“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly. Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.
7 Very good...but tense. Bring back the sexy, please : )
10 So poetic and wonderful..."deliciously human…blessedly ethereal"--love it. Well done.
Author's Response: thank you
unfold and I were talking and it lead to this, somehow.
Jim/Pam Smutcake.
8 I thought it was pretty dang good!
10 I'm grinning from ear to ear. Fantastic! I didn't want it to end! (I know...TWSS...sorry)
A collection of loosely-related moments (more like a bunch of one shots than a WIP. So jump in and out as you like.) Unapologetic smuff.10 Hot and tasty, Colette : )
Author's Response: Hee! That's high praise when it comes to smuff-cake, NanReg - thanks so much!
Pre “The Job”… actually, pre a lot of stuff. Set sometime in Season Three, I guess.
Pam decides to take matters into her own hands.8 Great chapter!
Author's Response: thanks!
A response to the 55 challenge! (Don't own any of the characters...)
Oops! I added the next chapter of Cardiac Care to this story by accident. Sorry.
8 This is a chocolate truffle of a fic! What a great image, VB.
9 Happy to have discovered this sweet, sentimental story and so happy our favorite couple is finally living their dreams :)
He ate Frosted Cheerios and watched ESPN highlights in the living room while she sipped her tea silently in the kitchen, contemplating the ways she could tell him she was leaving.
A Pam POV fic, with vague spoilers through season 2, I suppose.
8 I have to say, I love the descriptions of his jeans--very distracting : ) I love the tension. A fine job.
Author's Response: A man in low jeans and no underpants is something I've definitely been distracted by before! Thanks :)
8 Nice, indeed : )
Author's Response: Thank you :)
What would have happened if Jim had been a little later getting back to the office?
8 OK. I have to admit. As well written as the first couple chapters were, I couldn't read anymore because it made me too sad, and sad hinders my productivity at work, right? So, I see that there's an update and I think, "Hmmm...don't quite remember this one. Let's start from the beginning." I'm so very glad I did. More soon, please?
A year or two before the cameras arrived, Michael takes the staff to the Poconos for a camaraderie event. Much unresolved sexual tension and angst ensues (uh, between Jim & Pam, not the entire staff).
9 Keep going!!! That was great--very tense!
Author's Response:
Yay - glad you liked it! And I'm working on it as we speak, will update soon....
Thanks for the review!
Very good. Tense! Keep going!
Author's Response: Yay - tension's what I'm going for, so thanks! More's on the way.... (Is TWSS?)
9 Wow...just, wow. Great ending.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
9 Whew! I need a drink or a nap or something! That was INTENSE!
Author's Response: Heh -- I would totally offer you a nice glass of white wine, but.... LOL So glad you enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Heh -- I would totally offer you a nice glass of white wine, but.... LOL So glad you enjoyed it!
9 My heart's in my throat. Boy oh boy.
Author's Response: That's what I'm goin' for, baby! :o) Thanks so much for reviewing this so faithfully -- I really appreciate that!
9 It was a pleasant surprise to see another chapter! Really good--another intense one.
8 Nice! "Big Apple"--I love it : )
Author's Response: Thanks! I just had been watching The Return and the "Big Turkey" comment, and as soon as I thought of the term Big Apple for NYC, I could just hear Andy saying, "Hey, Big Apple!"
9 Nice twist. You really have done a good job. I can't believe it's your first effort! I hope you continue.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have about one more chapter plus an epilogue of this to write, then I imagine I will keep writing as the ideas come as I\'m really enjoying the writing.
What if Jim and Pam erased all memories of each other? Would they be able to start again? How would Roy and Karen react? Set post-Season Two and loosely based off ideas from the film "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind."
10 Questionforyou, I've been obsessed with this fic since discovering it via rec in the forum. Stellar job. Really beautiful. And thanks for the happy ending :)
While experiencing writer's block for "Grow a Pair," I thought, "what about the other moments when Pam could have "made things right" so to speak? There were plenty of times in Season 2, but for the sake of my ADD, I will limit myself to Season 3 so I won't get bored and never finish.
Basically, each chapter (or series of chapters, when stated) is a brief "what if" of episodes in S3 when Pam could've been bolder and made things right with Jim, or when Jim could've made one different choice, and kept things "open" with Pam.
8 Good one! Thanks : )
8 Oh, if only that's the way it happened! Great job.
7 Good job!
A pool party and a shirtless Jim. Need I say more?
Another story in the series - Jim Halpert: More Than the Sum of His Parts
8 Loved it! Such a fun little story : )
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it, NanReg - thanks for the review!
Jim and Pam and two telephones, post-Season 3.10 I SO LOVE THIS STORY!!! I wish this could continue indefinitely : )