Pam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails. 
10 I don't have any brilliant observations to make, and I certainly won't attempt to offer a critique. Also, there's too much good going on here to try and list. So I'm just going to sum it up by saying thanks for writing this. Really, thanks.
That was great. You picked a simple but meaningful item and really explored the differences between Jim's old life with Pam and his recent one with Karen. And you resisted the temptation to reference Michael's one-time nickname for him: Jimbag!
26 Begun out of hiatus frustration as an exploration of what we might miss of Jim and Pam's newfound romance, this has grown into something unique and cool, a multi-authored exercise in creativity and obsession.
By the way, we talk about it here if you're interested in saying hi.
Can we comment on our own story? Because that was delicious.
Just fantastic, VB. Such great detail, and the pacing was really well done, building up to the birthday gift. Well worth the wait.