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"TBC (at some point LOL)"

^It's never too late! There are a few unfinished fics that I would pay, really would pay, with real money! (if I could afford to). Cardiac care and Shame is the Same as Guilt, come to mind, any unfinished fic by time4moxie, and this one, AIL. $5 a chapter??? I know there's got to be more than just me still reading, but aside from the readers, wouldn't it just feel amazing to have completed this story that you put so much time and effort into already. Such a shame to have such an amazing fic unfinished.

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I always get so sad when I get to this last chapter. This universe is phenomenal, I wish it were complete.

Indie rock and keds is in the company of an elite few for me, after I finish this last chapter I always want to go back and read indie rock again, very few stories do I want to read over again immediately after I finish them. But this universe, the journey that we take with Jim and Pam is so real and honest, and this story has everything.

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“Alright, guys, that's the end. I always intended this this series to be a trilogy so please let me know if you guys are interested in seeing a third story where Jim and Pam deal with Stamford, Karen, and everything season 3 related. “

Oh how I wish! This story amazes me every time I read it!

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Sigh... I really love this chapter

Yes! Even now there are people that want this finished! It would be a freaking miracle, I know, but that doesn't make me not wish it were so.

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This is just brilliant, one of the most well written stories on this site. It's hilarious and smart and romantic and just so well done. And with such an out of the box situation, nothing feels forced. Not in the slightest.

At first I thought all the business aspects of story would be way over my head, I haven't worked in over 14 years, but you managed to write it in a way that is smart but still very easy to understand.

I feel fairly confident assuming that this story was well planned out, probably to the end. Even in the very first chapter jim has already started thinking about ways to turn this Scranton acquisition into a better opportunity for himself professionally and personally. Jim and Pam’s development and characterization was written so well, the chemistry between them is outstanding and that is an odd thing to find in fanfic, characters written so well I can sense their chemistry. And then of course all the details and depth of each scene. It kills me that so much amazing work, time, thought went into this story and it hasn’t been properly finished. I’d love to know what happened when Jo arrived. How did jim and Pam convince her that they weren’t taking advantage. Does Jim end up getting the job up north overseeing the DM branches? Is Pam successful in training program? Does Pam meet the Halpert family? And how do they react to her? So many questions left unanswered.

From Jim working through his existential crisis to following the development of jim and pams relationship and all the acquisition story in between... this is one of very few stories that just sticks with me long after I read it and it just begs to be finished and marked complete.

Guh! Heart wrenching. And you do it so well. I have two story ideas, I really wish I could write like you to see my ideas come alive. Sadly, I am just not good with words.

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear you liked it! What are your other story ideas? I haven't written in a little while but I'm always interested in hearing ideas, especially Jim & Pam ideas :-)

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Wow! I really love this! I wish there were more people out there still writing quality jam fic like this one!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate knowing someone is still reading and reviewing stuff around here!

I stumbled upon this again tonight...It's been quite awhile since I last reviewed this story and a lot has changed around here. For one, our little archive is under new ownership and management. Second, we've had a good amount of new stories and activity lately..

I'd like to invite you back, hopefully to finish this fic! I really like this idea and I hope you've got more to add!

Ahhhh.... These are so great! I love them all but 3&4 are my favorites :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :-) 4 of these vignettes were written years ago, so I'm glad to finally finish the fic!

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Lol! That fries/shake line ended up so cheesy but it works so well!

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This is one of my favorite episodes so of course I love this 😍 Just the right amount of goofy, fluff, and sexiness.
Jim climbing over the center rather than going out the door had me cracking up, I can’t imagine my 6’1” DH doing that at all but then I pictured Jim climbing out of that box all gangly and I wouldn’t want it any other way, it’s just too funny.
Gotta say though, I think my favorite part is this.

"Or our shower," Pam said with a smirk.

This is so different! It's very funny, I like it, and I like your writing style!

Author's Response: Thanks! Will have another chapter up soon, glad you like it.