Penname: JennInTheCity Real name: Jenn
Member Since: July 01, 2007

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Summary: Feature

A glimpse into the instant messaging history of Jim and Pam. Written with the intention of expanding on what we see on the show, as well as to tie up some loose ends. There will be a conversation for each episode through Season 3.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Helene Beesly, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Larissa Halpert, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Instant Messaging
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16909 Read Count: 312429 ePub Downloads: 22
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: December 27, 2016
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 49: Product Recall

I'm trying to come up with awesome feedback, but all I can think of "Nailed it!"

I think you really captured the tone of that episode. They are starting to become friendly and Pam has pounced on it, but Jim is still so freakin' cautious, even in IM.

One thing, though, didn't Andy say he met her at 7-11? Maybe I remembering that wrong...

Author's Response:

Thank you, that's generally what I was trying to capture.

I think the 7-11 thing is a deleted scene, which I need to have internet to watch (I think you've heard plenty about my internet woes). I actually heard wrong, she worked at a frozen yogurt stand (and I just changed it), but Jim's point was that her job probably should have tipped Andy off about her age.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 44: Phyllis' Wedding

Aww, I'm with Larissa on this, but I totally get where Jim is coming from. Looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 40: Back From Vacation

I really liked how you handled that and I think your reasoning about Pam bringing up Karen is totally sound. I'll admit to doing that in my life in the past ;)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 39: A Benihana Christmas

That was so cute! I loved that! I really liked how forward Pam was in calling out Jim about Karen. Great job!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 38: The Convict

Love the addition of the dancing in the parking lot because I really thought that was missing from the original prank ;) Great job as usual!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 37: The Merger

Aww, Pam! I was so frustrated by that scene at the end of The Merger because you could tell that they were both covering but neither wanted to see what the other was doing, even though they used to do it all the time. Great chapter - I've loved all the updates tonight ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, that's when I wish the camera guys broke the "4th wall" and yelled out something like "Will you two get over yourselves and make out already?"

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 29: Casino Night

Oh, I love how you have Pam foreshadowing with the crying. And Jim's life of quiet desperation, where his only big question is where to eat the lunch he packed from home. Just great job with the angst.

Author's Response: Well, that and whether or not he should tell Pam he's desperately in love with her. Gotta love the angst.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 27: Drug Testing

That totally worked - great job!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 26: Michael's Birthday

I can't stop laughing at this one! Thanks so much!

Author's Response: hehe, thanks, I had a lot of fun writing it.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 32: The Coup

Aw, I really liked that cute interaction between Karen and Jim - definitely true to character ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, I gotta give Karen her due, she never was a "bad guy" it was a lot more complicated than that.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 35: Diwali

Aw, Pam! I totally know how that is, but still...:(

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 34: Initiation

Aw, I like that. And I like that Pam was brave enough to IM first. Good on her!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 36: Branch Closing

I think you totally matched how Jim is feeling between Branch Closing and The Merger and it totally works. Really great work!

Author's Response: Ah, thank you, I don't like bitter Jim, but I see where he's coming from.

Summary:

WYDM is Scranton's local radio station, with our favorite paper-pushers as DJs. Kelly gossips, Angela gives advice, Toby does traffic, and there's a new guy doing the morning show that's causing quite a stir...


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11802 Read Count: 24839 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: September 14, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: August 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: The Role Model

I'm not usually a fan of AU, but this is cracking me up! Great work!

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad! Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured StoryDinner, and what happened later. Post-Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8226 Read Count: 56208 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: August 26, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: August 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Axis

Aww, I liked that. Totally looking forward to the next part - love that line-up!

Summary: Jim and Pam fluff and angst. Takes place a little bit during and then after The Job.

Because I like to think that Jim listens to really cool music, and has made at least one Pam mix on his IPod.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5347 Read Count: 14587 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2007 Updated: September 11, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: August 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm really liking this, but it is really hard to read dialogue without quotation marks.

Summary:

He has to make her say it, make her realize she can.

 

Author's Chapter Notes:Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3161 Read Count: 12713 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2007 Updated: August 17, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: August 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Tell Me You Can.

That was hot. Good job!

Summary:

It’s time for the first annual Dunder Mifflin National Sales Meeting in Las Vegas. What will go down in the city of sin, where alcohol flows, love can be won, lost and won again, and where drive-through weddings are all-too-available?


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Andy, Angela, Bob Vance, Carol, Creed, Darryl, David Wallace, Dwight, Dwight/Angela, Ensemble, Hunter, Jan, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Josh Porter, Karen, Katy, Kelly, Kevin, Madge, Mark, Meredith, Michael, Michael/Jan, Mose, Oscar, Oscar/Gil, Other, Pam, Pam/Other, Pam/Roy, Phyllis, Phyllis/Bob Vance, Roy, Ryan, Ryan/Kelly, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Dubious Consent
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10101 Read Count: 9627 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2007 Updated: September 25, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 8
Date: August 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1: profoundly inappropriate

Oh, I love where this is headed! I can't wait to read what's next ;)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Six Ways to Have a Bad Time in Vegas

I am so loving this! I think I may run off to Vegas now :)

Author's Response: totally, me too. meet ya there!!

The Date by MissFNB Rated: T Round robin [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Pam and Jim go on their first date.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1590 Read Count: 4199 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2007 Updated: August 26, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: August 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Footsie

Okay, you totally made me laugh with Kelly's conversation cards - awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.  I'm not very good with dialogue, so it's a pretty big relief that I wasn't the only one who thought that was funny!  :)

Summary: A set of three vignettes over three years at Scranton's local county fair.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7803 Read Count: 8836 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2007 Updated: October 23, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: October 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Jim and Karen in the Art Barn

Aww, that was so heartbreaking - but so true to character! I'm so happy there's a next chapter ;)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: October 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Pam and Jim in the Photo Booth

Oh, I loved this! Great job :)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: August 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pam and Roy in front of The Zipper

Oh, I loved that! I want to see Jim and Pam at the fair for real :)

Summary: The moon, Pam, Jim and a sudden decision reached between them. Pure, unadulterated fluff inspired by last night's lunar eclipse.

Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2518 Read Count: 3723 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2007 Updated: August 28, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: August 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Eclipse

Oh, I just love that! I loved the backwards proposal and Jim's concern about talking to Pam's father. That was just lovely. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. "Backwards proposal". Heh. I like the way you put that.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim and Pam surrender to silence after "The Job." A virtual smut-angst festival!

This is smut. Serious, hard-core, unapologetic, squirm in your seat, not-safe-for-work, wild and unhinihibited smut, punctuated by merciless and heart-wrenching angst. In a couple of chapters, there will be smutty angst, and in others, angsty smut. There's even a couple of chapters with no smut at all and some fluff-happy-funny mixed in! But it all ends with a happy bang! Haw. You were warned.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Dubious Consent, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16663 Read Count: 126906 ePub Downloads: 20
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2007 Updated: September 27, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: The Sound of Regret...

I really, really liked that and I can't really tell you why. I really liked the imagery of Jim pulling Pam up on his lap after she confesses. really good job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. The encouragement is wonderful...