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Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24348 Read Count: 20676 ePub Downloads: 6
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Arghhh! What a way to finish. I just read the first three chapters and thought they were fantastic - you do both Pam and Jim's voices very well. I eagerly await an update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy the fourth chapter.
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
...wow. It may have been a bad idea to read this one at work. It certainly improved the day, but also caused me to resent customers asking for help when I was reading. You have a fantastic way of capturing emotion, and your descriptions of how Pam's feeling/Jim's facial expressions are so powerful and real. Ok, you get it, you're awesome - lovefest over now :) looking foward to the last chapter (except for the part where it's the last one)!
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wow! Since you began the chapter with "I hope no one hates me for ending it the way that I do", I thought something terrible was going to happen... half the time I thought Jim was going to die in a fiery wreck, what with all his reckless driving! But that was a good ending! "New York"... very good :) I will miss checking for updates for this story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, I guess that's kind of a cryptic way to start the chapter, isn't it? ;)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Drama
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6541 Read Count: 4055 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh poor poor Pam :( my heart broke for her. Please continue!
Author's Response: She's got some more bad times ahead -- but good ones, too! Thanks for the review; I'll try and update soon!
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Arghhh! This is distressing to read, because I feel such incredible pain for Pam! And yet, I love it. Please update soon, I want more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It is a little awful right now, isn't it? But it'll get happier!
He shivers because there’s no warmth in the light and he’s not slept, not really, for a couple of nights. He’s edgy and exhausted all at once, flat and hyper. A dozen other contradictions.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5699 Read Count: 3116 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
*weeps*
What a beautiful ending! And middle. And beginning.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :)
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3344 Read Count: 6197 ePub Downloads: 3
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: We already know how this movie ends
That was beautiful. I absolutely loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, moonmouse!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4178 Read Count: 4915 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Taking It One Day at a Time
Hi! Your story is off to a great start, it's always good to relive the angst of casino night through the joy that is fanfiction. I just have one suggestion for you, which is maybe try to get a beta reader to check over your chapters and edit them before you upload them? There are quite a few places in these two chapters that switch between past and present tense, sometimes within the one sentence (example: "She's glad it was over with."). That kind of thing can be a bit jarring for the reader so interrupts the flow of your story. Anyway I hope you take this on board as some well-meant constructive criticism and KEEP WRITING!! :) hope to see lots more Jam stories out of you :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I probably will get a beta to check over my stories before I post them. Thank you, I appreciate your input!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4591 Read Count: 3100 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Awwwww!
That was lovely. It made me smile :) what more could I ask?
I love your writing and hope to read plenty more of it!
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4441 Read Count: 4815 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ok, I know it's becoming apparent by my reviews that I'm now stalking your backlist of stories, but anyway - this was (no surprises here) beautiful and perfect and amazing. It makes me a little sad that my life will never live up to the perfection of Jim and Pam kissing in the rain against a wall at 4am, but hey, that's what fanfiction's for right? :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1480 Read Count: 1951 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Loved it. You make everything you write sound just perfect and magical and real. So yes, I loved it. That's all.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6874 Read Count: 6390 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: September 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Just... perfect. I very nearly cried.
Just a short little bit of third date Jim/Pam fluff for you.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256 Read Count: 3950 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: September 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
love it love it love it