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Their First Date In 55 Word Moments by Swedge Rated: K+ [Reviews - 41] 23
Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim and Pam's first date, using the constraints of the 55 word challenge.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 589 Read Count: 4542 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2007 Updated: July 10, 2007
Reviewer: realitycheck Signed
Date: July 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Their First Date In 55 Word Moments

Wow.  I never review but I had to this time.  This is great..I LOVE how you captured them so perfectly.  The sofa and the wager moments were simply awesome.

Sound of Love by BeckySue Rated: K+ [Reviews - 42] 7
Summary:

A series of stories based around the lyrics to my favorite John Mayer songs.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12581 Read Count: 17169 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2007 Updated: September 23, 2007
Reviewer: realitycheck Signed
Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Only Heart

I would love to see Split Screen Sadness: " Maybe I'll sleep inside my coat and
Wait on your porch 'til you come back home, alright"

Author's Response: YES!!! That's actually one that I've already considered and put into a word document. I'll see what I can do with that one!!! Hope you enjoyed this chapter!

Looking For Mr. Halpert by morethanthat Rated: Private [Reviews - 17] 8
Summary: Pam goes on five dates. Rated T
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Other, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Slash
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2065 Read Count: 3596 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2007 Updated: September 02, 2007
Reviewer: realitycheck Signed
Date: September 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pam turns her head slightly, just a little, to look at him out of the corner of her eye. She notices that her first impulse is to dismiss him via a joke (Oh yeah? Special occasion, Halpert?), but she suppresses that urge because that’s not the only way she wants them to be.

Brilliant. 



Author's Response: thanks! i\'m glad everyone seemed to like that part - it was one of those moments that popped out of nowhere and really worked.

Hello, Goodbye by shootingstars Rated: K [Reviews - 90] 47
Summary: Past Featured Story Completed

“Are you free for dinner tonight?” (Hello)

"Yes." (Hello)

For a long time it's just missed opportunities and crossed wires.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14247 Read Count: 28902 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2007 Updated: January 07, 2008
Reviewer: realitycheck Signed
Date: January 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: The Job

"They’re not exactly as they were.

They’re more than that."

To use one of the more common signature lines from the Jim/Pam arc in a way that both caught me off-guard and made me smile was outstanding.  Please write more! 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I\"m so glad you noticed that line because it might well be my favourite line from this chapter, and was actually added at the last minute. Thanks :)

The Part Where You Let Go by PamPongChamp Rated: MA [Reviews - 56] 27
Summary: Grief can turn you into someone you don't recognize. Jim struggles silently through what should be one of the happiest moments of his life.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Married, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5154 Read Count: 18027 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2008 Updated: June 02, 2008
Reviewer: realitycheck Signed
Date: May 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: I Still See You There

"Damn it Daniels."  I could not agree more!

Quiet by shootingstars Rated: K [Reviews - 31] 21
Summary:

It’s been a week to the day since he burst into the conference room and started the rest of his life.

Spoilers for Chair Model

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3082 Read Count: 4566 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2008 Updated: April 22, 2008
Reviewer: realitycheck Signed
Date: April 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Quiet

If you find any person out there who thinks Jim's purchase a week after he started dating Pam weird, just point them to this story.  I think this captures what I believe to be their post-The Job backstory perfectly.  Great work.

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you, I\'m so glad you think it\'d be worth pointing out to anyone at all. Thanks for reading :)

Greg Daniels is a Sadist by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 40] 26
Summary: There's a bit the documentary crew didn't catch in the finale. (Spoilers for S4 Finale)

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4241 Read Count: 9492 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 16, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: realitycheck Signed
Date: May 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Tuna!

Since the finale yanked my chain so hard to where I no longer care about the show, I applaud you writing what SHOULD have happened.  Thank you Mox for this.

Author's Response: Anytime, realitycheck!!!  Hope the bruises from the chain-yanking are starting to heal.  :-)