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Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39464 Read Count: 39896 ePub Downloads: 24
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: I can't do this without you
This chapter has successfully made this story far more complex, in a good but also slightly painful way.
This segment seems to mark a change in the overall direction of your story. Where before Jim seemed to be the "good" guy, suffering in silence, he now appears partially responsible for creating the status quo. The Roy/Jim dynamic is also much more real and understandable now, if also more uncomfortable. In fact, there is hardly a person in this chapter that the reader doesn't have reason to question or become upset with. For example, you paint Jim's father as sympathetic to Jim - or at least aware of his situation. But if so, why the fishing trip and why the silence during the brother's exchange? Tom is another unforeseen complication with a myopic perspective, and lovely Pam seems unsure, even fickle. In short, a bunch of intriguing moments.
I really look forward to seeing where you go with this. I've enjoyed some of your other AUs, so I have no doubt this one will be equally as fun to follow.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2190 Read Count: 4399 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Okay
This is such a great idea, and so well written. I know it has been a long time since it was posted, but I wanted to put in a plea to have it updated. Any chance the inspiration is still there?
In particular, I love your portrayal of Season two Pam. The few gesture do a better job of conveying her mindset than any longer description could. Here's hoping to see more of it!
Somewhere in January 2007, season three.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25530 Read Count: 50333 ePub Downloads: 5
Date: January 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
This is a really delicious story. Angst, steam, and subtle foreshadowing. Wonderful. I can't wait to read what comes next.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52626 Read Count: 26531 ePub Downloads: 6
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Magic's in the Makeup
Interesting premise, but the execution of the idea is what really grabbed me. Your portrayal of Pam in this universe seems very viable and quite melancholy. And Jim is beginning to take more shape with their interactions. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh! Thank you so much, aurora! There will be more Jim stuff very soon that will help flesh him out more.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2099 Read Count: 2808 ePub Downloads: 2
Date: March 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very cute story. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for dropping a note, I'm glad you thought it was cute :)