Jim passes on the family tradition in 55 words
9 This story is incredibly cute. I can almost visualize the children. Great idea!
Jim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.10 More more more! I hadn't read this until after ch. 20 was written and I was completely engrossed! I love the added dimension of Pam realizing her "pattern." Can't wait to see more chapters!
50 10 These stories are wonderful. I have really fallen into the world of Fanfic. I love all the ideas. Congrats on roping me in!
With every choice we don't make, we create a universe...
WARNING: This is like, angst, to the tenth power, but I can promise a happy ending, if not exactly the one you might have in mind...
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9 Wow, I just discovered this story with this most recent post and I love it. Can't wait to read more.
9 More please! I am always so excited when I see an update to this story. Can't wait for more! You had me tearing up in this one. Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks, MtM! I really think I'm past the block now, so I'm hoping the updates will come at a faster clip.
9 While I feel horrible for you with the allergies (have had bad reactions in the past myself) I am thrilled that you got this story going again! Please keep the updates coming and I do hope you feel better soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really going to try to be more timely in the update department! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
9 Love it. Kiss her already!!! Can't wait to see where you're taking this story!
Author's Response: Thank you, MuteytheMailman! BTW, where'd you get that name? Is it a reference I don't get?
9 I still love the story. I like that Jim got his bell rung by a bunch of fans. Sometimes it's the surprise slap that will get us out of our funk. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks, MtM! (Oh, and I did figure out your name! I can't believe I forgot about Dwight's little role of Mutey the Mailman! Gotta love www.officequotes.net!) I think y'all will like the next chapter! I HOPE...
9 Glad you picked this story back up. I had been wondering if it was going to be completed. This was a wonderful, sweet chapter. I look forward to reading the conclusion.
Author's Response:
Oh we have many chapters before the conclusion!
Thanks for taking the time to leave a note.
7 I like the story because I always believed Roy had the potential to go cuckoo nuts. I am just surprised you didn't have her go to the hospital after an attempted murder or at least to the police station.
Author's Response: I understand your point; I had the police come to the apartment and had the paramedics there too. I just wasn't sure if I could write a hospital scene very well, you know? But I know what you're saying. I'm glad you're enjoying this story!
She saw the iPod as she was packing her stuff into boxes. It had been tucked away in a drawer for months. She never listened to it anymore; the memories were too painful.
8 I like this story! Are there more updates coming?
Pam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.9 Still really loving this story. Keep the updates coming!
9 This chapter feels so real, like it's really happening. You've captured some real emotion and life here and I love it. Can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot to me.
10 I love this! I am following it like a real life, or a separate tv show, or soap opera or something! You've made them so human and it'st just touching to read. Looking forward to more!
NOW COMPLETE!!!
"Jim, why don't you tell Pam how you really feel?"
Jim and Pam deal with the stuff that comes with being on a hit show...talk shows, radio call-ins, and press junkets. They say there's no such thing as bad publicity, but is that really the case? Watch as Jim and Pam deal with being in the public eye and under the thumb of manipulative network producers. The story is told through interviews, transcripts, web pages and photos.
I'm loving this. It adds such a new dimension to have the documentary crew, and the promotion behind it be a factor. Great ideas.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad your loving it and appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback.
Yea! I've been reading this since the beginning and loved it all. It was a wonderful story with a great ending and some very interesting "real world" interpretations...about reality stars and competition shows and the "you don't understand componant". Definitely fodder for a real grad paper/book if you ask me. Thanks for seeing this through to the end. It was a great read and highly enjoyable!
10 Love it! Did not see that twist of Karen as planted/actress. Great idea. I am excited for 2 more chapters but will be very sad when this story is completed. Thanks!
Author's Response: Mutey--Thanks so much for your review. It certainly is appreciated!
10 I am so glad you have returned to this story! I still love it. Hope the health problems are taken care of. Thanks for keeping this story going!
Author's Response: I'm feeling better, thanks! I really appreciate the fact that you remembered this story. Thanks so much for your feedback!
10 I was so excited to see this story updated! Cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mutey. I'm going to try not to have such a long pause between chapters. I really appreciate your support!
10 Still loving this story! Can't wait for more updates!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review, Mutey! Love your name, by the way.
10 This gets better and better. Love it! You mention you know about the Packers and have the student as a Madison grad...do you live in Wisconsin?
Author's Response:
Thanks again, Mutey. I’m so glad you are enjoying this story. I was born and raised in Wisconsin (in Kohler) but live in Texas now. Thanks for your continued feedback on this story.
I love this idea...and I haven't seen this side of the whole documentary thing mentioned before. It's such an interesting take on the premise of the show. Kind of "breaking down the 4th wall" thing. Love it, keep the chapters coming!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Mutey! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this. I really appreciate your review!
I totally love this story. I get so excited when I see an update! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. I’m glad I’m able to keep you anxious for the next chapter.
8 I think he should be named Michael.
:-) Hee -hee! Like it so far! Keep the chapers coming!
8 Aw, how sweet! Looking forward to more!