Penname: alittlestitious2 Real name: Hatty
Member Since: October 02, 2016

Bio:

I'm here for the same reason as everyone else... To celebrate T.V's greatest couple of all time! I will happily fight anyone who disagrees... 



Beta-Reader Status
Ratings I'll Beta for: K  K+  T  M  MA
Turn Around Time for 1 Chapter: 4-7 Days (depending on what my week looks like...)


I Can Help With: |Other English Dialects (I'm British)| Punctuation & Spelling | Grammar | Plot Suggestions | In-depth editing | Show Canon Knowledge |

Editing Experience: I proof read people's job/university applications and make creative suggestions.

 What can I bring to your stories as your beta: I'm a Brit currently living in London, so if anyone wants an injection of British ~vibe~ or wit, then I'm your girl! I've also traveled Europe a lot, so if any Dunder Mifflinite was to take a holiday there, I could help with that too. My writing style tends to use quite a lot of imagery, so there's potential for me to add that in for you if you feel your piece could be improved in that way. That being said, I'm happy to help with anything you need. I'm not afraid to help you write "darker" fics either.

Stories/Topics I prefer not to beta: I'll do anything, but I'm definitely a  die-hard Jammer. However, I am certainly up for the challenge of maybe explaining why characters made misguided decisions in the past.

I preferred to be contacted via: email: hattywheeler@gmail.com


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Reviews by alittlestitious2
Summary: Pam changes outfits- and herself. Speculative post-The Job.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10447 Read Count: 51317 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2007 Updated: March 15, 2017
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: March 16, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: I will be OK

The update made me read the whole thing! It's a great idea and the latest chapter was just so sad, (but good!).

Author's Response: Thank you! I wrote most of it a loooong time ago but I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: Pam is realizing alot when a new documentary being filmed at work, makes her look at herself from a new angle. When people are suddenly paying attention to you, you have to pay attention too.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28616 Read Count: 9840 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2011 Updated: March 24, 2012
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: January 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Lol it's taken you longer than a year...
(I do love this fic Urgh! I wish I'd been around in 2012!)

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/406/images/mtad.jpgPam Beesly really likes Valentine's Day. Well, mostly.
A look at Valentine's Days through the years with Jim and Pam (from Pam's POV).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Holiday, Inner Monologue, Kids/Family, Married, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Explicit sexual content, Mild sexual content, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25931 Read Count: 28858 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2015 Updated: February 20, 2019
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: April 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Mo chuisle mo chroi - 2010

Omg I love this story; I can't believe I'm only just now reading it! Your characterisation is fantastic and it feels as though it's cannon. I really liked the bit of dialogue about it inheriting her dorky dance moves, and I knew exactly what you meant by Jim's famous sad face :) ! (or :( haha)
Looking forward to the next chapter now!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad that it all feels in canon since that's what I'm going for with this particular fic. I'm glad you knew the about Jim's "sad" face, I wish they had kept that (and lots of other JAM scenes in S4). The next chapter is maybe . . . 55% written, so do look for it soonish.

Summary:

Checking in on Jim's thoughts a week after certain events.
*double update: Chap 8 + 9 posted**
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Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Drama, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3843 Read Count: 11363 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2016 Updated: April 06, 2018
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: May 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Hangover

Oooh very defiant from old Jim! I like the use of the line through the writing! It really creates the feel of it being Jim's thoughts, where he has to keep telling himself not to keep thinking about Pam, (which works in the context of this fic, especially when you have him delete her text at the end). It's all very symbolic: Jim has to physically try to forget her, rather than move on naturally! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! Yes I imagine Jim had to put a big strike-through in a lot of his thoughts at this time.

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: August 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Merger

Those last 2 paragraphs just completely encapsulate I think everything the writers were intending the audience to believe Jim was thinking/trying to do back then! Superb!

Summary: Picks up right at the Jim/Pam conclusion of Season 3, leading up to and including their first date.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22382 Read Count: 12705 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2016 Updated: March 01, 2017
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: January 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm sorry about the crickets too! I'm actually relatively new to The Office, (since it ended when I was 12), so I wish I was part of the fan base when it was in its "hay day", but I'm so thankful that a few people still post brilliant fics like this one! It's well written, the characterisation is fab and I'd definitely kill for a smutty epilogue ;) Since I've finally managed to recover my account, I'll actually be able to comment on the fics I read now... Keep keeping the fanbase alive!

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yes a new installment! And yes, in true Jim and Pam fashion, this is the perfect amount of smut and the perfect amount of cuteness. Honestly, this is one of the most realistic AND romantic "first time" fics out there-- it's perfect! The characterisation is spot on and that thing about the yearbook picture with the art was brilliant. Pam is acting the exact way I'd expect her to, as is Jim, (of course he'd wait for her to make the first move)!
I can't wait for the next chapter; I know you said it's gonna be the last one, but I'd be happy if this continued indefinitely!
I'd definitely leave reviews...

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Omg I'm blushing! What I said about being one of the most realistic/perfect "First Time" stories out there has most definitely been corroborated here...
Honestly I love it and I'm so so glad there are still more installments! Characterisation was fantastic. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks for all of the nice reviews!

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 16, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yowza indeed! I loved it-- I think you did a great job with getting inside Jim's head to be honest, so well done! Again all the stuff about Pam initiating things but also being shy was spot on, as was Jim's thoughts about Roy and stuff. As always the characterisation was fab and it all just seemed so real!
I'd love to read Pam's thoughts as umm... they do the deed!

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: March 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I was looking forward to this update! This is a really sweet chapter and a great set up for like the cutest Jim and Pam weekend story line ever!
The bit about Pam validating her choices to herself was really satisfying and believable! I always imagined that soon after The Job there must have been a moment of smugness/pride where she felt like she'd actually made the right decision after a year where everything that happened suggested otherwise. Almost like a reward?
Looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks!  This is actually my final chapter, though- after writing about their date for 22,000+ words, writing about their entire 3-day weekend would probably end up being a whole novel.  I pretty much said everything I wanted to :) Thanks for your great reviews!

Iris by Moonlightlove Rated: M [Reviews - 12] 13
Summary:

Minutes after Casino Night, Jim and Pam deal with the aftermath and living away from each other. After Jim gets settled in Stamford, and Pam is adjusting to life without Jim in Scranton and with her fiancé Roy, Pam and Jim end up meeting back together at a Dunder Mifflin convention with their bosses. Lots of Love and heartache.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8637 Read Count: 2304 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2017 Updated: August 16, 2017
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: I Will Never Be Able to Let This Go

Good to see new writers!
I really enjoy reading Jim's perspective after Casino Night and I love how upset you portrayed him as in order to explain the move to Stamford. Looking forward to the next installment :)
Maybe Pam's perspective for a chapter?

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: May 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Maybe I'll Forget

Omg I can't believe that I've only just found this fic! I can't wait for the next update...

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: August 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: That's All I Want

Love it! Can't wait for more; keep it up! :)

Summary:  A response to this challenge "Get Jim & Karen together/apart in 55 words". Jim and Karen's (and Pam's) relationship in 6 55-word parts.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Challenges: 55, Get Jim and Karen together/apart in 55 words
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 317 Read Count: 1658 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2017 Updated: February 02, 2017
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: The End and The Beginning

Clever! I have no idea how people can convey a story, feelings and character interpretation in so little words... It was really good!

Author's Response: you left this review a while ago but thank you! it was a fun little challenge!

Out of the Fog by Kat11 Rated: MA [Reviews - 8] 15
Summary:

 This story takes place right after the events of Valentine's Day, season 2. Pam has an epiphany and realizes that the life she wants isn't necessarily the life she has now. 

Valentines Day Contest Readers Choice

Disclaimer: I own nothing but my laptop and my imagination which is scary at times. Everything belongs to NBC who decided to cancel it.

 

This takes place during Valentine's Day and I've deiced to enter it into the 2017  Valentine's Day Writing Challenge. It's my first story here so I'm beyond excited. 

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Valentine's Day Writing Contest 2017
Series: Valentine's Day 2017
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9659 Read Count: 3850 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2017 Updated: February 16, 2017
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm pretty new to this site too!
So glad I took the time to read this; I'm blushing haha! Dear lord that was some fabulous smut... It had just the right amount of detail!
I thoroughly enjoyed this and hope you write more in the future!

Author's Response: Thanks so much I was worried about the detailing but I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Im working on two new ones now. Please keep reading!

Summary:

A drunken phone call between Pam and Jim, set in Season 3. 

Warning: References to alcohol

DISCLAIMER:  I don't own the Office.  If I did, there would be more drunk Pam. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2874 Read Count: 1851 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2017 Updated: February 23, 2017
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: put your memories beside mine

Ahhh okay I really like this! The conversation was completely believable; it felt so candid as I read it!

Author's Response:

Hi alittlestitious2,

Thank you so much for another kind review! I'm glad I was able to make their conversation seem believable, I'm so happy to hear that! I hope you continue to read and review my future stories!

Kind regards,

msteapot 

Voicemails by msteapot Rated: M [Reviews - 28] 14
Summary:

 

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The voicemails Pam and Jim leave each other, after a 'hard day's work' at Dunder-Mifflin.  Will be covering every episode from Season 1 - Season 9.  

DISCLAIMER:  I don't own the Office or any of the characters affiliated with it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9383 Read Count: 3280 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2017 Updated: November 16, 2017
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Pilot

Oooh interesting... I like it! Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Hi alittlestitious2,

I love your username! And I'm glad you like the story, I hope you continue reading as it develops.  Feel free to leave reviews on following chapters, I'd love to hear from you.

Kind regards,

msteapot 

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Health Care

I'm glad you enjoyed writing from Jim's perspective, because that characterisation was fantastic! I could totally hear his voice in my head as I read it.
I really like this idea to vocalise the inner monologue of Jim and Pam in this way to almost summarise each episode, it's a great and engaging idea!
Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: The Alliance

Interesting! I really enjoy reading things that elaborate on their friendship before season 3! And I think this conversation seems cannon! I mean, she refers to him as her best friend all the time, so I always thought that they must seen each other outside of the office a lot, which we as the viewer never got to see!
Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response:

Hey alittlestitious2, 

Thanks for another review; I love reading your opinions! I totally agree with you, in terms of the outside of the office relationship between Jim & Pam.  Of course, they've been working together for many years, but I think their friendship is actually underrated. I think, considering how close they are as friends, there is a lot more IM-ing, phone calling and small hangouts than we as an audience never saw.  

I hope you continue reading & reviewing! :) 

- msteapot  

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: February 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Basketball

I don't think it's too obvious! I think it was a good idea-- it was really sweet reading how Jim tried to explain why he bought it though! It's almost as if you could tell that as he said it, I realised it was perhaps a bit of an odd thing for someone who was just a 'friend' to do haha. Maybe the voicemails could include more moments where Pam is oblivious whereas the reader is like "Urgh come on!!"?
I enjoyed it!

Author's Response:

Hey alittlestitious2!

Thanks so much for your comments. I agree with what you said about Pam's oblivion. For this episode in particular I almost found it difficult to find that balance between Pam's ignorance towards Jim's feelings and her affection for her. I think that was based off of the fact that there were so many blatantly obvious flirtatious moments between the two. The "good luck" scene, the mall invitation she never turns down, her obvious concern for Jim (versus Roy) and when Pam checked him out. I'll definitely try incorporating Pam's oblivion in the next chapter though; you're right  about how it is in her NATURE (in season 1 + 2) to seem oblivious to Jim's adoration.

Thanks for the advice! And I appreciate the fact that you're still reading LOL! :)

~ msteapot 

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: May 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Office Olympics

This is probably the chapter that shows off your imagination the best! I love how you elaborated on the Hate Ball thing and turned it into The Smash! It's like, totally something that could've been cannon and was done so well. I think you did a great job of creating the feeling of Pam being almost protective of "her Jim" meaning that she's not so keen on sharing his imagination and inside jokes with anyone else, and how she has that insecurity of believing Jim doesn't feel the same way, (little does the know). And then obviously with the voicemail premise, we are reminded of how much he too cherishes their "things" together. It's really emblematic of the entire Jim-Pam concept of miscommunication in the early seasons. It makes me interpret your portrayal of Pam's understanding of her feelings towards Jim as like, nieve and oblivious. As if it litrally hasn't crossed her mind that she's in love with him.

Anyway, looking forward for the next update! I love this fic! :)

Author's Response:

Hi alittlestitious2!

Thank you so much for your AMAZING review! I do feel that Pam was oblivious to her romantic feelings towards Jim but also very protective of the friendship they shared. It had always been Pam/Jim VS everybody, so I think once Pam actually fell in love with Jim (romantically), it would have been confusing for her and just blurred into what their friendship was to her. I really loved The Smash idea, so I'm glad it worked out well! With regards to the voicemail Jim leaves Pam, I think it's incredibly emblematic of his character. He has fun with her, and the rest of the office, for the entire day but it always comes back to the little safe space they created of just the two of them!

Again, I'm so glad you enjoy this fic! Thanks for reading

- msteapot 

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: March 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Hot Girl

I love that last paragraph or so about Pam's denial! It's spot on; it's hard to believe that she was knowingly in love with him for 4 years before doing anything about it, so it makes sense that she almost convinced herself otherwise! I think that's the portrayal the writers on the show had anyway, and that really comes across here!

Author's Response:

Hi alittlestitious2! 

Thanks for reviewing again! As I've mentioned before, I totally agree with you.  I think (from Pam's perspective) the line between friendship and romance almost blurred when it came to Jim, and she was actually aware of this.  That's why we have scenes like Pam calling Jim her brother, to sort of establish the friendship boundary! I'm glad you agree! 

~ msteapot 

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: March 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: The Dundies

One of my favourite episodes too!
I just love love love Pam's reaction to the voicemail! It was just too cute. I always wondered whether the writers intended for Pam to remember the kids or not...

Author's Response:

Thank you alittlestitious2!  I was really debating over whether Pam remembered the kiss or not -- I even wrote an alternate ending where she doesn't remember! But with the feelings Pam had for Jim, I don't think it was something she really could have forgotten :) 

Thanks for being a fan of the story -- I appreciate all of your reviews! 

~ msteapot  

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: May 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Sexual Harassment

Love this update! I like how with every successive chapter, Pam seems to be having more subconscious doubts about Roy and ~thoughts~ about our lovely Jim! I always find her mom an interesting character-- you know, the perspective on the Jim-Pam relationship must have been mighty interesting, especially early on! Like, if it was me, I'd be wondering every day how to ask my daughter whether she perhaps had feelings for Jim...
Anyway, love this fic, looking forward to the next update! :)

Author's Response:

Hi alittlestitious2! Thanks for always being such a great reader and reviewer. I've never really thought about the Pam-Mom relationship.  It would definitely be interesting to go into, because she quite obviously knew that Pam had a crush on Jim.  The fact that she was supportive about that, even with Pam being engaged to Roy at the time, is super interesting to consider!  

~ msteapot 

Summary:

Jim helps Cece and Philip create art for Valentine's Day. Things get out of hand.

Valentines Day Contest Mods Choice

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Cecelia, Jim, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Valentine's Day Writing Contest 2017
Series: Valentine's Day 2017
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1784 Read Count: 1341 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2017 Updated: March 05, 2017
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed
Date: March 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha sweet story! I always love fics set in the present day, and this did not disappoint!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment! So glad you enjoyed it!