Oh that was fun.

Author's Response: Glad you liked, jazzfan -- thanks for reviewing!

Pardon the lack of literary skills in this review, but that was just plain awesome.

Author's Response: Thanks, jazzfan! :)

There were about twenty zebras in the picture, each with its own distinctive stripe pattern, but the focus was on two standing side by side. Their stripes matched perfectly, and they were labeled “Jim” and “Pam”.

That may be the cutest single thing I've ever read in a fan fiction here.

These are fabulous. I especially liked this - it is a very believable scenario:
Hi. I know this is going to be awkward and I know I don't deserve anything from you, but I need to tell you something. I..." her voice faltered. She licked her lips and started again. "I just want to tell you that Dwight and Angela are secretly dating. I think they are having sex. Do with that information what you will."

She was more than halfway back to her desk when he started laughing hysterically. Of course he still loved her. He always would.

And Pam's little wedding present to Jim. Perfection.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love the way they actually did the reveal, too, but I had a good time speculating about it once upon a time. Sorry for the late response- my notifications don't work and I hadn't checked for a while! Thank you, again!

Late to the party here, but what a great alternative story you have here. This could have saved these "kids" so much grief. Good read, thanks!

Oh, I loved this. Is it silly for me to be a little worried about this fictional characters and hoping it all goes okay the second time around? Probably, but there you go. Very sweet and very in character.

Author's Response: Here's a spoiler from me to you Jazzy...::whisper:: no need to be worried ;-).  Thanks so much for your loyal reviewing! LOVE IT!

Honestly, I could read this for hours - just Jim and Pam talking. You capture the cadence and the dialogue between them perfectly. When I come to the end of one of these chapters I'm sad because I want them to go on for at least a couple more hours. If the "real" Jim and Pam are half this cute with their kid, I may die of "Awwww." Well done, as always. I'm looking forward to seeing how this next part goes down.

All those years of experience gleaned from managing Michael Scott the manchild are coming in handy for the Halprets. Very cute story and the wet bed scenario should ring true with any exhausted parent. My favorite line was Jim saying that Jill was just as stubborn as her mother. Nice callback to "The Lover" and Michael's statement to Pam. I'm so glad you updated this - is there really any need to end it? *crosses fingers that you forget about that statement*

Oh, poor Jim and Pam. Very well written, I wanted to give them both a hug.

I very much liked your "unsure" Jim. A nice change of pace and a Dwight was perfect as the person who introduces the age old question of "didn't you want a son?" to a father with girls.

Oh this is so dang sweet it should come with a glass of milk. I especially loved this: "So I go into her room last night and she's talking to that Daisy I brought home...and she's saying something like, "Hey...Pwize...G'nite...Pwize."

I had some time this morning so I decided to read some of your previous stuff. I loved this story so much...GUH! I loved how Jim held his ground with Karen, and the ER waiting room scene was gold.

Brava.

PS Oh yeah - fabric softner and milk in the hot chocolate - what a killer combination in a man. Irresistable.