Jim and Pam are a couple. He asks a question. She contemplates.
8 Yeah...definitely his hands. :) What a great little one-shot. Cute with just the right amount of low-key smut talk.
10 I just read your reviews and I realized that mine is almost the same as bitterpill's. LOL. You stunned us both, I guess. This story was delicious and I hope you do write a sequel. Well done for it! I enjoyed reading it very much.
Pam makes an important call
9 I actually just rewatched this episode. What a lovely little rewrite. I loved their phone call and hated how it ended so this a perfect next call. Helps me to block out Diwali. ;) Great story, thanks for writing it!
More Jim and Pam and their adventures in raising baby Jill!
9 They are totally hateable aren't they? :D
I love the Baby Talk series but what a great little twist you've put on it here. Jim, Pam and Jill viewed from the outside. Your narrator is fabulously fleshed out and very real, I like her a lot.
Jim, Pam and Jill. LOVE them! As always, stellar work! Thanks for sharing it.
9 Any chance of you taking this fic up again? I enjoyed what you have very much. Reminds me of Mad Men and I'd love to see how you get Jim and Pam together. Even if it's a lost WIP it entertained me a lot. :)
Author's Response:
It's not lost... I promise.
I recently picked this back up again, but I'm working really hard before posting it because it's been so long and I don't want it to be a disappointment when I come back. But thank you so so much for reading
9 It's good to have you back! I'm so glad you decided to bite the bullet and start posting again.
I think you know how much I was enjoying your story as a WIP and I have to say what a wonderful surprise it was to see C&L at the top of the new fic list. Really looking forward to seeing where you take this PPC.
Poor Jim, he's under some strain isn't he?
Part of my AU fiction and companion to The First Date. Jim and Pam go bowling! Gets a wee bit angsty but wraps up nice and fluffy at the end...enjoy!!!
9 You're stories are always such a wonderful read. I'm a fan and just wanted to take a minute to tell you how much I enjoy your writing.
Such a natural flow of both conversation and characterization. Thank you for the story! I'm off to catch up on some more of them.
9 This was a wonderful little piece. Cute and very in character. I enjoyed reading it.
A series of vignettes centered around clichés, but with a JAM spin.8 Just finished reading your series of cliche stories. Really wonderful set and loved each one. The characterizations were really spot on and I still have a grin going. They were a lot of fun to read. Thanks for posting them. :)
10 This is an incredible story. The dialogue between Dwight and Jim is so spot-on it's like reading a script from the show. All your characterizations are like this.
I see you haven't updated for a bit...please tell me that you've not given up on this story. It is so funny and the Jim/Pam moments poignant.
I got caught up the story and laughed out loud so many times. The story is hilarious and your chapter titles are worth the price of admission.
Thanks for writing this story and sharing it with us.
This will just be a series of short vignettes about Jim and Pam getting to know one another as they start their adventure into true coupledom. Embarrassing moments, phobias, guilty pleasures....the truth comes out.
10 I've just finished reading this story. This is my favorite chapter and I just have to tell you that you are the best Jim/Pam dialogue writer that I've read. All your stories are fantastic and they've really brightened up this JAMless summer for me. Thank you so much for writing these and sharing your talent.
Jim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.8 That was just lovely. Absolutely lovely. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Ideas for Cold Openings (the pre-title gags) always pop into my head. So these will be just a bunch of teasers that, hopefully, you will find funny. I don't know how many I will post but I'll keep putting them up as they occur to me.
9 This was solid gold. :D Your Dwight was so hilariously in character. Wow. As always stellar work, kgreene, thanks for the read.
Author's Response: And thank YOU for the nice comments!
9 Solid gold. You're the master at the cold open. Thanks for writing these, I love them.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 Bwah! OMG...I laughed and laughed. Truly awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 Seriously you are the best. I love these. Always put a smile on my face and leave me satisfied. ;) Your characterization is so spot on. Always a treat to read them.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I really appreciate you saying that!
10 This was seriously amazing. So in character and funny. Very, very well done. Loved it!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks!
9 What an absolutely hilarious story. I almost had to send you a bill for my laptop cleaning since I came pretty close to spitting my pepsi all over it laughing so hard. Well done. I enjoyed it very much!
Yet another story inspired by a song by Ingrid Michaelson called Breakable. I really wanted to tell a story about people being just that -- breakable, and ultimately how grace helps keep us from falling apart. So yeah -- a nice fluffy holiday piece. ;-)10 I'm all weepy. I can't remember the last fanfic that made me cry. Beautiful story and a great last line. I loved it a lot. Well done.
10 Nice. Concise story that really expresses Jim's emotional state. Lovely bit of writing. Well done.
8 This was sweet. I've been going through some of the archive fics and ran across this. Brought a smile to my face, I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing it!
Author's Response: Wow, I was pleasantly surprised to get this review today, as it's been a while since I wrote this story. Thanks so much for your kind review. :-)
Pam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.10 I saw this recommended on the forum and I had to give it a try, even not being too big a fan of AU. I'm so glad I did, I couldn't stop reading it last night. What a wonderful story, I loved Jim and his girls and you're doing a great job with the characterization, the voices sound so true. Thank you so much for sharing it, you've taught me to not judge the AU. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I\'m really glad you took a chance on it!
8 Should this not be Fiery New Beesly? :D Yowza. This is smoking hot. Well done. You do a wonderful characterization of Jim and he's not even in the room most of the time.
Loved this bit: “This is America. And if you can’t walk around your own apartment naked, then the terrorists have already won.”
Love how you show Pam gaining a stronger sense of self (totally not a euphamism). Really enjoyed your story. Thanks!
Author's Response: You\'re right Elle...Fiery New Beesly would have made a better title. I\'ll get you to title all of my stories from now on. :)
It's a little AU, with Jim still working at Dunder-Mifflin, but attacking his job issues and his journey with Pam from a different direction. What if Jim worked in the warehouse with Roy when he starts to find the office receptionist way too attractive for his own good?
9 I loved it.
I like this Jim you've created and I'm definitely curious to see how your Casino Night turns out.
I'm really enjoying your story. Thanks for posting!