bits are Jim reflecting on some sadness. it will eventually lead to 'first date' business.. and smut)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11067 Read Count: 65000 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2007 Updated: August 31, 2007
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: August 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: i've got your wedding bells in my ear

oh god, you stabbed me in the heart with "You wouldn't have to be scared".  

I am so glad I find myself with tons of free time and this story!  And is it bad that I sort of like the lame, sad flashbacky jim stuff?  Its really good!

Summary: Pam's having some serious hormonal issues. Me thinks you'll figure out what's up with her before she does.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3330 Read Count: 5068 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2007 Updated: November 10, 2007
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: November 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw.  This is totally how Jim finding out Pam is pregnant could go.  I love dialogue filled stories, I always read them twice, once like a table read, and the next as the final shoot :)  

I loved it! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad to hear that it warranted a second read :)

Summary: Sometimes he thinks about Pam, and the memories are faded and ragged around the edges, like photographs handled too often.
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 626 Read Count: 2422 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2007 Updated: December 05, 2007
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: December 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was the best death fic I've ever read.  That was seriously a huge dose of something very good.  

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Roy was lying when he said he'd never cheated on Pam?  What if Pam was always a little less healthy than she let on?  What if everything, everywhere, is only meant to fall apart?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31793 Read Count: 67605 ePub Downloads: 20
[Report This] Published: February 16, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2008
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: February 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Don't think.

As it always is with your writing, this story had me eating up the page with my eyes.  You are SO GOOD.  Fluff, sex, angst, every day crap--all the words you write are so real.  Not just 'real Jim and Pam' but real people--ANYONE can relate to the characters you create.  

Do you have an idea where this one is going?  Or are you finding out when we do, sort of? 



Author's Response: Ugh what an amazing review this is! Any writer would die for someone to say this to them, thank you so much.  And yeah I have some ideas about where it's going, but nothing too strictly planned because I like for the paths to kind of create themselves.  Hopefully it'll work out the way I want it to ;-)

Summary: Jim and Pam battle through the summer after Season 3, with a little help from some friends.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam
Genres: Childhood, Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10546 Read Count: 8973 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2009
Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10
Date: July 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Bow

I was just thinking, where the hell is Stablergirl? When poof!  I got a new story notification in my inbox.  I'm already completely drawn in to this one!  Can't wait to see how the story unfolds.

Author's Response: lol I'm here!! Glad you're liking this and hopefully the rest of the story will draw you in even more ;-)