Penname: kaystar Real name: Karen
Member Since: July 09, 2006

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Five Days by Jodithgrace Rated: K [Reviews - 16] 14
Summary: How Jim Met Pam. A prequel to my Jam Sessions Series.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11965 Read Count: 12472 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2006 Updated: July 29, 2006
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 6
Date: July 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Friday

One of my favorites that I was glad to read again. I love how their friendship started.

Ready by Willow Rated: MA [Reviews - 10] 17
Summary: Pam is ready for the next step with Jim. This vignette picks up where "When You Are Ready" left off.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2278 Read Count: 6503 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2006 Updated: July 29, 2006
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: July 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. That's hot.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Summary: A futuristic look at Jim and Pam. VERY angsty. Oneshot.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 766 Read Count: 1911 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2006 Updated: July 29, 2006
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: July 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so heartbreakingly sad - "And because, sometime back, she heard something about him getting married, and she remembered not feeling anything at all." Wonderfully written.

Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar. Hope it didn't get you too depressed :)

After the Fall by girl7 Rated: MA [Reviews - 113] 80
Summary: This was inspired by the recent spoilers we've gotten (but is purely speculation on my part). Picks up three and a half months after Casino Night, and will extend (hopefully) to Jim's return to Scranton, incorporating the new girl in his life...for a while. ;o)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79604 Read Count: 105831 ePub Downloads: 36
[Report This] Published: August 01, 2006 Updated: August 04, 2006
Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: August 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow. I was prepared not to like this chapter, but you wrote it so well, I did. Jim deserves to be happy, even with someone else (I keep telling myself!) Still breaks my heart though. Very romantic love scene.

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much! It was hard to just invent a character like that; I didn't know what to do to make her likeable, but not too much like Pam. As for the love scene - yeah, figured we could excuse him if the girl came on to him in his own bed. I mean, what else could he have done?? :o)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: August 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wonderful chapter. You have Pam's voice down just perfectly. I even felt sad for poor Roy. Thanks for updating so quickly, I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! I've gotten sidetracked, posting some other stuff I've written, but I'll get back to this one eventually.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: August 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love, love love this story. I can picture Casino Night ending just as you described. Great job, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: August 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter. I just love this story although parts are difficult to read. I hope the happy ending is on the horizon, although I guess it won't be a happy one for Andi.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'm getting to the happy ending (I think). And yeah, it won't be too happy for Andi. Not sure what I'll do with her when all is said and done. Maybe give her a puppy and send her on her way.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: August 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What heartbreakingly awesome chapter. I don't think it's over the top at all. I can see how that would slip out when she had been drinking, I think you're doing a great job and I can't wait to read more.

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Date: August 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh no! Another broken heart-to-be added to the mix. This is sooo good! Please hurry with chapter 9.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: August 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love, love, LOVE this chapter. I was wondering how you were going to handle Andi. You did it so well, I know she is hurt but she was so noble to do what she did. I felt badly for her (but not badly enough that I wanted them to stay together.) How in the world will they all work together now? Hope Ms. B. hasn't gotten in too deep with Roy...

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: August 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wonderful chapter. I was so afraid Jim would run back to Andi. And poor Roy. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I am really loving this story.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: August 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I don't mean this as a criticism, as I love this story no matter what, but you repeated this line - "Pam….” His expression was so serious, so earnest. Then he smiled. “It sounds trite, I know, to say that I had a great time tonight, but really…”

I just wanted you to know. Once. (hee hee)


Author's Response: Oh my god - that last line of yours cracked me up! I almost choked on my lunch! THanks for the heads up!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: August 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

"Oh my god, she thought. Why did I say I want to take this slow?" Yes, Pam, why did you say that?

Smut! Smut! Smut! Smut!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: August 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is the most beautifully erotic chapter I have ever read. Simply amazing.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: August 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

"Pam didn’t want him, and even if she did….well, it was just too late now." After the fun he is having with Andi, I'm afraid Jim might be right! But if he doesn't tell her about Pam I think the next chapter(s) should be very interesting.

Summary:

This is essentially my take on the "unseen" challenge. I've written a couple of these, and I originally thought I'd do one for every episode, but I'm thinking that's too ambitious for me -- especially when someone else has already done it so perfectly. But for what it's worth....

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130778 Read Count: 162956 ePub Downloads: 81
[Report This] Published: August 01, 2006 Updated: September 11, 2006
Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: September 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Performance Review: part II

This line really shows how much in denial Pam is:

"It was that realization that made the tears come as she clung to him desperately, not wanting to let him go, seized with the insane urge to beg him to move here, just so he could keep an eye on Jim after she got married. "   I love how Jonathan is trying to help facilitate a breakthrough.  Makes my heart break for Jim.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: September 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

I am so sorry to see this story end.  I have thoroughly enjoyed reading each chapter. Totally awesome ending.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: September 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: At Last

Jim's goodbyes at the office was so very sad - as was Jim and Pam at his house in the beginning.  But when the sadness ended, that was the hottest JAMiness EVER. Wow, you can write some love scenes!! WOW.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: September 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: More Aftermath (running out of titles here....)

I truly loved this line from Michael - “Pam….sometimes you have to put your faith in chance in order to really have one.”  Then at the end I was afraid Pam was going to change her mind.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: September 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Aftermath

The scene with Roy and Pam was so believable. I'm glad she had the strength to continue on with Roy breaking down so. Very realistic too for him to try to fix it with kissing and sex.  Very well done.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10
Date: September 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: The Day After

I was afraid that Jonathan might be developing feelings for Pam, too, although he wouldn't do that to his brother. So much sadness and agnst, and she hasn't even told Roy yet. Poor Jim and poor Pam. I feel badly for all of them. Even Roy in a way.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: September 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Casino Night - part II

What an awesome chapter.  I felt so badly when Jim was hurting so. And how wise of Jim to realize it would take her time to end the relationship with Roy and get over the guilt.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: September 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Casino Night - part I

This was so beautifully done. I had to chuckle over Pam saying that Jonathan could do the reading at the wedding.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: September 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Conflict Resolution

Poor drunk Jim.  I do wish Pam had been more comforting. I loved Pam trying to lighten things up at work by saying that Jim said he loved Dwight more than his brother.

Author's Response: Yeah - a bit unrealistic that she could act fine around him at work after what he'd said to her.  But then, lots of what I've written has been, so..... :o)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed
Date: August 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Hot Girl

I'm really enjoying these - very well written and very true to their characters. I'm anxious to read more.