Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
September 20, 2007
Chapter 18: Chapter 18: And Fate Has Led You Through It You Do What You Have To Do
Oh, Pam. So close to what really needed to be said.
I loved the tension. I love the crying and the heartbreaking angst. You are so good at this. I wish Pam had said more, but I get why she didn't. Just amazing work.
Gah - thank you! Let me tell you (as if this is a newsflash): I absolutely love writing the angst, and I do not know why (totally hate drama in my "real" life, hee). But I worried that this might be over the top, always worry that it's over the top when Pam cries.
I remember reading a comment from when I first started writing and posting Office fanfic (over a year ago), and the person (it was a message board type thing, not a review) was criticizing what I'd written, saying that Pam is not a crier. Even though I'd beg to differ -- the pilot, "Boys and Girls," "Back From Vacation," and "The Job" (granted, some of those happened after the criticism) - I still pause every time I write a weepy Pam scene.
So it's nice to hear you say you enjoyed it! (A long rambling way to saying that...) :o)
Thanks for reviewing!