“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly. Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.
Good stuff, well done - i look forward to reading more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! And thanks for reading!
9 I love this story - I want more. Fan Fic's are the only thing that get me through the long weeks without my beloved show... when oh! when will they give the writers what they want and end this tragic strike?
Jim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.9 this is a brilliant story, and its just hit where we've all wanted it to - and you've left it on a cliff! sign of a good writer if you ask moi!
8 Really good story, enjoying the whole idea immensely. Disappointed at how short the chapter was though, although the format was smart. Who am I to complain really... KEEP EM' COMING!!!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading! I know, I was sorry about the chapter length too, but no way of avoiding it unfortunately. Glad you still liked it though! More to come soon!
8 I don't hate you... well maybe just a little - but in a good way. This was another good chapter, but I'm missing the Jam interaction. Roll on 2:00!
The Dunder-Mifflin employees take up online gaming, exercise, and hoagies. Jim leaves a lot of voicemail messages.9 Good story. I'm not mad about one-shots but this was really enjoyable. Great job!
Author's Response: I'm so sorry this is late, but thanks!
8 Aaahhhh! The angst! I love it though - who am I kidding? Come on some fluff though, I love that too...
Author's Response: I'm of the opinion that fluff is best after gorging yourself on angst. Don't worry...there will most certainly be fluff. Thanks so much for reviewing!
What if Jim never went to Stamford? What if Pam started making life changes a little sooner?
An AU look at season 3.
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10 This has quickly become one of my fave stories - you sold me with this last chapter, brilliant. looking forward to an update.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, James! I've been working really hard on this story, so I'm glad you like it. And I'm working on the update -- hopefully it won't be too long now. Thanks a lot for the review!
9 This is a great story and an original twist. Was a bit skeptical at first but your writing and knowledge of the characters has me hooked, good job and keep it up!
Pam and Jim reconnect after the events of Casino Night.9 My God, that kind of fluff would make you itch. But it WAS good, game ball...
9 This was great! Quite believable. Im looking forward to an update. I was looking forward to this episode too - I hopw they still film it...
Author's Response: I hope they do too, considering how great the script was, I'm pretty sure they will. I'm glad that you found the Cold Open believable, that was definitely something I was going for. Thanks for the review JamesMichael.
9 its getting heated... i like heat. keep em' coming - i'm loving this tale
8 I'm enjoying this story a lot - can't wait for the next chapter, but the last line? "It's our turn" is way, WAY cheesier than "You're the only one for me". Maybe its because I'm a guy or not American or something but that made me cringe! Don't worry though, its still a good story so no offense.
Author's Response: Every line I thought of was cheesy! Trust me....I tried like 50 different things and they were all cheesy!! Finally I just picked one and went with it!!
Two days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.10 Quality
Author's Response: For some reason, your one-word review made me laugh -- though you could've said, "Righteous" and it would've been even funnier. :o) Seriously, though -- thanks for reviewing; I do appreciate it!
9 I like this idea - the way it started with a nightmare and so on. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot to me! Now I have high hopes for what you will think of the rest. [:
9 You really let Roy give Pam a right oul' knock about. Fair play. Can't wait to see what happens next - keep em' coming!
Author's Response: Haha! I'm so happy to hear that you're enjoying it! Thank you so much! [:
9 Yup, this is good - move quickly through the angst and face first into fluff. I'm game if you write it.
9 just read this whole story - it's good... VERY good, i want more. Way to leave it on a cliff - keep em' coming!
A look at what might have happened between The Job and 'round about Money. Lots of steam in the beginning, then some angst for good measure.9 Well, I'll defo be reading this to completion - draws you in instataniously.
Good job, I'm looking forward to the next installment!
MEMBER'S CHOICE - Katy and Jim are still dating during Jim’s “Email Surveillance” BBQ. When Pam sees them together it lights a fire under her.9 just gotta say, you're a legend for typing these updates so fast! would it be too much to hope for another today?
Pam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.10 Before this and Dunder Hall... I wasn't a big fan of extreme AU's but the way you write is perfect and suitably natural - you have a real talent for this kind of thing and I'll defo be reading any and all other stories you might come up with... so please keep writing and don't be afraid to try new ideas whatever they may be, I promise I'll read... if anything else is as good as this story was, I'll be just as hooked.
So sorry to see this finished but I guess it had to end somewhere... but I'll defo be reading it again in a few months. Looking back, it went from fairly dark/dreary/lonely angst, through the perfect character development and growth, to this happy ending... well done; no mean feat. Thanks! 10/10
Author's Response: JamesMichael, you are another reviewer that I truly look forward to reading what you thought about my chapters. I hope to continue to hear what you think. Thank you so much.
10 excellant, perfectly sculpted and well paced. i could read this story forever... two more chapters just doesn't seem enough. looking forward!
Nice chapter, with Jim meeting the rents and the whole confrontation... but I can defo sense an obstacle right around the corner - can't wait to see what happens... I bet it'll be REAL angsty! Keep em' coming
10 Nope, not wrong that you don't want it to end at all! I say as many more chapters as you want and make em' all outragiously long... please!
This was a great chapter to follow on with the last. It's fun having Franny talk, kind of solidifies the family dynamic in a weird way.
Very cool reference to Francis Bean too... I am presuming you mean little Cobain...?
Keep em' coming and I'll keep reading!
Author's Response: I did mean little Cobain! I just imagined that Creed would have her mixed up with the real Frances Bean because Franny doesn\'t have a father alive that Creed knows of. I guess that was kind of random.
10 I love this story - it feels so real in a way. I'm sorry you've said we're nearing the end because I could probably read this forever, and I will defo be reading this a second time.
There's a strange hard-to-explain atmosphere that was apparent from the start and held all the way through while developing and changing with the characters, whom have stayed true to the show itself.
Can't wait for the last few chapters, although like I said I'd read this forever and I think you should blast out more and more and more... oh well
You're going on the list!
Author's Response: I honestly wish I could continue it forever, but not to worry, I\'ll make the epilogue nice and lengthy so you won\'t have to wonder what will happen in the future. And the atmosphere you can\'t explain... neither can I, but I know what you mean.