Reviewer: Bennie Signed 10
Date: April 18, 2007
Title: Chapter 13: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.
Ok, first of all, you could never creep me out, especially since I get pretty creepy when I talk about you/this story/Ryan/BJ/etc. Heee. But seriously, I should thank YOU for letting me help you with this masterpiece.
Michael/Sex and the City party? So PERFECT. Honestly, one of the things that make this SO GOOD is the fact that everyone is perfectly in character. Your Kelly voice is amazing, and your Oscar, your OSCAR, is just spot on and he only has a couple lines! You captured the perfect Michael/Pam dynamic and Karen is spot on and Jim's special selfish way of looking at things is just...yes. Everyone is in character and I can't even...
Ryan! He is SO Ryan and you've illustrated SO WELL how he and Pam (and don't even get me started on your Pam - guh) could work because their personalities, their characters, could really mesh well within the current canon/how they are presented on the show. And it's all so realistic and YES.
I mean, they leave Dunder Mifflin! The two characters on the show that I could see leaving DM is those two, honestly. Jim has that stagnant quality, and you know that once Pam gets her act together she could and should leave, and Ryan...he's in business school for a reason, folks. He wants to change, he wants to go places. He's a real guy, both on the show and in the story, and it's so...real and I love you.
In conclusion, the end is perfect and makes me cry a little bit, because it's sweet and real and GOD I want those two crazy kids to make it. Ryanfic forever! You WIN ALL.
(Sorry about the length, hee.)