Penname: PBeesly Sweater Real name: Sara
Member Since: October 21, 2007

Bio:
I'm a third year graduate student studying Child Development who's going to be stuck in grad school for another 2 years. Therefore, I resort to reading (and maybe writing a little too) mass quantities of fan fiction to get me through. Because as we all know, there may not be time for sleep, but there's ALWAYS time for fan fiction.
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One Day by Wendy Blue Rated: T [Reviews - 350] 125
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.

Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28467 Read Count: 126130 ePub Downloads: 21
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2007 Updated: July 06, 2009
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9
Date: January 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: 1:00 PM

I loved the interaction with the sister in this chapter. You've created a fantastically kind, yet quick-witted gem of a character here. Personally I'd love to see more of her, but I realize there are JAMmy-er things to get too! :)
Great job as always! I can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9
Date: May 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: 4:00 PM

Eeeeeee! You posted! I gasped with excitement when I found out the great news! :-)
Seriously, thank you for making a really crappy night better...loved it, the tension, the humor, the curveball (Pam did WHAT?!) all of it!
Seriously, nice job, and I will never stop reading this as long as you keep posting!

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: 6:00 PM

Oh my goodness, I nearly peed my pants with excitement to see you had updated! And it was not at all disappointing...it makes me just itching for more as usual! You've still got it my friend. :-)
More please! :-)

Summary: A series of IM conversations between Jim and Pam. Just a lot of fluffy season 4 fun! Spoilers through season 4. by the way I'm bad with titles.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10914 Read Count: 27579 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2008
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9
Date: October 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Bathroom Check ups

Okay, this series of IM conversations is awesome! I'm at work reading them (shame on me) and I keep snickering to myself and I'm getting plenty of interesting looks from fellow co-workers. That's always a mark of true hilarity! You do the characters so well, and you've got the IM conversation banter down. Keep going! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Lol thanks! I hope you didn't get in trouble. It's not actually that hard. I didn't believe people when they said it was easy but I gave it a go and it really is.

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 10
Date: January 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Can I just say how much I LOVE these IM conversations! It's like having a little bit of The Office back that I can picture in my head. It's like having a little bit of JAM to carry around in my pocket all day...without the stickiness factor...
Sorry, this review is weird...it's early and I haven't had my coffee...

Nonetheless, Fantastic job!!

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 10
Date: January 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Little Man Warmers

LOL. Little Man Warmers?! How did you come up with that?! It's fabulous. I burst out laughing (thank goodness I'm alone in my kitchen) at Jim's reaction. What a wonderful way to start my day...thank you!!
Plus, the image of Dwight's reaction to getting a wedgie in his cartoon beet underwear will never cease to make me giggle.
Please keep writing these, you do them SO well, and they add some Office happiness to my Office-less life. :)

Summary: What if Jim had broken up with Karen at Phyllis' wedding? What if he had decided to go after Pam when she left with Roy?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Michael, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4021 Read Count: 13014 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2007 Updated: October 27, 2007
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed
Date: October 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Somewhere inside the hallow places

Nice job! I'm really excited to read more of this. You also write the characters really well, especially the inner angst bits. :-)
Keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you kindly. :)\r\n*back to work on story*

Summary: It's Halloween again. Ensamble episode in novel format, served with a side of Jam. Set after 'Money'.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4867 Read Count: 5983 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2007 Updated: November 12, 2007
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9
Date: November 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Cold Open

This is like the awesomest awesome blossom there ever was.

You write all of the characters so wonderfully. Seriously...you've got all of them down. I laughed out loud a few times reading this. I love it and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?

“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.

Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19942 Read Count: 44102 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2007 Updated: December 17, 2007
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 10
Date: November 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Bad Idea

I love love love love this story!! Please write more, and soon!
And your rendition of Angela's goggle fiasco made me giggle. *sighs and shakes head* Oh Angela.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it, PBS! More to come probably later this week :)

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9
Date: December 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Pam Pong

This was the perfect end to this story! You write Angela so well. I laughed out loud when I read:
"Just as indulging in that much unashamed licentiousness was dangerous to one’s eternal soul."
That is such a great line. *sigh* Oh Angela.
Nice job! I really enjoyed it!

Breathing Out by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 50] 30
Summary: This picks up at "Money" and is my take on the seeming epiphany that Jim had while in the stairwell with Dwight, leading to him kissing Pam in front of the entire office.  Includes flashbacks to "Conflict Resolution" and "The Job."
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Dwight
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Inner Monologue, Romance, Sick Jim/Pam, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20810 Read Count: 32813 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2007 Updated: February 27, 2008
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 8
Date: November 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Breathe in, breathe out tell me all of your doubt and everybody bleeds this way just the same

I must admit, after "Money" aired I thought to myself: "I really hope someone writes what Jim's thinking about during his conversation with Dwight and that long walk up the stairs..." I'm SO glad to see that you're are writing this! I have enjoyed reading a number of your other stories, and you always get the characters and the angst just right! So I'm thrilled to keep reading as this story evolves!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you were intrigued by that, too!  I was really glad to see the writers emphasize just how miserable he'd been, because I really do think he was in absolute hell at the end of season 2 (and I'd written him that way before, which made me feel a little vindicated, hee).  But I was thrown off by the fact that he seemed to have such an epiphany -- and that Pam seemed to see that, too, based on her response to the kiss.  And it's ultimately that epiphany that I'm working toward here.

Thanks so much for your review!

Summary: Pam and Jim, in an effort to squalch boredom, play the childhood game of 20 Questions, with a twist. When the questions get more personal, will they cave under the pressure to keep their true feelings hidden, or will they let it all out respecting the rules of the game?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39511 Read Count: 67661 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2007 Updated: July 19, 2008
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 7
Date: December 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Superheroes

I enjoyed this first chapter, but Pooperman is really kinda gross, though very fitting as Jim is really just a boy at heart. :)
One thing though...in the beginning when he asks Pam to respond appropriately if she accepts his challenge, I was so expecting her to say "Absolutely I do". Any reason you didn't use that?
Great Job, I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Umm, i just didn't remember it? I'm not sure. I'll say I just wanted to be mysterious ;)

Summary: Pam is on her way to meet Jim when she runs into car trouble. With nowhere else to turn, she calls the only person she can think of, which leads her to an awkward conversation, but also to closure. A little after season four.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam, Roy
Genres: None
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2009 Read Count: 2092 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2007 Updated: November 14, 2007
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 8
Date: November 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Roadside Assistance

Wow, this was great! So realistic.

But please please please give us what happens when Jim finds out...I could see a little tension there, especially if Pam didn't even call him to tell him she had car trouble in the first place...
Just a thought, I love it as is though!

Summary: It's 3am and someone is at Pam's front door... and he needs a little nursing. Fluff? Oh, why, yes. One-shot.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1440 Read Count: 4007 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2007 Updated: November 20, 2007
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9
Date: November 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Night Medicine

I agree with everyone else here...so adorable! Loved it!
Keep the stories coming, you've got some mad crazy skills!

Summary: Season three ended beautifully. But from about Benihana Christmas on, I felt that there were many near misses on Jim and Pam actually having an honest conversation.

Here's another take on what might have happened if Jim had found Pam crying over him in Back From Vacation. I know, I know...done and redone. Just can't help myself. Spoilers for Back From Vacation.





Disclaimer: I own nothing and am not affiliated in any way with anything even remotely to do with the creation of this televised story. In fact, I do not think I can have fewer connections to anyone in Hollywood, or Scranton.

I do not even work in an office.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Past, Future
Characters: Karen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1633 Read Count: 7747 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2007 Updated: November 24, 2007
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 8
Date: November 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome. Just perfect. Fluffy angst/angsty fluff is the best!

I don't think I could ever get enough of the alternate possibilities for the Back from Vacation storyline.

Really, great job on this.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I\'m so glad to know that there are others like myself who almost always want Jim to walk through those doors. *sigh* I appreciate your kind words!

Summary: What happens when Jim, Pam and Roy discover www.jamfancentral.com?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32621 Read Count: 69515 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2008
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 8
Date: November 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: And Our Sky Was Unfolding

I really enjoyed "Observer Effect" and I can tell I'm going to love this one too.
You really have a wonderful talent for crafting beautiful sentences full of imagery and depth. I can see you're a true writer at heart.
Keep it up! I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your comments about my stories and my writing. They mean a lot to me.

Summary: She’s just now more curious than ever as to how bad Scranton can be that he would choose unemployment before going back there. An AU look at "Branch Closing"
Categories: Alternate Universe, Other
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1114 Read Count: 1573 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2007 Updated: November 27, 2007
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 8
Date: November 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes please write more! You can't just leave us hanging wondering what Jim will do next!
I can understand the having finals thing, but come on, who needs to pass finals when there's fic to write! ;)

Summary: Pam introduces Jim to a lesser-known holiday ritual-Black Friday shopping.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9415 Read Count: 13166 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2007 Updated: April 08, 2008
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 8
Date: December 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: The Black Friday Helper

Oh Kelly. I love Jim's sympathy for Darryl at the end of this chapter. This is just such a funny, yet true series of black Friday type events. I love it so far!

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9
Date: February 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yay! I was so excited to see another chapter of this appear!
Nice job as usual...I have to admit, the thought of dealing with Michael Scott at 7am after 3 hours of shopping is enough to make me cringe...poor Jim!
Also, I am in full support of writing fic while in class...so hurray for lecture classes if that means more updates!! :)

Summary: A series of some really warped 55 word stories that I wrote to keep myself and others sane.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Jim, Jim/Pam, Katy, Pam, Ryan, Toby/Other
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Married, Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: Bad Fanfic, 55
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 521 Read Count: 14614 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2007 Updated: July 27, 2009
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed
Date: November 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Written after DMI

Okay these are so awesome! I'm in a coffee shop trying desperately to muffle my laughter in my sleeve.
I'm in the midst of studying for my neuroscience final, so I'm right there with ya. Though I wish I could apply my useless knowledge to Jim and Pam as well as you do. :)

Author's Response:

Haha. Lets see... neuroscience.. "pam's inferiour colleculus was randomly firing at various intervals in a totally incontrollable pattern. her gaba neurons were sending mixed signals. and if NO would just cooperate, then maybe she could get some work done"

okay, that made no sense. Most of my neuroscience was in research with seizures. And I think I blocked most of that out pretty quickly.  

Allentown by Sweetpea Rated: T [Reviews - 135] 58
Summary: Past Featured StoryA story of loss, love, and inspiration.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31217 Read Count: 40836 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2007 Updated: January 06, 2008
Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed
Date: December 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beesly Guide to Trimming Your Tree

I love this story! You have such a comfortable writing style. The reader doesn't have to work at all to enjoy every last word. The structure of the story, as well as your way with words make the flow so easy and beautiful. This is such a comforting, warm story, full of so much life. I love the perspective on Pam and Jim's future together, and all the ups and downs they have to face. Honestly it's the perfect companion to a hot cup of coffee on a cold snowy morning. I feel like I could read this forever. Absolutely wonderful! Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Wow!  What a wonderful review, PBeesly Sweater!  This story's not exactly fluffy, so it's great to read a review like this.  I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and chapter 6 is in the works!  Thanks so much for the kind words!

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 10
Date: December 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - What a Wonderful World

Okay seriously, can you just write this story forever? Because I would read it everyday, I love it so much.
I nearly burst out laughing with the diatribe on labor, especially the bit about all women needing to explain how horrible it is to anyone who's pregnant. But I also found myself fully understanding and appreciating the pain and frustration of losing something so crucial to your identity. You have such a talent expressing both the humor and the pain of life.
And lastly, you've made Dad Jim one of my favorite Jims ever. Absolutely perfect!
More soon please!!! :)

Author's Response:

PBS (HA!  Look at that!), what a great review!  Thank you!  Even as a never-pregnant person, it amuses me how women sometimes try to terrorize each other with the "I can top that!" labor horror stories.  And the belly-touching!  What's up with that? 

One of my favorite all-time movie scenes is the cemetary scene in Steel Magnolias where I'm bawling my face off one minute, then laughing so hard the next.  Just love that.  And if anyone can try to find humor in a painful situation, I think our lovebirds, especially Jim, can do it.  Thank you for the compliment about Dad!Jim, but mine is only a very pale, tepid imitation of the one, true Dad!Jim and that is LoveFool's in Baby Talk.  Nobody does it better and I should have my head examined for even letting Pam get knocked up in the first place!

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 10
Date: December 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Just One Look at Her Face is Good Enough for Me

Chapter after chapter is just so, so great. You put so much heart into this story, just incredible.
More please!! :)

Author's Response: PBS, thank you for all the encouragement!  Writing this story has been a huge challenge and even when I'm not writing, I'm thinking about it almost all the time.  More soon!

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 10
Date: December 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Show a Little Faith, There's Magic in the Night

Again I am just amazed with your ability to highlight the small, seemingly insignificant, but really incredibly important moments in life. You write this so well. Beautifully done as always.

Author's Response: So nice to read this, PBS, after this chapter gave me such a hard time.  I restarted it about four times and I have a whole "deleted scene" between Jim and Dwight that was (in my mind) hilarious - but it just wasn't right at this point in the story.  Thank you so much for your kind comments and encouragement!

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 10
Date: December 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - From a Good Day into the Moonlight

You never disappoint Sweetpea, incredible as always. The imagery, the passion, it's all there.
I have to admit, every time I see a new chapter posted it feels like Christmas morning! :)
But please don't say you just have an epilogue left...I want to read all about their adventures with their child! You write this so well, please tell me you'll have more! :)
Really, fantastic job, and I love it.

And keep writing, you have a gift.

Author's Response: PBS, you're gonna make me blubber all over myself!  You know, once I wrapped up chapter 9, I looked at the ending and I thought, "Great!  Now look what you've done!  Nine freaking chapters of buildup!!  Way to go, doofus!"  So, I sat here trembling at the keyboard for a few days, then I outlined this last chapter and the epilogue, and then it was Christmas weekend and I moved and I just didn't have time to spend with it.  Yesterday was 'just do it' day, so I'm so pleased you liked it!  I was really nervous about how LONG it was (TWSS), but that story had to be told and no way was I going to stretch it into two chapters!  You saying I have a gift?  What could be better than that?  I can't believe it's taken me so long to get back to something I love so much, so there will be more stories, for sure.  Thank you so very much for your sweet words!