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I'll Take Girls names that start with a K for 100 by BluetimesTwo Rated: K [Reviews - 7] 10
Summary: The night after the events of "After Hours," Pam notices an odd coincidence. This is pure fluff. It's so fluffy, I could die.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1019 Read Count: 4533 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2012 Updated: July 11, 2012
Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 8
Date: July 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, this was a cute little snippet. Love the part where Cece tells him all about her day. Hope you'll be inspired again soon.

The First Day of the Rest of our Lives by Ilovejimhalpert Rated: K+ [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Set immediately post-The Job. Includes the famous First Date and the immediate aftermath.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 189 Read Count: 1969 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2012 Updated: October 16, 2012
Reviewer: Deedldee Signed
Date: October 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kinda wish this was a little longer and incorporated parts of their interaction after she left the conference room.

This sentence could use a little fix: "Even now, as she sat in the chair" sounds better.

I hope you find that constructive, I in no way mean to offend. I hope you'll continue writing this, I do love first date stories. And if you need any help just let me know, I'd be happy to beta for you.

Author's Response: ok, you won't believe this, but that's exactly what I was going to put! It was like 2 a.m. when I wrote this...so it sucks. but would you beta for me? That would be SO amazing! Btw, I love your stories!

Dear Jon by Labhub Rated: K Round robin [Reviews - 2] 2
Summary: Jim sends a late night email to his brother Jon
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 528 Read Count: 1598 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2012 Updated: October 15, 2012
Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 9
Date: October 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this, I hope you and others will continue. I have to agree, I don't like the two dolts they cast as Jim's brothers at all, never have and never will, so I like that you brought Jon back for this. It's totally believable that he'd have panic attacks about this at home.

Perfect by ecb327 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 4] 1
Summary: It all begins with a piece of paper Jim leaves in the break room. Suddenly everything changes, rumors spread, and definitions become blurred. A delightfully angsty tribute to my OTP.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3065 Read Count: 1867 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2012 Updated: October 20, 2012
Reviewer: Deedldee Signed
Date: October 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Change

Something's up with your word fiance, it's not coming out right.
Interested to see where you're going. When is this supposed to be set during? I know it says AU, but I'm slightly confused by the 'before R announces engagement' part, but Andy's there and he wasn't there in season 2, and Pam wasn't engaged in season 3. Sorry for that, hope you find it constructive, and if you need a beta just let me know I'd be happy to help. I would like to read the rest of this story so please do continue.

Secrets by Dedeen Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 3
Summary: Pam's inner thoughts about the events is the first Three Episodes of Season 9.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Married, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1673 Read Count: 1781 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2012 Updated: October 21, 2012
Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10
Date: October 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so excited that you're back! Not that I don't love this but where's the rest of Set Fire to the Rain? I've been waiting for that for ages!
This was great, I love the background you gave to the situation and I loved hearing Pam's inner thoughts about how she really feels about him keeping a secret from her. I hope the inspiration stays with you and you give us many more of these stories.

Author's Response: I'm very excited to be back too! I'll tell you whats happening to Set Fire to the Rain... I've been trying to write the epilogue, and there is one, except that I can never put an end. I've been trying desperately to tie all the loose ends, but new ideas keep popping up and I keep writing. The epilogue is about 10 pages long right now. So, I just haven't decided what do to yet! But I hope do post something, VERY soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Either Way I Lose by bashert Rated: K+ [Reviews - 9] 8
Summary: One of them is going to have to make a huge sacrifice, and possibly resent the other. That’s the only scenario she can stomach, because the other scenario is that she stays in Scranton and Jim stays in Philadelphia, and even thinking of that makes her stomach lurch.

Spoilers for "Moving On."
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1019 Read Count: 2305 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2013 Updated: March 04, 2013
Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10
Date: March 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: So what difference does it make? Which one I choose?

I haven't read fic in a long time, let alone logged in here. Today I decided to take a break from real life, and happened upon here in honor of the filming of the finale, and I read this, and I had to log in just to tell you how wonderful this is. You hit so many points in such a little span. Everything you have here is completely plausible and so heart breaking, especially the final sentence.
I really do wish they would have talked about these things before it came to this. I'm feeling anxious, and this story really rings so true to that night and I can see it happening like that.
I hope you continue to be inspired.

Author's Response: I agree about the anxiety! I thought to myself, "there's just no good way to resolve this in real life." I'm sure (hoping) that things will work out on the show, but I just kept imagining this couple making this huge decision and neither wants what the other one wants.