Penname: JennInTheCity Real name: Jenn
Member Since: July 01, 2007

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Summary: Jim must deal with a family crisis.  Pam helps him to get through it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79354 Read Count: 184369 ePub Downloads: 47
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2011
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: July 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: PDA at Lunch!

Aw, I've never had a chapter dedicated to me before - thanks!

Cute bit with their "fans" and the "beautiful" remark. I love that Pam gets it when something's bothering Jim. I can't wait to see him figure out why that is.

Author's Response: You're welcome, JITC!  Our obtuse Jim will get it eventually!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: July 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Guest Accommodations

Ha! I love that Jim didn't think about the "one room" when Nelani mentioned it. I mean, I know he wouldn't e thinking about that, but it was still funny to watch him realize it. Now he just needs to sweep that girl in his arms and kiss the hell out of her ;)

Author's Response:

I'm planning to drag this baby out for some more chapters ... I'm afraid you'll have to wait a while for the sweeping, young lady!  Hopefully, the chapters will be good enough that you think it was worth the wait!

Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: July 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Conversations with God, Parents and the Walker Man

Lovely chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you, JennInTheCity!  I hope to have the next one up tonight or tonmorrow.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: July 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: She Felt Whole

Oh, I love the image! Can't wait to see what happens when they wake up :)

Author's Response: Hi, JITC!  Thanks very much.  ...You do realize there will be more medical stuff when they're back in the hospital, right?  You'll cut me some slack?  :-)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Phone Call

Re-reviewing like a dork, but I'm reading this all the way through again. Just wanted to say "Hi!" I had forgotten it was set in DC (my hometown), which is always super fun to read about ;)

Author's Response:

I didn't know your city was DC?  Are you from there or do you live there now?  I live about an hour outside.

Glad to have you back!!  I'll be interested to hear what you think of all the new chapters that were posted since you left us.  (Not so much medical stuff, you'll be happy to see...  I remember you never liked that aspect of the story so much.)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 8
Date: February 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Not a Bad Day

Wow, glad to see an update of this story! Loved this chapter :) So glad Jim's life is looking up and the medical stuff was hilarious! Can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: Hey, JITC!  Thanks for the feedback.  I have to mark my calendar!  I think this is the first time you liked any of the medical stuff!  :-)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: You're a Piece of Work, Halpert

Love having a chapter of this story to greet me now that MTT is back. And it's the Karen chapter! Great work! Can't wait for the Jim/Pam confrontation now that everything is out there - or almost everything :)

Author's Response:

Yes, a "discussion" will ensue sometime in the foreseeable future...

Thanks a lot for leaving a note.

Mercy by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 16] 5
Summary:

Their first date gets derailed. Somehow, that's OK.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: Postponed But Not Forgotten
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 899 Read Count: 3512 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: January 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fabulous! Love them together at the emergency room ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! Not the most conventionally romantic setting, but with these two, anything is romantic (fabric softener, yogurt lids, beet farms...)

Summary: In science, the term "observer effect" refers to changes that the act of observing will make on the phenomenon being observed.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Other, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, Married, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19046 Read Count: 17064 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: January 25, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: January 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: My, she was yar.

Interesting beginning and premise! I'm intrigued to see where this goes from here :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Providence by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 11] 6
Summary: Cheesecake and conversation as Jim and Pam make the most of a business trip getaway.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3003 Read Count: 3517 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: January 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

What a cute story! I really liked that one!

Summary:

You don't want to wake up one day and realize that both of you are unhappy because you weren't the person he thought you were. There's no way you can compete with Fantasy Pam.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2688 Read Count: 4474 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 26, 2008 Updated: January 26, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: January 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story and fab parallel to Gatsby. I could totally see how it would be hard for Pam to be with Jim, knowing how long he's wanted her.

Author's Response: I can't imagine how you would react to someone being that in love with you for years, it would be really surreal. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: She suspects something: an Enchanted-inspired story.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2778 Read Count: 12642 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2008 Updated: February 04, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: February 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Wear your favorite color just so he can match your eyes

Oh, their kids would have the most beautiful eyes! Happy sigh!

Summary:

A phone call interrupts their Valentine's Day date.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 266 Read Count: 3389 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2008 Updated: January 28, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: January 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha! That's awesome!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I can totally see Jim thinking he's funny, trying to trick  her, can't you? I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: Michael's been deposed and Jan's betrayed his trust and now they're throwing a dinner party...how did Jim and Pam get roped into this? 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10889 Read Count: 6174 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2008 Updated: January 28, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: January 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 "More Dessert"

Oh, that was really sweet! I can really see this happening on the show :)

Author's Response: Thank you.  I struggled a bit with a reason why Jan and Michael would throw the dinner party in the aftermath of The Deposition, but I thought my scenario had some plausibility.  Glad to learn that you, and maybe some others think it  could be possile, too.  I'm obviously anxious to see the actaul episode play out when the show returns.  Thanks again for your kind words.

Summary: Past Featured StoryTwo days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291222 ePub Downloads: 96
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: January 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I always love when I see your name on a story, so I'm excited for the next part ;)

Author's Response: What a sweet thing to say -- thanks!  :o) Hope you like the next chapter -- and thanks again for taking the time to review.  :o)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: March 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, wow, this is setting up beautifully! I simply love the tension you've built and how heartbreakingly painful it is. I cannot wait to see the car ride home. Excellent work!

Author's Response:

Yay, I'm glad you think so!  I was afraid the bit with Roy asking Jim to take her home would come off as too contrived.  I just couldn't resist the urge to throw them together -- alone -- in a situation wherein they can't escape it all that easily.  I'll be posting an update in a few hours, so....

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh this is SO good! Wow, I did not expect Pam to jump him (even with the promised of steam), but it was fabulous! I TOTALLY understand why she's acting the way she is, even though it's infuriating. And poor, poor Jim! Vacillating between wanted to throttle her and wanting to jump her has got to be killing him.

CANNOT wait for more!

Author's Response:

Gah, it is such an incredible relief to read that you found her reaction believable -- I swear, when I sent this chapter to my beta, one of the first concerns I expressed to her was whether or not Pam's reaction was believable, and even if it was, would it be too alienating for the readers (meaning would readers really just not like her after that).  So it's such a relief to have validation on that. 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: April 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh, I love this ending to "Drug Testing" even more than the original - I didn't think that was possible!

I really like what you are doing with this piece. I re-read the whole thing at work on Friday (minus this latest chapter) and I just loved how it flowed and how the brothers really work with Jim. Just great job overall!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, Jenn; I hadn't intended on working in any of the later episodes, but I've found myself sort of falling into that. 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: April 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh, that was just lovely! I love that Pam isn't quite sure of herself just quite yet, but she's really really close to getting there. Their goodbye was just the sweetest thing ever!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jenn!  Yeah, she's on her way to getting it together (with Jim, of course).  :o) So glad you enjoyed this!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jenn!  Yeah, she's on her way to getting it together (with Jim, of course).  :o) So glad you enjoyed this!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jenn!  Yeah, she's on her way to getting it together (with Jim, of course).  :o) So glad you enjoyed this!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jenn!  Yeah, she's on her way to getting it together (with Jim, of course).  :o) So glad you enjoyed this!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: April 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

First of all, way to weave in 'Conflict Resolution' but make it way less angsty for our dynamic duo!

I love them just making out in the hallway to the bathrooms and just having to get out of there! Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I took great pleasure in giving that one a happy ending, let me tell you.  (Ur...TWSS.)  :o) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Summary: AU- Starts with Jim leaving for Stamford, ends in a happy place. Inspired by "Message in a Bottle" by The Police.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, In Stamford, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5750 Read Count: 19449 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2008 Updated: February 06, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: February 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore

Awww, great turn of events in this one! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: Jim's biggest fan guides him through Season 3
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13735 Read Count: 39981 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2008 Updated: April 11, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: February 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Postmark Akron

OMIGOSH! This is great! I can't wait to see how Pam reacts to getting her own little fan mail :)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: February 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Hand Delivered

Hee! Wow, was not expecting that at all, but awesome! Can't wait to see how the fan club meeting goes :)

Summary:

A look at the an angsty side of Jim and Pam. Things happen, insecurities come forward, and moments from the past haunt their future. But they will fight through it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Karen, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam/Other, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19613 Read Count: 31892 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2008 Updated: March 31, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Just look over your shoulders, honey

Aw, that was super cute! Hoping for an epilogue ;)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: February 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 :You and I must make a pact, we must bring salvation back

I am SO digging this story! I totally get why Jim is feeling the way he is and I love him trying to work through it and not wanting to screw things up with Pam. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Jim will do alot of soul searching in this. And his behavior might not be perfect, because he's not a perfect person, but he'll always be the guy for Pam in my story.