Post-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.I was just rereading this story the other day. Really happy to see more of it. This chapter was, like the others, a real treat to read
Author's Response: oh, thanks so much! I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment. :-)
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Very sweet. I'm glad I read this. Hope you write more stories
Very sweet. Why does nobody ever sing anything from the Velvet Underground or Big Star, though. Never once in all of these stories is there somebody listening to Sunday Morning or Ballad of El Goodo. Sigh. The Creed bit was really spot on. Thank goodness he avoided his namesake band.
MEMBER'S CHOICE - "Here’s the thing Jim, sometimes being in love means doing things you don’t want to do for the other person. For you, right now, it means just being her friend. And I think you’re selling yourself short, you are strong enough to do this."
Jim gets some much needed advice about Pam and a little push in the right direction from Mark's girlfriend Jane. Spoilers through the Negotiation.Very nice. Love the way the story is building
Author's Response: Thank you, right back at your about your fic!
Very fitting end to a terrific story! Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: I'm sorry I didn't respond timely....thanks for the review malcolm....any chance we'll see more from you soon?
A Jim Pov. A little spoilery, as I used the Official Title at NBC, to assume one small point. It's fluffy and sugary. My official warning is:It May Cause Cavities. Proceed at your own risk
Very nice. I enjoyed how you let things slowly build between them. This also lacks the bitter dialoque a lot of folks put into the start of Jim and Pam's dating.
Ok, all us Jammers are happy about "The Job", and we know that in truth, it was good for Pam to "Grow a pair" (in Michael's terms) and have some time to figure stuff out on her own. But what if we just sped things up a bit? What if she gained that boldness sonner rather than later?
Spoilers through Casino Night, and (soon... when I finish...) through all of Season 3, including The Job!!! intrigued? Good. Come back soon to see the completion...
There's nothing wrong with fanfic fluff. If you want reality, open a window. I like the Jim/Pam banter, and I think it was a good choice to focus on them, not the chaos of the merger.
Loved the idea of how Pam wanted to associate Jim with her favorite place. Very nice
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed that.
Very Cool. I like how you're setting things up and it fits with the characters. Really hope you continue the story
Author's Response: I'll definitely continue. This one doesn't end until the series ends. Thanks for the comment!
I like that Jim and Pam are now together. Of course, that gives them options other than teambuilding for the next episode (the fire). There has to be a place where they can find a minute or two to themselves.
Very nice touch with the text message. Although you know Kelly would try to look over Pam's shoulder. Thanks for writing another installment
I really like the way you wrote Pam in this story. She's has to be a bright person to pull off the things she does on the show, so it stands to reason she should have this degree of self-awareness.
Author's Response:
I really appreciate that. Pam is one of my favorite characters on tv. I think she resonates so well with the audience because she is so believable. I'm glad you think I captured some of that. :)
I really appreciate that. Pam is one of my favorite characters on tv. I think she resonates so well with the audience because she is so believable. I'm glad you think I captured some of that. :)
I have to say that I sincerely hope that nobody ever tries to make your life difficult. From this story, your vengeance would be swift, brutal, and devastatingly efficient. So well done.
“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly. Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.
Really liked this, especially Pam finally standing up for herself with Roy. Also, how neither Jim nor Pam felt safe even talking about what was going on afterwards-very in character
Chapter one: Yes it's that first official date! That nervre wrecking first date......maybe not that nerve wrecking......
Chapter two: And now what? Need a towel?
Nice story. I admire anyone who tries to write creatively in a second language. It's hard for me and I only know one. I like the way you described things, you have a very visual writing style that's well suited to the story.
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Some how I find it easier to write this kind of stuff in english than in my own language.... weird.
I have a very vivid imagination, drives me nuts most of the time, but in thise case I got it working for me. =)
It's Valentines Day. Creed has been invited to a poker party. Now if he could just find it....
Love the Creed reality you created. Thanks for taking us inside his mind, and we're all going to be blaming you for our nightmares the journey will surely cause
This chapter was really nice. I think it's more true to the characters than the stories where Jim and Pam go straight to the sex part the day of the interview. I like the descriptions and the character interaction. The paragraph formatting makes it a little hard to read, but the story is so worth the effort.
Jim/Pam - The Job onwards. Going through the motions. Love the descriptions and the quiet grace of the writing. Nothing overdone and nothing wasted. Wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I decided to tone things down and keep them quiet - that\'s much of the essence of Jim and Pam, anyway.
Truth: You love him, and you can't deny it.
Dare: Step out of your shell and tell him.
Pam contemplates her life in two options, truth or dare.
Wow - that's a truly nasty dare. It will be interesting to see how this unfolds. Thanks for writing this.
Author's Response: I had such a hard time coming up with truth or dares, but I\'m glad you seem to be enjoying it.
Jim isn't inviting Pam to the Christmas Eve party he and Karen are holding. Three ghosts visit him the night before the big party and try to bring him to his senses. Will he listen to them, or will he convince himself that it is all a figment of his imagination and leave things the way they are?
I guess this is kind of AU?
Okay "pleasee review! constructive critisism is welcome!" You typed that really fast, didn't you. I love how this chapter turned out. Like the uncertainty and the absence of rancor. If you want me to look at the next bit, just let me know.
Author's Response: yes i ded! hahaa, and tank you. i will def. be asking you to review my next chapter because you are amazing at those sort of things [:
Jim, Pam, and Jim's brother Jon are visiting New York when something happens. Something that nobody would ever expect..
You're back! Thanks for the kind words and for posting. I really like this story and hope the play is going well - ken
Author's Response: thank YOU! ahh the play is going well. we have an IDR [invitational dress rehersal: we perform for an audience, but they don't have to pay full price because maybe not everybody is in full costume, or the lighting isn't yet complete] today, tuesday, and wed. and then opening night is thursday. we perform straight until the 23, so i'm hoping i will still be able to update! i'm going to try. your recent stories have been GREAT!
What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?
“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.
Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?
Really nice. You deserve all the rainbows and sunshine you've been getting for this story. Don't know what Dwight would say when asked about maximum happiness. Probably a Battlestar Galactica marathon.
Author's Response: LoL,I bet you're right malcom. He would have some sort of fantastic answer, I'm sure :)
I'm enjoying this story so much. I like the characters you added and the slow building of the friendship into something more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate that!
Like the story. Small nit, it's "your" car and "you're" for "You're not a..." Hope you write more.
Author's Response:
okay thank you I usually do not not make many grammar mistakes but I wrote this at 1 am so...
I'm glad you liked it and I will most definetely change that!
Thanks again!
Really liked this. I wasn't sure if you were veering off in to AU or not. This would fill in the blanks nicely in the email surveillance episode. Great job!
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