Penname: Aivilo Real name:
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Summary: Jim Halpert, the producer of a new documentary-style reality TV show, falls for one of the cast members of The Office.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52626 Read Count: 26596 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2011 Updated: May 01, 2011
Reviewer: Aivilo Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Ready to Start

Oohh I like the Jim and Pam interaction you've started here. And Pam's description of Michael's brain taking the scenic route, I don't think I've ever heard Michael described better. I am looking forward to more, more office characters on camera and absolutely more Jim and Pam flirting too!

Author's Response: Thanks Aivilo! More characters soon. I'm just working on the getting to know yous for Jim and Pam and then we will dive in head first with the rest of them. I'm really excited if you can't tell! :D

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed
Date: February 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Who's Next?

I am looking forward to so many things in this new story. Like how will Jim's colleagues react to his push for the paper company. And also, his realtionships with his TV coworkers seem a little on the less-than-friendly side, so I hope to see some more background on his workplace situation.

And of course Jim and Pam time, always, always, always something to get excited over!

Author's Response: Hey Aivilo! I'm so glad that you're getting involved in the story! So you won't actually see that reaction from the initial push because we'll skip ahead in time, but I can say that it will be touched on in another later chapter as well as more workplace background.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed
Date: February 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Forget about the office

I am excited for more from you! You told such a lovely story in Would You Still Love Me. I look forward to this universe with all the other characters we enjoy!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm excited about including everyone this time around. I haven't done that in awhile.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed
Date: March 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The Thrill of It

I really liked the format you used, with the o'clocks. It made for great pacing on the chapter.

Poor Pam, I can imagine her that morning, spending time with Jim, the two of them exchanging banter or flirty conversation, at that point she is feeling good about things because, she is right, friends don't get to work at 6:30am, just to see each other. But as the day wears on, Jim has to be professional and keep his distance, so now, when he comes to her and tells her they want to see her dating, she doubts the time they spend together in the office early in the morning with the lights off.

I guess then I'll feel bad for poor Jim as well, his
morning getting off to the start he likes only to have a wrench tossed in there when his California bosses let him know they want to see the girl he likes dating. I wish he had waited and told her during thier early am rendezvous, this way he could've really explained to her that she should say no and gotten it across to her that he wanted her to say no as well.

Hopefully we will get an update soon and see how this all will play out.

PS- I like it alot when they sneak around, so more of that please!

Author's Response: There will be a lot more sneaking around! And you won't have to feel bad for either for too much longer. :D

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed
Date: March 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: To ask them why?

I'm screaming! That was awesomely worth the wait! Jealous! Jim is always a favorite of mine and I love that he was so upset with himself for Pam's decision to go out with Ryan's friend, he couldn't even reel it in for the sake of looking professional.

Oh my goodness, I know now the sneaking around is really going to get awesome. Really, though, I have to wait until Thursday or Friday for more? I'm loving this so much, I don't know if I can stand it.

Author's Response: Yes, Aivilo, sadly still Thursday or Friday. I really feel like I'm leaving you guys hanging but the sneaking around will be worth it, I hope. Eek.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed
Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: It's what it looks like

Oh my goodness, I love it! I'm so happy that they decided that they would just go with it and decide in May how they should proceed. Its funny, in the previous chapters I never even considered the fact that Jim doesn't live there as part of the issue they'd have. Cue uh-oh music...

I really like Pam's style, deny no matter what! Although my go to was always to freak out and call it a spider bite.... She may want to get some coverup to stay in her purse or invest in some scarves, it had gotta be chilly in the office during the day, right...

But a couple of things I got confused over... Why was Mean Nick nice to Pam? And did they have thier end of chapter conversation in the hallway just outside of where all the coworkers were? They got daring quickly if so...

An entire weekend off! I'm so excited for updates! I cannot wait for more sneaky...

Author's Response: Thanks Aivilo! Oh, spider bite. That's a good one! For the confusion stuff, you'll see soon why Mean Nick (as I've now decided to refer to him always. lol) was nice. And yes, they were just right outside in the hallway. So slightly daring, really sloppy. Remember their first kiss was also in a hallway where crew and coworkers were bound to go to eventually.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed
Date: March 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: There ain't no use in lying

No joke! This chapter really did fly by!

The tension Pam was feeling Friday at the office was so well written and true to life. From her worries of what her place was gonna look like, to more so, what she would look like to Jim, it was all so real! My favorite part of the office scenes from this chapter was when Pam decided she wouldn't suffer the anxiety on her own and she daringly sent Jim a text so he could have some pressure to deal with as well.

That said, I am so nervous, and there is a part of me that suspects that Mean Nick may know that the producer and receptionist have a relationship beyond what would be considered appropriate.... But then again, I could just be slightly paranoid.

I loved them at Pam's home. Jim was perfect, cooking her dinner and really just making sure that she was comfortable. All that pressure-free sweetness just about guaranteed him some action at some point during the weekend!!!

I may have cheered aloud when he initiated plans for the two of them for after filming. And meeting the parents, no less! I felt just like Pam, scary month of May might become the best month the calendar has to offer!

Author's Response: I could have sworn that I responded to this but alas there's nothing here. I've always loved Daring! Pam. Those moments when she surprises everyone are some of my favorites. Your paranoia might be onto something! Might be... All will be revealed about Mean Nick in an upcoming chapter very soon.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed
Date: March 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: I want to know what love is

I love your long chapters!

I love how these two just cannot seem to keep themselves apart! If they are in the same room, or close to it, they will connect. I think it was great the way you used Jim sending Dwight on a hunt for wedding crashers as a way to keep his crew busy so he could attempt to sneak a dance with his lady.

I enjoyed how the 'I love you's were handled. So fantastic!

I always look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks, Aivilo! You'll see more of their inability to control what they do for each other despite the cameras being so close next chapter (that sounded less sexual in my head, it's not at all).

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: March 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Just the receptionist

I never really thought about how intimate Jim and Pam really are, thanks to the documentary.

I adore Jim struggling in his dual roles. He is an awesome boyfriend and also really good at his job, despite that one pesky rule he has no choice but to discard, and I wish my words could explain to you how wonderful it was that you let us see that fight.

SO, I have to change Mean Nick's name to Not-so-Mean Nick. I didn't see that coming, nice little loop. Maybe I can call him Big-Brother-Syndrome Nick, or Overprotective-Nick... I need a nickname for him, please help me out.

I love that Pam knows when Jim is working vs. being her boyfriend, even if she is the only one there who knows it. Since she cannot call him on his writing in the office, I really hope that when they get home she gives him a, by-the-way...

Author's Response: Oh, we have to change his Mean Nick name?! I was really attached to Mean Nick. And I do realize that it was my own doing that has caused this name change. I'll brainstorm some more about a name. See if I can sneak it into a future chapter. ;)

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: March 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: The fates of our mistakes

No no no no no! Jim's idea is doing so well that they want to have someone else work on it?!? So not fair! I never saw that coming...

I so need to know what is gonna happen now! I hope you are writing, writing, writing!

Author's Response: Threw you for a loop, did I? I promise this won't go anywhere weird. lol

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: April 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Running out of air

I was so worried about getting an update for this story! I stay on the edge of my seat at the end of each chapter eagerly awaiting what will come next. But then you put a chapter up, I completely enjoy it, of course, but then it ends and I'm a nervous wreck for another chapter all over again! Curses to this cycle!

Thanks for giving me another reason to watch the clock for the weekend. I need to know what kind of plan there will be for Jim and Pam before they attempt to send him back to the West Coast!

When Jill Daniels kept trying to give either Jim or Pam notes, I half wanted them to say okay to her so we could know what they are thinking they see when they watch.

My favorite notes in this story though, good job with the alternating POV's, was how both feel about each others voice. I found myself really hoping that they aren't stuck with only a voice relationship for a minute while they figure out the long distance thing....

Another up soon, right?

Author's Response: Oh, I know, I fought with myself about revealing her notes for them this chapter like I originally planned, but it's a bigger part of next chapter. So happy that you liked the alternating POV's. I was honestly really worried about it.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: April 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: The best worst week

My guess.... Maybe Ken, since it seemed like Jim referred to him as the sound guy?

Wow! Awesome chapter! The twists and turns had me holding on for whatever would come next. I also was wondering when Jill came to see Jim at his room, was she trying to flirt with him? At times it seemed like she was going for some sort of weird flirty, chummy thing, but maybe that was just me, I know at almost 2am, visitors to hotel rooms usually don't just want to play cards or watch tv. Especially after some heavy drinking..

And I am so excited that Jim gets to stay! That is awesome. But when Jill was getting ruthless at the end, I found my self nervous. If she continues working on the show as line producer, will she eventually see what our mystery crew member saw and cause trouble?

I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks, Aivilo! Totally wasn't just you with the weird flirty thing. We'll get to more on that later. ;)

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: May 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Why are you so perfect?

You are perfect ItalianFood! I've got myself a very nervous but excited feeling about what you've got coming up...

I loved so much about this chapter. Jim meeting Pam's parents, and once he realized what was bothering her dad, going outside to reassure him and have that talk was absolutely wonderful! And the thought that he had to do that because they would be his family soon! Swoon-city!

The perfect way they are so proud of each other and the way they share those feelings and that pride with each other when they feel the other needs that boost is just lovely.

I am really hoping that the messy happens around them and they stay that solid in the upcoming chapters... please...

Summary: Pam is realizing alot when a new documentary being filmed at work, makes her look at herself from a new angle. When people are suddenly paying attention to you, you have to pay attention too.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28616 Read Count: 11065 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2011 Updated: March 24, 2012
Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: March 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am enjoying your story! And romance coming soon, exciting!!

Author's Response: Aivilo, thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the new chapter, the romance is starting, I love me some romantic Jim :)

Summary: The early moments of Jim and Pam's relationship. Begins immediately after "The Job" and continues throughout the summer between Season 3 and Season 4. General spoilers through Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40932 Read Count: 66328 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2011 Updated: July 27, 2011
Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: July 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

It's so wonderful to have you back! I was worried that you had abandoned us!

I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to more from you. Especially more with Jim and Pam quality time together!

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: May 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So, last chapter we learned that Pam doesn't normally kiss on a first date. But I think that, judging by the last couple times she and Jim were together, and the prepping she has done with her sister, this is going to be a little different. I cannot wait until you give us more! This is so good!

Author's Response: I think it's fair to say that she's never been on a first date with Jim Halpert. ;) Glad you're still enjoying this!

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: May 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Another awesome chapter! I felt as if you allowed us to spend the morning inside of Pam's brain. Now, are you going to have us spend the rest of the day in Jim's mind?

Author's Response: That's the plan! :) I'm working on that chapter now. Glad you liked this. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: May 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm so happy to see the update! Spending the day inside Jim's head was awesomely intense. And when he spent that moment behind Pam's desk, I gotta tell you, kinda hot...

And the time with Karen. You did such a great job, the anger, followed by the sadness and guilt.

But then he misses Pam's call! So now the bad day gets better for neither of them!

I need more really soon please!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried about that little "behind the desk" scene. I wanted to show how much he was missing Pam...especially after such a lousy day...but I was worried that it might come off a little bit weird. Glad to hear that it worked for you. So happy that you enjoyed this update!

Summary: Jim is half an hour late for work, and Pam is worried. Set sometime in early Season 4.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1570 Read Count: 4010 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2011 Updated: March 21, 2011
Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 8
Date: March 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, that was sweet.

Author's Response: thanks :)

Firefly by Hannah_Halpert Rated: K [Reviews - 7] 5
Summary: Six weeks into their relationship, Jim and Pam are learning that it really can be close to perfect.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3294 Read Count: 2645 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2011 Updated: April 10, 2011
Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, was that a shout out to me?!? Honored, I am. So happy that you know that my constant pestering is because I really enjoy your story telling and not only because I am a huge nag!

Also, loved this fluffy thing! It was so perfect because I am with Pam, don't care how cute you want to sell it as, a bug is a bug, and it belongs not in my house!

I am so excited to read the next chapter of AIL!

Author's Response: It was most definitely a shout out to you. I can't thank you enough for getting my butt in to hear. And I know you aren't a nag, you're too awesome for that. I'm glad you liked this little piece of fluff... and I'm with you and Pam here, a bug is a bug, they're not cute, and they're not welcome in my house LOL.

The Secret by kaat Rated: K [Reviews - 44] 22
Summary: Past Featured StorySomething big is happening at the Halpert's. Cece knows allllllll about it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Cece Halpert
Genres: Pregnancy/Babies
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8576 Read Count: 12342 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2011 Updated: May 09, 2011
Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Lollipop

I loved this story and very happy you let us into your four year old mind! Whenever you want to share anything else, yes, please!

Summary: Inspired by the Cold Open of 7x20 "Michael's Last Dundies." Spoilers for that.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Cece Halpert, Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Kids/Family, Married, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6464 Read Count: 15439 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: April 23, 2011 Updated: April 30, 2011
Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: She Makes Me Glad I'm a Man

I have to say this is very S. P. I. C. Y!!

I do look forward the rest of this as well as more from your other story and this couples first summer together!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying my stories.

Summary: Set during their early days as a couple. From the challenges thread, based on a quote from Double Date: Michael – Do you wrestle with each other?  Jim – All the time. Suggested by Italian_Food.  My first attempt at bad!fic
 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1700 Read Count: 2870 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2011 Updated: April 27, 2011
Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was super cute! I am always so pleased to see you at the top of the 'Recents' page!

Author's Response: Thank you! That's so nice of you to say! I'm having fun writing right now, so I'm hoping it stays with me. :)

Layover by Annabel Winslow Rated: MA [Reviews - 131] 70 New!
Summary: Jim's path crosses Pam's on an overseas flight.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Claustrophobic Spaces, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16120 Read Count: 30652 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2011 Updated: March 17, 2024
Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute

I'm liking this. Can't wait to hear more about their lives in this AU, and happy they have plenty of time to play catch up on this overseas flight.

I am desperately hoping for fast updates...

Author's Response: Thank you, Aivilo!  They have several hours, that should be plenty.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Rosetta

Another great chapter! I love that Pam didn't let Jim joke his way out of the real explanation of what happened in his life. I love a story with a strong Pam!

She should stay there with him as long as it takes to turn THAT Jim into HER Jim!