Penname: JennInTheCity Real name: Jenn
Member Since: July 01, 2007

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Not a Word... by Shassafrass Rated: MA [Reviews - 88] 43
Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim and Pam surrender to silence after "The Job." A virtual smut-angst festival!

This is smut. Serious, hard-core, unapologetic, squirm in your seat, not-safe-for-work, wild and unhinihibited smut, punctuated by merciless and heart-wrenching angst. In a couple of chapters, there will be smutty angst, and in others, angsty smut. There's even a couple of chapters with no smut at all and some fluff-happy-funny mixed in! But it all ends with a happy bang! Haw. You were warned.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Dubious Consent, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16663 Read Count: 126963 ePub Downloads: 20
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2007 Updated: September 27, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: The Sound of Make-Up Sex...

Ha! That was hot and then funny - great job!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! As filthy as this gets, I really do write from the heart here...there\'s a lot of humor to be found in a healthy sex life...

The Last King of Scott Land by xoxoxo Rated: K+ [Reviews - 61] 19
Summary: Past Featured Story

Michael's looking for a long lost relative - with (hopefully) hilarious results.  Set S4ish - NO SPOILERS - with a healthy dose of a blissful Jim and Pam because I simply can't help myself.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9433 Read Count: 13335 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2007 Updated: January 21, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: January 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So cute! Love this!

Author's Response: So glad!!  Thank you!!

A Little Night Music by Sweetpea Rated: T [Reviews - 150] 56
Summary: Past Featured StoryA series of vignettes inspired by random song clips from the iPod.  No chronological order, so sit tight.  It might be a bumpy ride through time.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13152 Read Count: 78915 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2007 Updated: November 11, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Here Comes My Girl

Well, you've inspired me to create a mix on my iPod with the music from this story because it's all so good :)

Great Jim perspective about why he stays where he is even if it isn't professionally fulfilling. Love their silent communication as she comes down the aisle. Wish there was a blip in his head of what it might be like if she was coming down the aisle to see him at the end, but I like what you came up with :)

Author's Response: Wow!  That might be the coolest thing ever, Jenn!  I thought about the blip in his head about their own wedding, but I just couldn't work it in without it sounding completely cheesy.  Writing the big moments are really hard for me.  I've tried a little bit of it and it just falls completely flat.  Flatter than Jan's old shrunken chesticles.  Thank you for the great review!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Shake a Little

Okay that might be the perfect proposal! I love the ring ;)

Author's Response: Jenn, thank you! It felt right for them, to me.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: The Dimming of the Day

This chapter always makes me hungry :)

I can't remember if I reviewed this one or not, so I'm reviewing it now. I really love the way they are so comfortable in this. I like the mental picture you provide of them just sitting together in bed, talking. Great job!

(Now, I need some Mac & Cheese...)

Author's Response:

Jenn, thank you so much.  It's crazy that there is only one chapter that doesn't have any food or drink in it at all.  I'm better at food porn than . . . porn porn, I think.  Glad you liked this one.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Turn Me On

Aww, I like it! Makes me miss a certain someone - great job!

Author's Response: It does me, too, Jenn.  *sniff*  Thanks for the review

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: September 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Little T and A

That was so cute! I could totally picture the party and the morning after. Great job!

Author's Response: I truly hope we get to see tipsy Pam in S4 - nothing cuter than that.  Except maybe tipsy Jim AND Pam!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Crash-Crush

Oh, I just loved that so much!!

Author's Response: Thanks!  This one was a ton of fun to write. 

Almost There by scrantonbranch Rated: K [Reviews - 11] 9
Summary: Pam can tell Jim isn't as ready as he thinks he is for a date with her. 
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1100 Read Count: 3731 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2007 Updated: September 02, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 8
Date: September 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I really liked that! Great job!

How Long by GodInThisChilis Rated: MA [Reviews - 168] 98
Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Pam had gone along with Michael and Dwight to the convention? Was she ready to see Jim? Was Jim ready to face Pam?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29494 Read Count: 130707 ePub Downloads: 35
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2007 Updated: September 29, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: I've Run Just As Far As I Can Run

Wow, you continue to impress. I am having a really bad day, but this helps :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad that this helped : )  Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Like a Bluebird With His Heart Removed...Lonely As a Train

Please tell me there is more to this - I love it already!

Author's Response: There is more....don't worry. There's actually a lot more :)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Doin’ Time in a Lonesome Prison, Where the Sun Don’t Shine

Great insight into Jim, post-Casino-night. He really just doesn't understand how things got so fucked up. I loved Dwight's small moment too. I can't wait to read the next part!

Author's Response: Poor tortured Jim. He thought he was letting Pam have what she wanted. Glad you liked the Dwight part. I love when he looks out for Pam.  Thanks so much for your review.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Bloodhounds On Your Mind

Wow, they both know how to just turn the knife in each other, though Pam is definitely being more cruel than Jim. I can't wait to see where this goes from here ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. Maybe Pam's meaness is just my way of letting her have payback for some of the stuff Jim pulled with her this last season. You are right about them knowing how to hurt each other, though.

Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Muddy River Runs So Deep

That was really powerful (as well as hot)! They are still talking at cross purposes, but I hope that they will realize it soon. I can't wait for the next part!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I always get nervous posting "smut" because I'm not sure if it will come across like I want it to. Thanks again for your kind words.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose

Oh wow! I love Jim having a bond with the camera guy and I can't wait to see what he does with this new info :)

Author's Response: Jim needs some more guy friends...doesn't he? I think you'll be happy with what he does with the info.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Rock Yourself to Sleep

Great dream, Pam ;) Can't wait to see what you've got cooked up for the next part!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: September 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: I Wish I Lived In the Land of Fools

Awesome update! First, bravo on making excellent use of your meeting time :)

I really liked the role reversal with Pam and Michael in the party. Really funny excuse that Dwight gave to go see Angela ;) I also liked the parallel to the job that you drew and I really like the camera guy too.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: I'll Be Doin' Fine And Then Some

OMIGOSH! I love that! Jim is the coolest! Now I can't wait to see what Pam has up her sleeve :)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: September 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Out There in That Shiny Night

Yay, that was so much better than the episode ;) Happy Premiere Night!

Ordinary Life by Colette Rated: T [Reviews - 115] 67
Summary: Past Featured Story

A collection of brief everyday moments: sleeping, showering, working, eating...(sounds exciting, huh?)

Each part is a mini-one shot (i.e., not a WIP with one ongoing narrative); no spoilers.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3731 Read Count: 49440 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2007 Updated: November 12, 2007
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Want to write you a love letter

I absolutely love that! I want a box of love letters ;)

Author's Response: Would be a lovely thing to have, wouldn't it (especially from Jim)? Thank you, JennInTheCity!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Cooties

Oh, what a sweet scene! I love Pam being able to take care of Jim, even if she's getting sick herself.

Author's Response: Somehow the idea of her, taking care of him, just really appealed to me. Glad it worked for you too. Thanks much JennInTheCity!

Don't Let Dunder-Mifflin Near The Fruity And Delicious Drinks by dundiefromgod Rated: T [Reviews - 243] 58
Summary: 55-words on what happens when different Dunder-Mifflin employees get drunk.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Overheard, 55, Kelly's Revenge, 55: The Kandy Edition, Drunk Michael
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2606 Read Count: 146442 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2007 Updated: April 11, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Jim

AWE-SOME!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you, I'm glad that you liked it JennInTheCity.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 28: Karen II

Fabulous! I [heart] Karen so much!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. I like Karen as well, but I figured after the day she had, she would need a drink. Thanks for the review JennInTheCity

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Phyllis

I LOVE Drunk!Phyllis! She's awesome!

Author's Response: She is awesome. I mean she's willing to shake her maracas at Michael....I think we need to see her in Season 4. She got left out of the fun in ABC. Thanks for the review JennInTheCity.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Karen

Awesome song choices!

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you thought so. I struggled to pick ones that made sense/people would get. I figured most people would know that first 2, and Orgy's cover of "Blue Monday" fit well enough to just use it. Thanks for your review JennInTheCity.