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You already know I'm a huge fan of this story, and I'm so sad to see it finished! But this is a great way for it to go out. I love everything about it, how happy they all finally are, and that Claire has a little sister and they're adorably close, and that she and Pam respect one another now. It's all so great. I love the Jim and Pam scene, it's so sweet in it's simplicity. You're fantastic and this story is wonderful.

Author's Response: No YOU'RE wonderful...thank you for all of your support with this..and I'm sure you're continuing support with whatever it is I move onto next. You've been such a huge help Danielle, I couldn't be more happy with it.

I'm so intrigued as to what Emma has up her sleeve here! I love how you've put in some flashbacks of Jim and Sarah, and the flow between Pam and Jim is so seamless. Still loving this and can't wait for an update! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing Emma, she's funny and cute, and I've fallen in love with my fictional character. The flashbacks are always really fun to write, and thank you for the review! More to come soon!!

I'm so glad you're continuing this! I have to say I think, in my opinion this is the most powerful chapter of the story so far. It really pushes the story forward. And the end is very powerful when Claire asks “Did you really love Mom?” How can he explain to her who Pam is to him and not betray Claire's trust in him. I don't know if that made sense, so I hope what you know what I mean. I'm just really glad you're continuing this story. And congratulations on graduation! Can't wait to see what the next chapters bring.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I really worked on the language that I used in this chapter, as well as tried to hit home about some stuff that were personal to me. I love Jim's relationship with Claire, and so this tension is definitely going to stir some things up--as soon as she finds out what Jim's intentions are in Philly ;) Look for an update soon!

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I really enjoyed this, I think the lyrics and moments you chose were so well put together. I hope you're going to continue this!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for the review, Deedldee! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm definitely going to continue. Thanks again :o)

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Wow, these last two chapters are wonderful! I especially love the "25 Years Later" It's just so utterly perfect. And the song lyrics for this last chapter are perfect. I kind of got choked up at the final lyrics. I think I'll be re-reading this often. It's really lovely. You're a great writer!

Author's Response: Deedldee, thank you so much for being so wonderful in reading this story and letting me know. Your review really made my day! The "25 years later" idea is tied to another one of my stories, "Phone Calls", because I just love the idea of a happily ever after with our favorite couple in the far-off future. Thanks once again!

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I love all of your stories, and this is defintely going in my favorites. I love future happy Jim Pam Halpert family fluff! The memory Pam had was perfect and so very Jim like. And cece is very much a normal hormonal teen. I think this is how they'll be in the future. And you capture it do perfectly too. Thanks for this! Hope you'll have more :)

Author's Response: Thanks Deedldee, you are too kind.

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This is just unbelievably awesome! You're writing both characters so 'in character' I can hear their voices in my head. Man, you're good. Please, continue. Thank you. :) Edit - I'm apparently unable to form grammatically correct sentences today. Sorry about that.

Author's Response: Grammatically correct or not, thanks for the review!

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That was breathtaking, and written so smoothly and quietly. Perfect tone. Very well written. I hope you're inspired to write something else soon! This was lovely.

Author's Response: You are so sweet - thank you so much!  This one just seemed to come to me and flowed with such ease.  I feel like my muse for them has come back to me.  I may do another little something here soon :)

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I'm literally on the edge of my seat reading this! I love how Jim's being outwardly strong in front of her and internally he's freaking out. And, I really liked how he called her Beesly in this chapter, it was fitting. I've never had a baby before, but from the sounds of it, it sounds very realistic. Can't wait for the next chapter! And congrats on your ribbon! Well deserved. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much Deedldee, I'm glad you're enjoying the anticipation. That Beesly is for one of my betas, because it always makes her happy, too. I'm trying to stick as closely to reality as possible, since the whole idea is so "unlikely." That said, there is a snowstorm in Scranton at this very moment. Good timing, yes? I was really surprised about the ribbon. I'd like to thank my mom and dad, the mailman, my third grade teacher, my next door neighbor... *snort* Thanks for taking the time to review.

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Eeps! You had me worried about Pam at the end, but yay everything worked out just fine! I love how Jim was freaking out and Pam was completely oblivious to it. Never having given birth I wouldn't know from experience, but what you described sounded pretty realistic, and the final line of the chapter is just perfect. I hope you have a few more chapters of this story up your sleeve. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much Deedldee, I tried to keep it "believable." I just have a short epilogue planned, but I keep getting distracted. I hope to start on it soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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hey!! First to review! I think this is great, and I can't wait to see where you take us here. I feel like you really captured what Jim is feeling in that moment. Add your html code to the italics part and you'll be all set! Keep going with this, I really like it!

Author's Response: Thanks, miss Deedldee! I'm so glad you like this and that you're my trusty beta reader! Quick question - how do I get the story to be in italics? Sometimes my lovely MacBook doesn't work with this site to do what I want it to do... any ideas on how to fix it? Thanks again for reviewing - glad you thought that Jim's emotions sounded realistic.

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haha! Really cute! Short and sweet. And enjoyable lol

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Deedldee!! Glad you liked it!