I really love this series, I could read it over and over again and never tire of it.
If you were ever to come back and write again I hope it would be to complete this story. Just 4 months left and hopefully an epilogue.
In my mind he proposes on New Years and her wedding dress will be the same dress she wore when she revealed herself as his true love, only she'll have her friend Abby make it in white. And for a wedding gift she'd have created some sort of scrapbook that would include both of their 12 days.
I just wish I could read all the amazing details you'd include to complete the story.

Come on!! You stopped!?! You stopped there?!? WHY!!!!!!!

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This is one I’ve come back to many times. It will always be a top favorite. (As are a few others from you.)
But what I wouldn’t give to have a companion piece written in jims POV.

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I can’t believe I missed this update but I’ve just had so much going on lately!
First I cannot begin to tell you how happy I am that the story is being continued, this and another of yours were always a couple of my favorite unfinished stories on this site.

While I can’t say this new beginning is exactly the route I would have wanted them to take it definitely feels most true for what Pam needs right now. Poor Jim, such a sweet boy and he just loves her so much. But it’s nice to have them rebuilding that friendship that will keep them solid in the long run. I hope sure hope another chapter is coming soon!

I wish I could describe this better but I am not a writer and have never had a way with words but I love the way you write. It's so true to character and very realistic to Jim and Pam. This isn't fairytaled up. They way you've written out his sexual history and his thoughts and feelings on the matters of women and sex is almost exactly my thoughts.

You are definitely one of my favorite authors.

Author's Response: Idajno80, thank you so much! So cool to get a review after all this time! I'm glad you enjoyed this story and that it spoke to you. Just to do a little plug: My first novel will be published in 2017. It's a young adult novel called ZENN DIAGRAM (you can check it out on Amazon or Goodreads). It'll be available on 4/4/17. I hope you'll read it! It's not Jim and Pam, but if you like my writing, maybe you'll enjoy it!

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I really am not a fan of script fic. But I can honestly say the exception is if it’s written by kgreene... I love this!

Wow! I really, really like this. First of all, it's really fun to see their first months together in flashbacks through Pam's eyes, very different. I also really enjoyed your detail and observations of their past. The Jim in Stamford chapter was especially moving, I like how you wrote that time for him as still very Pam centric even through his time getting to know Karen.
But it's so nice how you can seamlessly transition back to the present and have a whole new storyline. The conversation between Jim and Pam in the present time, about his career and who he is, was so great I love that his insecurities came out more while he was drunk and found it interesting that it was prompted by Karen. The Mark chapter was really cute too, I enjoyed your version of him.
Very well done, I'm sad that it wasn't completed.

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Such a small amount of words in this story but every single one of them was just right. Perfect, I love this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't believe I wrote this so long ago and people are still enjoying it. Thanks for reading!

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Good lord you are a talented writer, just so damn smart with these characters.
This whole series has so much brilliance but I have to say chapters 1, 5, and 8 are my favorites but ch 7 (the fight) is just so incredibly well done. A true standout.
I truly hope you are still writing. If you ever feel like writing for jam again just know there are plenty of readers here and even a good handful of writers to keep you company as well.

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I didn't want to read this, the idea is just too depressing but I really did enjoy it. This story is just so beautiful and bittersweet and just so well done. I would have loved an epilogue where jim finally shows his wife pam the letters and the picture.

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There are definitely people still here :) In fact we have an awesome post on the home page showing just how great this site is doing!

I am caught up and this has definitely been worth the wait! Quite the ride for sure.

Love the mention of the nye party in this chapter because (so far) my favorite scene comes from then when is jim in awe of being able to finally call Pam his girlfriend. Loved that!

One thing I was really pleased with in this chapter was Pam after wondering if she could go stay by Jim for the weekend that “You know what...I totally could.”
I’ve felt that their relationship has seemed a little high school at times and these two are in their early 20s. So yes adult Pam, you totally can spend the weekend with your boyfriend! And hopefully we’ll get those I love you’s soon as well!

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That was so great!
And honest to god, that entrance, up until right after the pizza guy arrived, was just how I imagined it happening.
And the “I love you” was adorable!

Definitely enjoyed this chapter :D