Penname: MrsLloyderineHalpert Real name: Melissa
Member Since: October 31, 2006

Bio:
Oh wow, so I'm back here after over a year of getting caught up in real life.  Hoping to get back into writing now.  I can't wait for the new season!
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Reviews by MrsLloyderineHalpert
Summary: The branch scores a trip to Walt Disney World, thanks to an amazing deal by Michael (and a semi-plausible explanation by Little Comment!). Same office workers, new place...hijinx a-go-go.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Andy, Angela, Angela/Andy, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Dwight/Angela, Ensemble, Holly, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Kelly/Darryl, Kevin, Meredith, Oscar, Pam, Phyllis, Ryan, Stanley
Genres: Humor, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62605 Read Count: 74917 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2008 Updated: October 13, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed
Date: September 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love dorky Jim! Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will! :)

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10
Date: September 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh do get the next chapter up tonight, pretty please?

Author's Response: I\'m sorry Mrs. LH, I dropped the ball...but new chapter today! :)

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10
Date: September 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love the drawings!  Dwights is awesome. Another great chapter.  I like the end bit. 


Author's Response: Thank you! Those drawings were a pain in my rear to do, but they ended up all right. :) And Dwight is the shite...hey! Poetry! ;)

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10
Date: September 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ouch, you cliffhangered my face!  Buy me an ice cream cone to make me feel better?  Or at least hurry up with the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: I did neither, Mrs. LH...forgive me? Hope it didn\'t leave a bruise (TWSS?)... :)

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10
Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

more!

Author's Response: Mmmkay! ;)

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

aw what a way to end the chapter.  Poor Jim.  Poor Pam.

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Aw what a sweet ending!  Wonderful story, truly loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, MrsLH! I\'m really happy you liked it. :D

Summary: Jim is going shopping for something for Pam. Cute little one-shot. Season Four spoilers.
Categories: Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: None
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 806 Read Count: 1649 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2008 Updated: September 07, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 7
Date: September 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

cute. I love the idea of Jim trying to explain their relationship to someone new.  "I'm sorry did you just say one week?"

Summary:

He says he’s never loved her more than he does today, the first day she’s not wearing matching underwear.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2344 Read Count: 5782 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10
Date: September 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Car Crash Underwear

Absolutely.  Yes.  I adore it.  Perfect. Wonderful. Molto Bene!

Just, seriously, I loved it.  This embodies them so perfectly.



Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for your kind comments. I love that you loved this, it pretty much makes my day to hear people enjoyed this.

Summary: A young woman interviews for a newly created position at Dunder Mifflin and flirts with Jim. Meanwhile, Michael discovers MySpace and the staff participate in a "team-building exercise."
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Andy, Angela, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Ensemble, Holly, Jim, Kelly, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Other, Pam, Phyllis, Stanley
Genres: None
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5557 Read Count: 9864 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2008 Updated: September 24, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 8
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Cold Open (part 1 of 4)

Ah excellent, love the idea.  I really loved "Hey Dude" when I was a kid.  Is it sad that I wish there was a Hey Dude Scene It?  :P

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 8
Date: September 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Cold Open (part 1 of 4)

Nicely done.  I only wish there was a tad more closure to the whole Kaitlyn/Jim issue.  Can't leave Pam jealous forever!

Summary: This is the fist installment to the series I am writing called 'Epic office romance'. It's a few days after 'Goodbye Toby' and Jim is still trying to propose to Pam is interrupted again and again after a bunch of attempts. JAM some DWANGELA and MICHAEL/HOLLY/JAN
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Dwight/Angela, Holly, Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Michael/Holly, Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2176 Read Count: 1895 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2008 Updated: September 20, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 9
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Glued to Sandals

aha!  Very nice.  Love the Dwight prank.

Summary: Michael wants to learn what it truly means to be Afican-American. Meanwhile, Dwight hires Pam to illustrate his comic. Absolutely cringeworthy hijinx ensue.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Andy, Angela, Darryl, Dwight, Holly, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kevin, Michael, Oscar, Pam, Phyllis, Stanley
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Parody, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5936 Read Count: 1530 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2008 Updated: September 23, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 8
Date: September 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: And they say that his brain shrank three sizes that day.

Oh.  Ohno. That is so terribly and wonderfully Michael.  I loved Oscar's talking head.  Nice collaboration! 


Author's Response: LC: Thanks, Mrs. LH! It is both terrible and wonderful...that seems to be the way Jack and I like it. Fictionally speaking. :)

Summary:

Pam always calls her mom at the big moments. Takes place immediately following "Weight Loss."


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Other, Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 239 Read Count: 3478 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: September 26, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10
Date: September 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh. yes.  Absolutely!  ABsolutely yes, I love it.


Author's Response: Why, thank you! Thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it.

Got Me by bashert Rated: T [Reviews - 28] 18
Summary: Past Featured StoryPost- "Weight Loss."

I'm jumping on the happy bandwagon.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 884 Read Count: 6900 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2008 Updated: September 27, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: I can hear your heartbeat where I lay my head

So great. I love th texts


Author's Response: Thanks!

Love, Translated by beruco Rated: K+ [Reviews - 10] 17
Summary: A phone call. Post-Weight Loss.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 336 Read Count: 3367 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 8
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my god this is so cute.  The little things only they understand when they're joking around. :)

Summary: Andy comes over, Dwight comes over, then Angela sleeps. A look at one night in Angela's life. Spoilers for Weight Loss. Rated T for implied sexual situations.
Categories: Other
Characters: Andy, Angela, Angela/Andy, Dwight, Dwight/Angela
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Weekend
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2400 Read Count: 2234 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2008 Updated: September 30, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 9
Date: September 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful job.  I've been wanting an Angela fic since the premiere, and this was absolutely great.  I love the line near the end, "Both of them are going to want more soon, Andy will want a wife and Dwight will want her without Andy. She's not ready for either."

Summary: Weight Loss Spoilers. The famous rain-gas station scene in the gas station worker's point of view.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 520 Read Count: 1713 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2008 Updated: October 02, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 8
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awesome. I love seeing outsiders' reactions to Jim/Pam's relationship.

Early by captainoats Rated: K [Reviews - 3] 2
Summary: Angela always wakes up early...
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Andy, Angela, Dwight, Dwight/Angela
Genres: Oneshot, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1290 Read Count: 2114 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2008 Updated: October 02, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 8
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Early

very sweet.  It was a nice detail how she parked her car far from Andy's and then right next to Dwight's.  Gotta feel bad for Andy though.

Summary: Jim and Pam are tired of the maybe's.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3105 Read Count: 8955 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: November 03, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 9
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: I.

Wow.  I really like your writing style.  You capture Pam's angst so well.  Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!\r\nPart II. is in the process of being written (specifically 1/2 done). \r\nTHANKS AGAIN!

deleted by bebitched Rated: K+ [Reviews - 13] 11
Summary: I was trying to come up with a reason why Pam didn't call Jim after she called off the wedding, and this cropped up and wouldn't let me go until I wrote it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Other, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 272 Read Count: 2763 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: October 29, 2008
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 9
Date: October 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know what?  Stuff like this wouldn't happen if people wouljd quit using these automated voice messages.  *robot voice* You have reached 5753029348. 

Sorry.  Ahem.  Pet peeve.  Anyway, very nicely done. I really love that ending sentence.  Oh if only Margaret knew what she had done.

Summary: There are times when she misses him so much, she's afraid to open her eyes. Teeny-tiny one-shot poems about the aftermath of Jim's death. Takes place sometimes after "Goodbye, Toby".
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453 Read Count: 5240 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2009
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed
Date: February 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Icy Roads

These are so sad!  Wonderful memories of Jim from Pam's point of view.

Author's Response: For some reason I love the sadness.... I don\'t know what that says about me as a person. But the whole Pam\'s POV thing just makes it more sad. I\'m glad you like them, and thank you so much for the review!

Unopened Presents by Steph Rated: T [Reviews - 5] 2
Summary: Maybe her ignored birthday was just an oversight. Or maybe they were jealous of her cuteness.
Categories: Episode Related, Other
Characters: Kelly, Toby
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1547 Read Count: 1439 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 08, 2009 Updated: February 08, 2009
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed
Date: February 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww...how adorable!  Although my curiosity is eating me up, what did Toby get her?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'ll confess - I don\'t know what he got her. Definitely not a book. I would say maybe he stopped at the drugstore and got her one of those baskets with all the bath goodies (candles and bubble bath). I get those some times.

Summary: That day he started writing down everything. He wanted to make sure he never forgot. Not in a hundred thousand days. A collection of connected days in Jim's life that show insight on how he got to be the paper salesman we all know and love.

A Jim-centric fic; past, present, and future.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Childhood
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29235 Read Count: 23118 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2009 Updated: June 03, 2009
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed
Date: February 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Three Thousand, Four Hundred, and Thirty-Seven

This is really fun so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I\'m glad you are enjoying it and I hope you continue too!

Summary: A response to the "Wallace's Party" challenge. What did Jim really tell Pam about that fateful day in David Wallace's office? How did Ryan come to hate Jim so much? The answers to these and other burning questions, dear reader, will be found here.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: David Wallace, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Holiday, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Challenges: Wallace's Party
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2926 Read Count: 9892 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2009 Updated: March 08, 2009
Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great beginning.  I had never really thought of Ryan's comment about the Christmas party, but now that the idea is there, I'm extremely curious!  Loving this Fluffy Goodness with the bridal gown and all too!

Author's Response: Thanks! Gotta give credit to the Office writers and Slayer 79 down below for the underlying idea. And thanks for reminding me to add \"Fluff\" as a category. Fluff R Us.