Penname: falldownmore Real name: emily
Member Since: October 28, 2006

Bio:
AKA verygoodbread on livejournal.

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Beginnings by xoxoxo Rated: T [Reviews - 54] 32
Summary: Jim's angry...Pam's conflicted...then finally she takes a chance.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Michael, Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, In Stamford, Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30457 Read Count: 97863 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2006 Updated: July 13, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: November 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i needed good fic, and i found good fic. omg the fluff and the angst and the cuteness and dkgjhdf. loved it.

Author's Response:

Awww!  Thank you so much.  I love it when someone reads and reviews a story I wrote what seems like eons ago. 

I'm so glad you liked it!



Author's Response:

Awww!  Thank you so much.  I love it when someone reads and reviews a story I wrote what seems like eons ago. 

I'm so glad you liked it!

Summary: Ryan/Pam. Set right after The Initiation.
Categories: Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Pam, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1462 Read Count: 2441 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2006 Updated: October 28, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 9
Date: October 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: No Longer In Service

She cries out, once, and they both ignore what she said

 

i absolutely adore that line. great fic, very well written! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  (BTW - "Drawn" was excellent - I left you a review - so good.  I loves me the angst.)

Then and Now by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 52] 43
Summary: This will be a multi-chapter fic - begins post-Stamford/The Conversation but pre-Jim/Pam face-to-face again after Casino Night.  There will be lots of flashbacks to pre-Casino Night Jim & Pam, as well as a healthy dose of sympathetic!Roy. :o)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Darryl, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Josh Porter, Karen, Michael, Phyllis, Roy, Ryan, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Angst, Humor, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18357 Read Count: 7543 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2006 Updated: November 07, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: October 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMG i'm loving this fic so far. it's just so gorgeously written.

Details by annagirl93 Rated: MA [Reviews - 8] 8
Summary: Pam finds Jim in a compromising situation.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3134 Read Count: 10102 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2006 Updated: October 30, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: October 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1

basically, this was like the hottest thing ever. and the angst at the end just kills me dead. so i was all happy and now i'm dead. but in a good way. i loved this!

Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you! i was nervous posting this, so you've made me feel so much better. i'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Hung Up by GreenFish Rated: T [Reviews - 13] 13
Summary:

Jim wakes up at home after a late night at the office and tries to process what happened. Spoilers for Diwali, 3X05.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, In Stamford, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1939 Read Count: 2714 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2006 Updated: November 03, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 9
Date: November 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Hung Up

omg i love this. the banter and ... yeah, just so totally jim and pam. 

Summary: He learned fast that triangles are all points and angles. General post season two/season three Jim/Pam. Spoilers through season three, including that one spoiler that almost every knows about by now.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam, Roy, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2883 Read Count: 2422 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2006 Updated: November 05, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: November 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

absolutely gorgeous.

Summary: FutureFic. Pam is pregnant, (yes, with Jim's baby) on her last day of maternity leave at Scranton. Involves all Office characters.
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1746 Read Count: 8356 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2006 Updated: July 28, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 9
Date: November 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i don't normally go for script-format fics. but you've really nailed the characters, and the general feel of the show. the way the scene cuts away to a talking head, the reactions of characters ... great stuff! looking forward to reading more!

Summary: Past Featured StoryHis foot moves and she can hear the rustle of the paper bag.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael, Roy, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7701 Read Count: 4788 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2006 Updated: November 27, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: November 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: Sketches

i'm loving this so far! the characters are spot on, and omg jim and pam are so cute i wanna die. can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! You'll definitely get a bit more fluff at the beginning of the next chapter.

Summary: Even the rainiest of days can have a little Jam. :)
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 460 Read Count: 1407 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2006 Updated: November 15, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 7
Date: November 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was cute, but a little too un-scientific for me (i know, i know ... i'm a sucker for continuity.) it's impossible to 'get closer' to a rainbow ... it's an optical illusion created when the sun is behind you, filtering through the rain in front of you. the fact is, if you were standing EXACTLY where the rainbow appears to end, you wouldn't even see it, because the sun and the rain wouldn't be interacting in the same way at that location.

that didn't make much sense. anyway. the story was cute, but a bit hard for me to really be able to appreciate.



Author's Response: Okay, I'm so NOT scientific and I don't understand it at all, so that explains that.  :)  Um...maybe just suspend belief.  Maybe just an urban legend about walking through a rainbow, but I like it nonetheless.

Summary: Karen stares and has the sudden urge to throw his scooter up a tree and tell him to forget their 'relaxing Saturday'.
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Jim, Karen
Genres: Oneshot, Weekend
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1199 Read Count: 1240 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2006 Updated: November 18, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 7
Date: November 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Mixing the Flavors

this was totally cute, and i'm all for karen/jim (at least until jam get their act together!) you may want to find a beta, though ... you've got some punctuation and capitalization problems happening, and they can be a bit distracting.

Summary: Past Featured StorySeven different ways to say I love you.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Elements
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4829 Read Count: 26389 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2006 Updated: November 20, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: November 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Body Language

totally loved it. omg.


Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks!

Summary: Not everything is as it seems. During her first weeks in Scranton, Karen learns some things about herself and Jim and Pam. Jim/Pam/Karen
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1197 Read Count: 2867 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2006 Updated: November 27, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i admittedly have a soft spot for karen, even though i'm a fairly rampant jam fan. and combining all three just makes me way too happy. this was amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working on another Karen story right now. Thanks so much for the favourite, too. :)

Summary:

Random fluff. I was bored. And that's all there is to know. This is set probably in April. It's far enough in the future that the writers can take some hints and, you know.

*Update* Some stuff was fixed/changed. Different ending. Please re-read and review.


Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2456 Read Count: 4114 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2006 Updated: December 06, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 5
Date: December 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Moment Jim Realizes He Is Still In Love With Pam

this was cute, but i really think you could use a beta ... a lot of homonyms were switched around and made this kind of hard to read.


Author's Response: Just edited it some. Different ending, and grammar is fixed.

Twelve Days by xoxoxo Rated: MA [Reviews - 245] 117
Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim, Pam...and a partridge in a pear tree.  There are 12 days of Christmas - there will be 12 chapters of this story. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Karen, Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26401 Read Count: 57245 ePub Downloads: 27
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2006 Updated: December 30, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Six: Geese a Laying

PFF FILLER?! omg that was way too cute to be 'just filler'. i can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Hee!  Thanks!  More coming soon.  I promise!

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: December 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Four: Calling Birds

sdjgfsjhgfsd. that was so hot. SO HOT. and also so hot.


Author's Response: HA!  Glad to hear it.  Thanks so much!

Summary: Past Featured StoryShe's already remade herself once this year, and now she wonders if she has to do it all over again so soon.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6974 Read Count: 10269 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2006 Updated: December 18, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: December 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: February

this fic makes me way too happy. which is a really good thing. so i'm not complaining in the least.


Author's Response: Yaay, I'm glad! Thanks for the comments!

Paper Cuts by Lenore Rated: T [Reviews - 18] 15
Summary: Jim has a boo-boo. Pam helps. Indeterminate time Pre-Casino Night.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1058 Read Count: 1827 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2006 Updated: December 17, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: December 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

perfect.

Author's Response: Wow.  Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: Past Featured StoryIt's odd that being in love with the same person seems to have brought them even closer together. Pam and Karen the night of the Christmas party. Spoilers through A Benihana Christmas.
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Holiday, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2688 Read Count: 3289 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2006 Updated: December 18, 2006
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: December 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i read this on LJ and almost DIED. i love this ship more and more every day and this fic is just ... brilliant. PRIZES TO YOU.

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim receives a gift the day after Christmas. And then another one the next day. And again for the 10 days after. Is it a joke, or has his True Love come forward?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66510 Read Count: 94109 ePub Downloads: 38
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2006 Updated: January 20, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: January 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

kjdghfskjdhfg. okay, so i love this fic. and have loved it from the start. but seriously, adding phonesex to it just made it like ten thousand times better. so there you go.

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: January 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: On The Third Day of Christmas

i am LOVING this so far. my only comment is that the french translation is a bit off, gramatically ... it would read a bit better as 'il n'y a pas d'autre amour QUE vous' but that's just my nit-picky french grammar nerd talking.

Author's Response: nit-pick away - I need the practice!  :-)  Actually, it had been pointed out to me, and I forgot to change it.  Thanks!! (Merci!)

Summary:

Per nomadshan's planting the irresistible notion in my head of writing an Out of Control Jim story (along with encouragement from other posters at TWoP - you know who you are).... This is an exploration of what could happen if (when?) Jim and Pam were pushed to the point of losing all control. 


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23126 Read Count: 68672 ePub Downloads: 20
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2007 Updated: January 07, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: January 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

if i could kill you for leaving the story there, and get away with it? i probably would. which makes me sound like a deranged, murderous psycho, but you know. this story is just the perfect mix of angst and out-of-control hotness and kdsjghdf. i'm so excited to see where it goes (and if it goes in the direction of really hot smut, you won't hear me complaining.)

control by monkeybear Rated: M [Reviews - 14] 1
Summary:

I had to write something about what went on in Jamaica.... and then I had to add part II, from Michael's perspecive.

Not 100% confident in how well part II works, but I'll throw it out there.  Feedback is awesome. 


Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Michael/Jan
Genres: Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Challenges: Jamaica Jan Sun Princess
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2096 Read Count: 1605 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2007 Updated: January 15, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed
Date: January 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i haven't read it yet (but i will soon!) i just wanted to let a fellow mac user know that selecting multiple options in the 'warning' section is as easy as holding down the apple button as you select :)

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: January 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

and now that i've read it ... wow. totally loved it. the extra little comments in the parentheses just added to the spot-on characterization. awesome!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I've definitely never written anything quite like this before.  Glad you enjoyed.

And thanks also for the tip about selecting multiple warnings - I was trying to use the shift key instead of the apple key.  It's fixed :o)

Summary:

There was no way that Pam was in the hallway, crying.  It seemed almost as absurd as Dwight comforting her.  It was just not possible.  Set during “Back From Vacation”


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1571 Read Count: 4249 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2007 Updated: January 16, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed
Date: January 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this was really sweet, but you may want to look into a beta reader. there were a lot of punctuation errors (and a few spelling ones) that sort of stopped the flow of the story. just a suggestion :)

Bruised by PamPongChamp Rated: M [Reviews - 4] 4
Summary: Jim and Karen the night of "The Merger" but plenty of angsty Pam thoughts
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2142 Read Count: 3680 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2007 Updated: January 17, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 9
Date: January 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i really enjoyed this, in that antsy kind of way that angst-ridden karen/jim/pam fics seem to always inspire. the way jim imagines pam in karen's place is so heart breaking and yet somehow hot at the same time and yes. i thought this was a great first fic :)

Author's Response:

yay my first review! thank you so much for the nice compliments and I like that you used the word "antsy" that is so what i was going for a dizzy sort of thing

thank you for making my night!!