Penname: moonmouse Real name: courtney
Member Since: March 30, 2008

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New York by yanana Rated: M [Reviews - 57] 34
Summary: Past Featured StorySeason two angst? Yes, please! A retake on "Boys and Girls" from season two, had no cameras been present. So, spoilers for that, obviously.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24348 Read Count: 20676 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2010 Updated: February 09, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Arghhh! What a way to finish. I just read the first three chapters and thought they were fantastic - you do both Pam and Jim's voices very well. I eagerly await an update!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy the fourth chapter.

Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

...wow. It may have been a bad idea to read this one at work. It certainly improved the day, but also caused me to resent customers asking for help when I was reading. You have a fantastic way of capturing emotion, and your descriptions of how Pam's feeling/Jim's facial expressions are so powerful and real. Ok, you get it, you're awesome - lovefest over now :) looking foward to the last chapter (except for the part where it's the last one)!

Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow! Since you began the chapter with "I hope no one hates me for ending it the way that I do", I thought something terrible was going to happen... half the time I thought Jim was going to die in a fiery wreck, what with all his reckless driving! But that was a good ending! "New York"... very good :) I will miss checking for updates for this story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, I guess that's kind of a cryptic way to start the chapter, isn't it? ;)

Summary: When Pam wakes up in the hospital, her entire world is backwards. Literally. Gone is her life with Jim, and she is in a life she thought she left long ago. The worst part? Apparently, the last three years were all a dream. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Drama
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6541 Read Count: 4055 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2010 Updated: March 03, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh poor poor Pam :( my heart broke for her. Please continue!

Author's Response: She's got some more bad times ahead -- but good ones, too! Thanks for the review; I'll try and update soon!

Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Arghhh! This is distressing to read, because I feel such incredible pain for Pam! And yet, I love it. Please update soon, I want more :)

Author's Response: Thank you! It is a little awful right now, isn't it? But it'll get happier!

Fallout by SalR323 Rated: K [Reviews - 35] 17
Summary: Past Featured StorySet between S2 and S3 - fallout from Casino Night.
He shivers because there’s no warmth in the light and he’s not slept, not really, for a couple of nights. He’s edgy and exhausted all at once, flat and hyper. A dozen other contradictions.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5699 Read Count: 3116 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2010 Updated: February 09, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*weeps*

What a beautiful ending! And middle. And beginning.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :)

Tundra by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 35] 22
Summary: Past Featured StorySnow, wine, Bolsheviks, but no marshmallows. A cold night in Scranton. Set sometime during the winter of S2
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3344 Read Count: 6197 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2010 Updated: February 23, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: We already know how this movie ends

That was beautiful. I absolutely loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, moonmouse!

Summary: An alternate story to what happened after Casino Night. My first ever fan fic story of any kind. Spoilers for Casino Night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4178 Read Count: 4915 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: March 31, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Taking It One Day at a Time

Hi! Your story is off to a great start, it's always good to relive the angst of casino night through the joy that is fanfiction. I just have one suggestion for you, which is maybe try to get a beta reader to check over your chapters and edit them before you upload them? There are quite a few places in these two chapters that switch between past and present tense, sometimes within the one sentence (example: "She's glad it was over with."). That kind of thing can be a bit jarring for the reader so interrupts the flow of your story. Anyway I hope you take this on board as some well-meant constructive criticism and KEEP WRITING!! :) hope to see lots more Jam stories out of you :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I probably will get a beta to check over my stories before I post them. Thank you, I appreciate your input!

Apple by yanana Rated: MA [Reviews - 12] 11
Summary: Does anyone remember New York? I've been working an epilogue into it for some time and decided to make it a oneshot, since I like the way that story ended. It started out as a oneshot before I connected it to that story, so if you would have preferred a more satisfying ending, hopefully this will do.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4591 Read Count: 3100 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2010 Updated: March 31, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwwww!
That was lovely. It made me smile :) what more could I ask?
I love your writing and hope to read plenty more of it!

Drought by yanana Rated: M [Reviews - 17] 11
Summary: Pam waits for it to rain. A quick rundown (ha) of their first week dating.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4441 Read Count: 4815 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2010 Updated: April 14, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, I know it's becoming apparent by my reviews that I'm now stalking your backlist of stories, but anyway - this was (no surprises here) beautiful and perfect and amazing. It makes me a little sad that my life will never live up to the perfection of Jim and Pam kissing in the rain against a wall at 4am, but hey, that's what fanfiction's for right? :)

Summary: Nothing, really, just a small collection of things. Not really a story or anything. Seriously, why am I always writing about them doing this?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1480 Read Count: 1951 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2010 Updated: August 06, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: August 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. You make everything you write sound just perfect and magical and real. So yes, I loved it. That's all.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Directions by yanana Rated: M [Reviews - 23] 25
Summary: I was doing the next chapter of Febrility and this happened instead. Oops.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6874 Read Count: 6390 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2010 Updated: September 08, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: September 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Just... perfect. I very nearly cried.

An Experiment by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 7] 4
Summary: He pulls back, watches her face, and says, “Where do you feel it?”
Just a short little bit of third date Jim/Pam fluff for you.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256 Read Count: 3950 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2010 Updated: September 01, 2010
Reviewer: moonmouse Signed
Date: September 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it love it love it