Bio:
I'm here for the same reason as everyone else... To celebrate T.V's greatest couple of all time! I will happily fight anyone who disagrees...
Beta-Reader Status:
Ratings I'll Beta for: K K+ T M MA
Turn Around Time for 1 Chapter: 4-7 Days (depending on what my week looks like...)
I Can Help With: |Other English Dialects (I'm British)| Punctuation & Spelling | Grammar | Plot Suggestions | In-depth editing | Show Canon Knowledge |
Editing Experience: I proof read people's job/university applications and make creative suggestions.
What can I bring to your stories as your beta: I'm a Brit currently living in London, so if anyone wants an injection of British ~vibe~ or wit, then I'm your girl! I've also traveled Europe a lot, so if any Dunder Mifflinite was to take a holiday there, I could help with that too. My writing style tends to use quite a lot of imagery, so there's potential for me to add that in for you if you feel your piece could be improved in that way. That being said, I'm happy to help with anything you need. I'm not afraid to help you write "darker" fics either.
Stories/Topics I prefer not to beta: I'll do anything, but I'm definitely a die-hard Jammer. However, I am certainly up for the challenge of maybe explaining why characters made misguided decisions in the past.
I preferred to be contacted via: email: hattywheeler@gmail.com
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Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29537 Read Count: 100705 ePub Downloads: 41
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Words Left Unsaid
Did you write all of this? If so, wow! If not so, it works really well!
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Reign Dance
"As you wish.." YES! Clever!
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Adios Motherfuckers
Right, how have you managed mixing a cocktail come across as erotic? Talent my friend, pure talent...
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Que Shiraz, Shiraz
Ugh oh! Are we gonna get to see some of drunk Jim and Pam? I must read on to continue! (The real question that remains to be answered is of course whether red and white wine do really make orange...)
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Pamdora's Box
Honestly, the line "always the quiet ones" was absolutely perfect and completely summed up the entire fic haha! In some magical and skilled way, you have managed to make Jim, Pam and dom/sub actually work. It actually seems believable, which I certainly would never have thought before! The more I think about it, the more it actually makes sense for Pam to be a bit of a submissive, and only really let that side of her bubble to the surface once she was in a safe and loving relationship! Bravo! :)
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Taming of the Sinew
Omg as soon as I read the title of the chapter I was applauding you! And upon reading said chapter, the context of what's written in it actually makes sense with the themes in the play itself! I would be proud too!
P.S I actually died when she asked him to get her a glass of water haha
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Spicy Tuna and the Carnivore
If I had been eating rice at the time, I too would have spat it out omg! :)
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Mall Brats
I read your note at the end and felt the companionship that someone is as obsessed with The Office as I am! YES! :)
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Rushin' Green
Ah I wonder what shop Mr Jim Halpert wants to go to...
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Daisy
Jesus Christ. Where did that come from omg hahaha?! Honestly, I think I spat out my drink,, I did NOT see that coming.. I'm not usually one for dominant/submissive stuff but here I am definitely willing to give it a shot! That was sooo hot...
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Don't Stop Us Now
Ima just keep reading... ;)
Date: July 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: It's a Date
I promise you I will review every single chapter of this passion project of yours... I am extremely excited by this! The instant messaging was sooo good and seemed cannon, (Don't Stop Believing banter before it was cool), and can I just say that "halpme" is a stroke of genius!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the chapter reviews! I feel like flow is not necessarily my strong point, so any feedback that you have is SO appreciated.
Date: July 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: A Three-Minute Tour
"Me too. Let's literally eat," has to be my favourite line! Your dialogue is really really good! In my head it sounds just like them talking! :)
Date: July 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Madame Beesly and Dr. Halpert
Omg I could just imagine the wink based on the season 6 cold open with the Morse code... As previously mentioned, your dialogue is fantastic and since this chapter is basically all conversation, it is therefore by nature fantastic!
Date: July 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Surprise!
#beyondexcitedforthenextchapter
A necessary, cathartic chapter; bravo!
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19 - Flexual Intercourse
Oh my God... Such a cheeky little chapter hehe
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Catching Dreams
Ahhh remember the days of iPod Touches? Hehe! Such a sweet chapter :)
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Who's on First?
You're right, I hate you. :)
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Stripped Bare
Your reference game is on fire, my friend!
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Little Red Riding Foot
It would be really funny if one of these days, someone actually said: "I'm Greg Daniels, I own this intellectual property and I always thought of Jim as a foot fetish kinda guy tbh."
Well for someone who isn't a Pam fan, you certainly write well for her! I don't really agree with you there, but each to their own, haha :)
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: I Wanna Tuck You Like an Animal
It is a cracker of a title, AND a chapter! Well done!
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Words Left Unsaid
I think that the difference in writing style of the dream sequences compared to the normal writing is a clever idea! I'm impressed that you wrote it tbh! I don't think I could write in that style at all. It doesn't seemed forced, don't worry :)
Date: July 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Subtext
Perfect ending. :) I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this; for your first fic, 26 chapters has to be no mean feet! (If you pardon the pun...) It's been amazing wringing, completely caught me off guard at times yet managed to remain believable and cannon-like. There's been some expert smut too! Thank you
Author's Response:
I can't thank you enough for all of the reviews! To quote a great man, Wow.
Thank you so much :) I've actually started another fic already. Working on making it less fantasy (because this one was pretty fantastic with the way it glossed over the past) and more angsty. Still with a happy ending though :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Claustrophobic Spaces, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1955 Read Count: 5227 ePub Downloads: 4
Date: July 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Definitely continue this yes!! One can only wish that this was cannon hehe
Your imagery is amazing; I could picture everything perfectly in my head. The characterisation of Pam especially was really really good. The line "and now you know" actually killed me... :)
Author's Response: Ok, first of all, I LOVE your user name! Second, thank you so much for the review. I like to write things so that I can picture them and try to use imagery so that I can decide if any of what I'm writing actually feels like it would ever happen, so that comment in particular really means a lot <3
Date: August 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Right, so sorry that I'm only now reviewing this! I really really love this story idea and you write so well! If you want to continue it, you could maybe incorporate a phone call or text exchange between Jim and Pam about it? Like a "I woke up this morning and I couldn't stop thinking about you" type thing? You're such a good writer!
Author's Response: Thanks, lovely!