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Summary: Jim wants to stop Pam's engagement to Roy, but is forced to watch it all play out because of an obligation to Roy. How far will he let it go though?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39464 Read Count: 39896 ePub Downloads: 24
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2011
Reviewer: aurora Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: I can't do this without you

This chapter has successfully made this story far more complex, in a good but also slightly painful way.

This segment seems to mark a change in the overall direction of your story. Where before Jim seemed to be the "good" guy, suffering in silence, he now appears partially responsible for creating the status quo. The Roy/Jim dynamic is also much more real and understandable now, if also more uncomfortable. In fact, there is hardly a person in this chapter that the reader doesn't have reason to question or become upset with. For example, you paint Jim's father as sympathetic to Jim - or at least aware of his situation. But if so, why the fishing trip and why the silence during the brother's exchange? Tom is another unforeseen complication with a myopic perspective, and lovely Pam seems unsure, even fickle. In short, a bunch of intriguing moments.

I really look forward to seeing where you go with this. I've enjoyed some of your other AUs, so I have no doubt this one will be equally as fun to follow.

Summary: Something unexpected happens to Pam after a car accident, and Jim has to deal with the consequences. Set sometime after Goodbye Toby.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2190 Read Count: 4399 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2008 Updated: August 31, 2008
Reviewer: aurora Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Okay

This is such a great idea, and so well written. I know it has been a long time since it was posted, but I wanted to put in a plea to have it updated. Any chance the inspiration is still there?

In particular, I love your portrayal of Season two Pam. The few gesture do a better job of conveying her mindset than any longer description could. Here's hoping to see more of it!

Febrility by yanana Rated: M [Reviews - 131] 48
Summary: febrility (n.) - a rise in the temperature of the body.



Somewhere in January 2007, season three.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25530 Read Count: 50333 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2010 Updated: January 22, 2011
Reviewer: aurora Signed
Date: January 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This is a really delicious story. Angst, steam, and subtle foreshadowing. Wonderful. I can't wait to read what comes next.

Summary: Jim Halpert, the producer of a new documentary-style reality TV show, falls for one of the cast members of The Office.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52626 Read Count: 26531 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2011 Updated: May 01, 2011
Reviewer: aurora Signed
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Magic's in the Makeup

Interesting premise, but the execution of the idea is what really grabbed me. Your portrayal of Pam in this universe seems very viable and quite melancholy. And Jim is beginning to take more shape with their interactions. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you so much, aurora! There will be more Jim stuff very soon that will help flesh him out more.

Summary: Jim does a little bit of wedding planning. Set at the very beginning of season six. Spoilers for this little episode called 'Niagara'...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2099 Read Count: 2808 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2011 Updated: March 03, 2011
Reviewer: aurora Signed
Date: March 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute story. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank YOU for dropping a note, I'm glad you thought it was cute :)