Reviewer: amyryd Signed 10
Date: September 21, 2007
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: And Fate Has Led You Through It You Do What You Have To Do
Oh Girl7...another amazing chapter! I love that you hit Pam with the visual of Jim bloodied and beaten to make her realize that she had done the same to him emotionally. I also love you for the fact that you let the chapter end without them both falling into each other's arms. After all that has happened, they both need some time to clear their heads and start fresh. I cannot wait for the ensuing fluff!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much -- I'm really glad that resonated with you. I just kept thinking that it's easy for her to fool herself about the gravity of what she's done to him, so to see physical, empirical evidence of that would surely have to shake her. I'm happy to hear, too, that you liked the pacing -- I didn't think for a second they'd fall right back into each other's arms (no matter how tempting it was to write it that way, hee).
Hope you enjoy the fluff to come! (There's surely a TWSS in there, but I don't know that I dare....LOL.)
Thanks for reviewing!