Penname: time4moxie Real name: Moxie
Member Since: September 21, 2006

Bio:

 

Writer. Stalker. Hussy.  Not necessarily in that order. 

Reviews are like crack, without the degenerative physical manifestations.

Author of the Month: April 2018  


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Good Advice by Par5 Rated: M [Reviews - 119] 77
Summary: Everyone in the office has relationship advice. What would each of their colleagues say to Pam and Jim about love?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Ensemble, Jan, Jim, Jim/Pam, Josh Porter, Karen, Kelly, Oscar, Oscar/Gil, Pam, Phyllis, Ryan, Toby
Genres: Angst, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16105 Read Count: 13542 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2006 Updated: March 21, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: October 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Ryan

Very cool!  You got Ryan's tone down perfectly!


Author's Response: Thanks Moxie! Ryan doesn't really say a heck of a lot on the show (except with those horrified looks he's so great at) so I was trying not to overstep my bounds too much!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: November 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Jan

Did I review on this before?  I must have - it was very well done then, and it's absolutely SPOOKY now!  Did you get picked up as a ghostwriter on the show?  You know you can tell me..... ;-)

 



Author's Response: Not yet! But I've been working on this sort of Vulcan mind meld from a distance. You know, just to get Jim and Pam together! Thanks Moxie ;)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Oscar

I think the world needs more Oscar & Gil fanfic - this was really good, and I could completely hear Oscar's voice.  Like Phyllis, Oscar is one of the saner members of staff, and I could totally see him take Pam under his wing.  I can't wait until he comes back home!

Author's Response: Thanks Moxie! I'm a huge fan of Oscar - which I think has a lot to do with a role he played on Reno911 - and I thought he would have a lot to say about how a relationship would play out in the office. Plus, if Dwight could have a good time hanging out with Oscar and Gil, I figured Pam would have a blast! (Do you think Oscar's roommate knows he's gay?!)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Karen

There's nothing like the sweet taste of denial first thing on a Monday morning.  If only this is how it would go... (and who knows - they'd never show it on screen anyway - so maybe it does ;-))

Niiice!  [/kevin] 



Author's Response: Thanks Moxie! I love starting the week off with some good denial. I can pretend it's all true until Thursday night, but until then, I'm content in my happy little Karen-free world! Glad you could join me.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Darryl

This one is probably going to end up as one of my favourites of these series.  You really did a great job capturing Darryl.

My only criticism (and it's a small one), is that I was first confused about how Jim could be leaving with Karen and then have him back in the parking lot.  Maybe I just read it too fast, or perhaps there could be some clarification somehow.  

But I really did think it was awesome!  Well done! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Moxie! I think everybody is missing poor Darryl. Jim left (in his own car) following Karen but he was concerned about Pam and came back. Left it a little vague, I know. I'll mull that over!

Now I wish Darryl would give Roy a dope slap! ;)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Angela

This may in fact, have been the best chapter - Angela was just awesome, and the idea of sacrifice is VERY relevate to what Pam should be doing!!!  Your keyboard to Greg Daniels' ear, I say!

Author's Response: Thanks Moxie! As I've said, Angela is rocking my world these days and I cannot wait to see what comes of her vendetta against Andy. It's given me the inspiration to see beyond her stern, judgmental exterior and imagine the softer side of Angela. Which is probably still not soft, but maybe less than rock hard?! Hee!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: March 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Kelly

I still insist you need the Pam's perspective on what happens next.  Don't make me write it for you!!!

This really is one of my favourite stories because you capture everyone's voices so well.  And let's face it - is there really anyone in that office that DOESN'T know about Pam and Jim???

Yay!!!!!   



Author's Response: Mox, I told you that's not how these work! But someday after all the advice has been doled out we'll see what happens next. And if you can't wait, then by all means, go ahead and write it! I double dog dare you....

Summary: Somehow - it was inevitable.  Written for the 'Star-crossed Lovers' Challenge.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Star-Crossed Lovers
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9161 Read Count: 15154 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2006 Updated: December 05, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: October 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay for a likeable Schrute!  I can't wait to see Pam's reaction when they get engaged...

Author's Response:

I like to think Kurt inherited the best of Dwight and Angela - not that that isn't a tad hard to find. :) 

I'm pretty sure everyone's reactions are going to be something to see. ;)

Summary:

Somebody has a hard time watching Pam be happy. Guess who?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1689 Read Count: 3938 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2006 Updated: October 03, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 8
Date: October 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was sweet.  :-)


Author's Response: Thank you!

Only by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 366] 169
Summary: Past Featured Story

This picks up pre-merger and is spoiler free, a bit AU as well.  I began this back in October (maybe even September), and obviously the show has deviated quite a bit from what I speculated here.

This begins with angst, but there is a great deal of fluff, steam, smut, and silly...for several, several chapters.  My idea was to go beyond the happy ending, so to speak.  

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 96362 Read Count: 257496 ePub Downloads: 81
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2006 Updated: May 17, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: October 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Squee!  Enough said. :-)

Very fun, very well written. Right now I'm kind of afraid to read  your WIPs so I don't accidently borrow all the good ideas, scenes, etc. that you've had!

Luckily I believe there's plenty of Jam love to go around.... 

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I love Pam standing up to Angela. And I love sneaking kisses in the elevator.  You certainly know how to write lovely fluffly, happy Jam fic!!!!  :-)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: October 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Now that was some breakfast.  :-)


Author's Response:

*snort*

....sigh (imagining breakfast with Jim Halpert)

 

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: October 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

ah...that was lovely.  Can't wait for the prank!  Very spot on characterizations, as usual.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: October 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Damn you, girl7 - how can you possibly be working at your job when there's Chapter 7 to write??????

And I seriously think Jonathan's going to have to start making appearances in my Jam world.  He's so awesome.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: October 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What can I say?  I just love Jonathan.  And your wonderful style of writing that makes me angst over a story I know/hope will work out in the end.  This has really become one of my favourites. 

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: October 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yay for Angry!Pam, Boo for Role-Reversal!Jim not wanting to see that he still loves Pam!

Double yay for Awesome!Girl7 - can't wait for the next chapter.  :-) 

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: October 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I know I'm a masochist (we all are for loving Jim/Pam so much!), but this was really GOOD angst.  I love strong!Pam and how much it affects confused!Jim.  If only we get to see that on the screen this year....

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: October 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice!  Now where's the rest of it!?  :-D


Author's Response:

AHA! I shall blackmail you - I'll post the rest when you update yours!  :o) I'm only kidding - I actually haven't written the rest yet.  Usually I write really quickly, like a possessed fiend, but I'm forcing myself to go slower with this one. 

Thanks for the review!

Summary: Jim/Pam.  And a phone conversation.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 623 Read Count: 4568 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2006 Updated: October 05, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: October 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay for fluff - there's never too much.  :-) 


Author's Response: Yay, indeed!  There really can never be enough where these two are concerned:)  Thanks for reading!

Too Late? by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 20] 18
Summary:

Jim's been away.  Now he's back.  Pam realizes what she's missed.  No spoilers - just speculation and much wishful thinking.

I added Karen as a character in the story - since she's mentioned.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1186 Read Count: 2963 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2006 Updated: October 07, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: October 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Too Late?

Yay!  Just Yay!  This is the reason you're marked as one of my favourite authors.  :-)


Author's Response: Awww thanks time4moxie!  I appreciate that!!

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhen gods want to punish us, they grant us our wishes.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13048 Read Count: 17987 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2006 Updated: April 14, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: March 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

very nice twists!  I look forward to which possibilities you have her grasp at.  :-)


Author's Response: Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: April 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh, so painful - but I can't wait until she goes to see him - hope it's soon!!!

Good job! 



Author's Response: Thanks, Moxie:)

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat are you going to do with your time off? Travel. It's gonna be really nice. I'm gonna find myself.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2427 Read Count: 3228 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2006 Updated: October 09, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 8
Date: October 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Find Yourself

That was really, really nice.  :-)

Melting by shrewuntamed Rated: T [Reviews - 14] 13
Summary: Pam's POV of the mixing of Scranton and Stamford.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Josh Porter, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 809 Read Count: 1349 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2006 Updated: October 09, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9
Date: October 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

definitely continue - please!

Summary:

This is a story about the Merger, and how Pam deals with it and her feelings.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2368 Read Count: 995 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2006 Updated: October 09, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9
Date: October 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very nice - you could really feel her frustration with him!