Penname: agian18 Real name:
Member Since: October 19, 2017

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Author of the Month September 2018I wrote a real live book! https://amzn.to/36s9CuW
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Practical Magic by Coley Rated: MA [Reviews - 23] 61
Summary: Past Featured Story

Pam wants to dress up for Halloween. Jim doesn't. What else is she supposed to do? 

Submitted for the 2018 Halloween Contest! 

halloween readers choice

halloween dundies


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Dwight/Angela, Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Mark, Michael, Mose, Phyllis/Bob Vance, Ryan/Kelly, Stanley
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Series: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26866 Read Count: 15560 ePub Downloads: 24
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2018 Updated: October 31, 2018
Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: October 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Hexed

This is supposed to be a story where the two main characters are trying to out-sex each other, but you’ve got tears in my eyes because Pam’s insecurities are the opposite of the normal cheese and are totally real and whole and perfect (they’re residual The-Red-Sox-Are-World-Series-Champs tears, that’s what I’ve decided). Ugh. This is so perfect. I can’t wait to see how they finally get each other.

Author's Response: Don't worry - we'll resume the out-sexing next chapter and there won't be any more pesky crying. For now. 

Summary:

Jim Halpert took the job in Maryland after "Halloween" in season 2. He's back in town, on Halloween. 

halloween dundies


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Horror
Warnings: Major Character Death, Possible Triggers, Secondary Character Death
Challenges: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Series: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 562 Read Count: 900 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2018 Updated: October 31, 2018
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: October 31, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow. Short, but so powerful! I wish this could be the prologue to a whole backstory, but nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you! Sadly, most of my docs are really short!  Thank you for reviewing— Happy Halloween!

Summary:

Submitted for the 2018 Halloween competition

Jim listens to Pam ask the kids to put on their shoes, remind them to get their folders from the homework basket, inquire if they remembered to put a snack in their backpacks. Since October 2007 (before that, if he’s really honest with himself) Halloween has never been ‘just another day’ with Pam, but here she is in 2018 with no costume, no theme, and no expectations of him. He’s left feeling unsettled and...more than a little disappointed. 

readers choice runner up

 

halloween dundies


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Cece Halpert, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Kids/Family, Married, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Series: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4459 Read Count: 1518 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2018 Updated: October 31, 2018
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: November 01, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Uhm. Hi. This was adorably perfect. I’ll leave something more coherent when I’m not late for work.

Author's Response: Ugh, waking up to an "adorably perfect" review from you is the best. Thank you! 

House Call by Coley Rated: MA [Reviews - 8] 25
Summary: Jim calls in sick to work.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3851 Read Count: 3587 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2018 Updated: November 03, 2018
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: November 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

C O L E Y.
DAMN.

Oh my god. Toby? Really? Girl, I had literal tears in my eyes for a good chunk of this, and the rest, my entire face was bright red. Holy shit. You did good. And so did Pam.
Can I just say that, “incredibly aroused and wanting to have phone sex Jim” is now something I didn’t know I needed in my life? Ugh. This was GR8.

Author's Response: You should have seen my face while writing it... parts of it while at work. Beet city. But I love that we're all stupidly delighted by this. Thank you!

Summary: “Karen, I don’t even have his phone number. It’s been four years since we last saw each other. When we broke up.” Pam emphasizes this last part as if Karen needs the reminder of her best friend’s personal history. “It’s not like… Look, I’m not going to fall in love with him again.”  
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 111518 Read Count: 27950 ePub Downloads: 31
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2018 Updated: July 30, 2023
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: November 12, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Somebody that I used to know

Oh hell. Girl! I am SO on board for this! Tell me why Pam and Karen being BFFs is so easy for me to grab onto? And why I’m like, instantly mad at Jim and waiting for him to grovel? Oh man am I excited for this.

Author's Response: Dang! An endorsement like this from you AND Coley?! I better get to writing. Just keep in mind that Pam might have some groveling to do as well... And, yeah, every single AU fic in my head involves them being friends. And Karen never thinking of Jim in any way other than Pam's One True Love. :)

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: November 20, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: You know by now that we will meet again

Ugh. GIRL. This is so GOOD. I love the flashbacks, and how real their struggles were when Jim moved to Philly, how Pam is annoyed with everything but then Jim is “old Jim” and finally himself when she’s around. It’s like they were in their heads and not communicating in the right way.
Honestly, I’m tempted to like, wait until you publish the whole thing so that I don’t have to wait for it to be done, because I’m seriously sad that I have to wait for an update now.

Author's Response:

Cool. Cool. Coolcoolcoolcool. I won't just fangirl over you giving me an all-cap GIRL and GOOD about this. Totally cool over here. But, yeah, they can be real losers who don't communicate. That won't serve them well...for a while. 

What do you mean you might wait?! Like, how is THAT encouraging? This kind of feedback keeps me going. I'm counting on you to tell me what you think. You wound me, Agian... 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: November 20, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Somebody that I used to know

Hi also.
Jim has a wedding ring???
jiM haS a wedDIng rinG??¿¿¿?
Again I say: I’m about to ignore this story until it’s finished because I just need all the answers now. thnx.

Author's Response: I think we should just have another chat so you and Coley can give me all your notes after I pitch all of my Thoughts. Then you won't have to ignore me and make me CRY! :)

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: June 05, 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Bask in the glory of all our problems

Okay first of all, I now have Issues stuck in my head, so thanks.

I love it whenever Pam wears Jim's t-shirts like they're hers. Especially since it's a Widespread Panic shirt, because Jim now has at least 3 of these in his drawer, in my mind.

Can I just say how proud I am of you for coming so far on little smutty scenes? Because they're so perfect. "...and then do a number of things that had absolutely, satisfyingly nothing to do with paper." See? You see that. Ugh. I love it. And then there was, "...made her look absolutely wrecked, and he hadn't even gotten there yet." You really do turn the subtle sexy on SO well.

I also love that, despite all of the issues they're having, Jim is still 100% in Camp Pam, always supportive, and not losing the banter that they've always had (in canon at least). Like him saying that he would run off and join the circus with her (I am now 100% in Camp Jim the Juggler) and the tickling/wrestling that just takes all of the worrying out and gets them back to their roots.

I honestly contemplated stopping reading (is that grammatically correct? I have no idea) after "You know nothing, Jim Halpert" because I didn't think that could be topped, but congrats, because you sure DID.

The fact that they just had the shittiest date in the history of Jim Halpert, and now they're sharing take-out while splitting it up like the old days without missing a beat just breaks my heart, because the love is still there (and obviously you prove that later, and shatter my heart even more, but we'll get to that).

Brian like Camera Brian? Same Brian? Do you just like the name? Either way, I'm definitely on board with the fact that Pam actually had a relationship after Jim, that she didn't stew and feel sorry for herself, and was actually able to be her own person (one who did drugs--I LOVE YOU FOR PUTTING THAT IN HERE, CAN I JUST SAY??? CRAZY, FLAWED PAM DOING STUPID SHIT IS SO FAR REMOVED FROM EVERYTHING I KNOW AND I LOVE IT).

Also, Jim getting a DUI because he was so broken over Pam is absolutely what would have happened, and I love that you basically took these two people and shattered them into shells that have nothing left but the residual feelings for one another, because that's truly all they know and will ever need. And then throw in Betsy wanting to know how his date is going, because honestly, moms always know best, and she probably misses Pam too, and I'm just sitting here in a puddle of my emotions, thanks.

“Jim Halpert, Danny Cordray. Danny and I fuck without feelings and Jim’s ass is hanging over my couch.”
I don't really need to say anything else on the subject, do I?

And now, Pam has a fuck buddy, and this Pam is slowly becoming my favorite Pam, because she is doing the exact OPPOSITE of sulking, and she's just trying to make sense of a life post-Jim. Because "It wasn't Brian..." and she's TELLING HIM that it wasn't Brian instead of cowering away, and I'm just

Ugh.

Jim only has one night stands because he can't emotionally connect with someone other than Pam and they just REALLY ARE BROKEN.

You're really the best, ya know?

I loved the line about, "Wanna go back to talking about my parent's divorce?" because it just shows how fucked up they've truly gotten, but it still made me laugh out loud that *divorce* was less painful than how their lives have been going as of late.

Listen. I am ALL for reusing the fortune cookie bit. Especially the way that you did it. Because flashbacks with future connections are what I THRIVE on (who, me? *cough cough*) and the way that you did this was so PERFECT. Because here's the thing. You could have made them kiss, or fallen back into what happened in the flashback. That would have worked. But not in this story. And in some cheesy version of this story, they would've been super awkward about the whole thing. But instead, Pam is inviting Jim to a 4th of July party, and they just really need to keep seeing each other, and it's SO obvious, and you did that so perfectly.

The "I don't remember our last date" *actually* broke me. Twice. Because I didn't think he was going to stop and tell her. And though it is so typical of *Jim* to remember all of those details, why did it hit me so much more that *this Jim* remembered everything? Oh right. Because he "moved on" and was married and came off as this huge asshole, and this is his moment to basically show the world that things about Jim have changed, but the one thing that hasn't is that he still loves Pam Beesly. It's okay. I'm fine.

(No I'm not).

"Does it count if I never really quit loving her?"
That's...that's the last straw. I need the next chapter NOW.

Author's Response:

There are so many things that I appreciate about this review and your love of this story. But I really appreciate that you GET what these two have to go through before they can get to the good stuff. As always, the things you point out are always some of my favorite parts to write. *yea!!* A few things:

Yes, that Brian. I don't want him with Pam in canon but Brian was hot (those arms!).   

I have too many Thoughts on mildly rebellious Pam and Jim, it just makes sense to me that at this stage they both dabbled in being reckless and kind of self-destructive.   

Ooooh, I hope you like the Betsy chapter when we get to it! 

I think of you a little bit every time I write those flashbacks. ;)

Everything in your paragraph about the part that broke you (sorry bout that) is SO TRUE! That whole part about how he's changed in many except that he still loves her... AND your part about at their most broken, their feelings for each other are all they've known or need???? I'll give you credit if, no when, I steal those lines, okay?? 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: July 23, 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Just wanna keep calling your name until you've come back home

Okay, so first of all, the fact that Pam is sitting here thinking about how everyone else is moving onward and upward and that spurring her to actually do something is great. Fancy New Beesly needed a kick in the ass, right?

Making up scenarios in her head is just so REAL and also heartbreaking because sometimes I remember that this was a TV show and things "just happen" for characters because it was "meant to be," but here she is acting like a lovesick puppy and your characters are less fictional and more real.

Oh. Oh she's. She's *wearing the dress*. Do you enjoy seeing me get emotional? Because it gets worse. Because she *walked in on his engagement party* DC. THAT HAPPENED. Her BIG JIM GESTURE led her STRAIGHT TO HIS ENGAGEMENT PARTY. Ya done did it.

I cannot imagine the embarrassment and fury and literal hell hole of emotions that she went through, but you seem to have put it all into these little eloquent words that made me cry (on vacation, mind you) and I just.

Poor Pam.

Can I just say that I love your Paul and Karen? They're the best. Especially since Paul is as mad at Jim as the rest of us and wanted to do something about it.

Pam realizing that she "didn't set anything on fire" is fucking HEARTBREAKING. She wanted to do something, and she couldn't, and she lost him, and this is the most tragic kick in the ass to change your lifestyle that I've ever experienced.

The fake Facebook killed me the second most. Maybe it's because I empathize. maybe it was the descriptions of the wedding hashtag and how I felt like I was in Pam's shoes as she scrolled. How do you do that? How do you make me feel like I'm living inside these stories?
(Also. Hannah is *that* Facebook person that I want to punch. Was anyone *really* concerned that Nancy's dress would fit? Were they?)

I love that you still have Pam being timid, even in New York. You don't just move across the country and change lifestyles. Pam does things in baby steps, so I love that, while she moved to New York, she wasn't all of a sudden being super bold and painting the town red, but she was still eating lunch by herself and not going to museums yet.

Of course, when the snap happens, it happens big. And I love that she deleted social media. Such a bold move, honestly. Why am I proud of a fictional character?

I LOVE Kelly's involvement here. She WOULD be a NY fashionista with Urban Decay samples. However, if there isn't a scene where Pam and Ryan do drugs together, I'm going to write FanFiction about your FanFiction.

"Did we break each other?"
No, but DC BROKE ME, THANKS.

"My boyfriend Drew." *snorts*

Honestly, DC. You write the whole "sulking over an old love" story TOO well. The bit about the pictures was EVERYTHING. Of course she still had them. Of course she got nervous about going into the pictures app.

But what killed me the most? You use *that* picture. You gave a story to *that picture.* And the "I love you so fucking much" ACTUALLY shattered me. I have no idea why. But I did cry. I did have to put a hand to my mouth in shock because that line ended me.

And now I need more. Holy shit. I bow.

Author's Response:

Dude. Your reviews are so freaking amazing and you have no idea how much I appreciate them. 

First of all, you pick up on all these little things like the dress (I don't care if it was over the top; I went for it), THAT picture that you knew right away, and the Drew thing (I snorted when I saw that you snorted). But also, I really love that you appreciate the heartbreaking moment with the whole "I didn't set it on fire" thing. Cause I think that was such a Pam thing, to see everyone around her be brave or know they would be and she isn't and then live with the regret of that.  I'm so glad that worked. 

You are so right. No one in the history of the world gives two figs about Nancy's dress. Also, there will be only one more reference to Ryan and it won't be that. (I mean, Idk, I say that but this whole thing was supposed to be three short chapters and I have 20-ish planned now so there's really no telling.) BUT I can think of a story where Pam and Ryan's bad behavior could be fleshed out (no pun intended) nicely... ;)

Thank you SO MUCH for reading, reviewing, and feeling these characters. You're the best.  

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: May 27, 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Nothing is as it has been and I miss your face like hell

“You always leaned on my desk like this when we worked together.” I--

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: May 27, 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Nothing is as it has been and I miss your face like hell

First of all. I love that I could have been born at any time in history and Jesus Christ chose for me to be alive during the publication of this story. That being said. The Penn State sweatshirt and the cheeks? Made me want to visit a confessional (in a good way. Can there be a good way? Who cares I loved it).

I also love that you kind of skipped right past all of the bullshit and Pam just decides they're dating over a friggen tuna melt.

The donut. See? THAT'S Jim. I see him. He's in there somewhere.

I love that Andy is so surprised that Jo wants to take him for coffee and she was like "Don't make me change my mind, boy!"

"That wouldn’t be enough. " DC
D
C
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"If you can't get Karen to budge I pick what we do tonight" when I SAY I CHOKED A LITTLE

Karen busting Jim's shit about his car is so undeserved of mankind. I truly thank you. And humbly request that you write an entire spin-off series where it's The Fast and the Furious starring Karen and Paul.

THEY DID THE THING. AT THE RESTAURANT. WITH THE PICKLES. WHY AM I EMOTIONAL ABOUT PICKLES. I HATE PICKLES.

I didn't know that little fact about watches. That's...I'm rolling my eyes at Jim.

SHE. NAMES. HER. PURSES.

Okay so, the "I don't want to do this" actually melted me into pure goo. GOO. And the fact that he is asking about her rules is so OldJim that I melted a little more. Hopefully his pocketbook doesn't deter her any further.

Next chapter better NOT BE INCREDIBLY INNOCENT, WOMAN.

(In all seriousness I am so thrilled that this is back and please know that I only harass you because this story has broken me in all of the best ways possible).

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim brings Pam home for Thanksgiving.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Larissa Halpert
Genres: Fluff, Holiday
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14854 Read Count: 7513 ePub Downloads: 22
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2018 Updated: December 01, 2018
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: November 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

This is going to have more chapters, right?
Ugh. I love all of your holiday takes. Pam being upset that she isn’t spending Thanksgiving with her parents is so real. Also loved the fact that they seem to be secure enough in their relationship where Pam’s okay telling Jim they don’t have enough time to fool around and they’re just very simply doing their own things to get ready for the day. And the dialogue is on point, as always. Lady, you write them so well.

Author's Response:

Imagine if I just left this as a one-shot. How mean would that be?!

I’m always so worried that my dialogue sucks so thank you SO much for telling me that it doesn’t! 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: November 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Afternoon

“Football doesn’t have bases, dad.”

C-O-L-E-Y.

How do you do it? How do you paint these worlds where Jim and Pam live in such a perfect little existence? I love love love the Halpert family that you have created with all of their quirkiness, and how absolutely real this Jim and Pam continue to be. I can’t wait to see what the Halpert boys do to poor Steve. He messed with the wrong family!

Author's Response: Oh, you! Gosh, you all are making me see silly for doubting this chapter as much as I was! I’m glad you’re loving the Halpert Family so far! Poor Steve doesn’t even know what’s coming his way. 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: December 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Night

You’ve done it again

Made me a giddy soppy mess, that six

Betsy getting everyone drunk is amazing, and I love that the boys get their pranking from her. And the jello mold? Oh my god. I cackled. I’m assuming this is true forever now.
The entire end had a huge ass grin plastered on my face, because they’re talking so openly about getting married and it’s just *fact.*
Also, since this is a holiday series, I’m one thousand percent expecting him to propose on Flag Day at the Halpert Flag Dag Extravaganza.

“You sound more like a Halpert already.”
Oh my god get OUT (in the best way).

Author's Response: I like to think that in Betsy's mind, the drunker everyone is, the more they stay out of her kitchen.  And yes! You know the Halperts go hard on Flag Day. Why wouldn't they?  Thank you so much for reading this one, I'm glad you liked it! :) 

Unwrapped by Coley Rated: MA [Reviews - 46] 100
Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim and Pam, a snowstorm, and a bottle of tequila. Could a Christmas miracle finally force these two to be honest with each other? 

Takes place immediately following A Benihana Christmas. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Holiday, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18206 Read Count: 26175 ePub Downloads: 27
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2018 Updated: January 17, 2019
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: December 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: I.

“This was why she tried not to drink vodka; it made her sad and whiny.”

Same girl.

I love this. It’s kind of cliche but then, you have such a way of making cliches not, don’t you? Can’t wait for the rest!

Author's Response: Lord knows I love a good cliche turned upside down once and a while! Hopefully I can accomplish that here. :) 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: December 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: II.

“While you’re naked. Why don’t you just get naked in my house? It’s fine because I love you.“

I laughed out loud at that, omg Coley 😂

Ugh. You write “Pam that can’t have Jim” Pam so well. Also fuck Karen. Also, those are also my favorite parts of Christmas Vacation so this is all right up my alley.

Also. Now I know why you were asking about terrible Christmas songs in chat that one night. I’m gonna stop now.

Author's Response: I mean, that entire movie is filled with 5 star dialogue, but Todd and Margo are forever my favorite. I'm so happy that one line made you laugh though, because it was one of my favorites. Thanks!

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: December 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: III.

If you really loved me and meant it you wouldn’t have left me with THAT for a cliffhanger 😩

Seriously though. You write their dialogue SO good. It’s one of my favorite parts about your writing—you make Pam and Jim come to life. And I love me some drunk Jam. They always seem to need alcohol to spill it, don’t they?

Also, totally caught onto the batteries right away, and I’ll be damned if that doesn’t get revisited.

Author's Response:

What can I say? I love cliffhangers as much as I love cliches. 

Thank you so much! I love writing dialogue and I always hope it comes across as true to character. And yeah - I don’t know why I always have them hitting the bottle, I swear I’m not an alcoholic.  

Lots of things will be revisited, don’t worry about that! 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: January 10, 2019 Title: Chapter 4: IV.

Wow, promiscuous-post-Roy Pam! I did not see that coming. It was only a paragraph, but I felt so sad for her in the way that you described it.

I’m a little saddened by the tease, but also, I feel like the lil’ drunk makeout makes the most sense that they stopped and had an awkward little “lets sober up” moment. I’m still mad though. Rude.

Ugh. Please never stop.

Author's Response: Don’t be mad for too long, it’ll all be okay! I promise. 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: January 19, 2019 Title: Chapter 5: V.

I read this chapter at least twice and then started the story from the beginning and I’m still obsessed.

The entire movie bit was done so well. Subtle, yet still pulling at the intimate heartstrings of Jim and Pam, because, ya know, “Damn it, Jim, it broke my heart.” Broke my heart, too, tbh.

The whole, “I want you,” “That’s not a question,” “No. It never has been.”

????

Oh my god. Coley. Are you for real? Is JIM for real? God, that was perfect.

And then of course you do this thing where it’s all sexy and sweet and wonderful and perfect and honestly I don’t know how you do that??? But my favorite part was when Jim was going on about how much Roy sucks. It’s like, oh my god, he got this bit of Pam-induced confidence and all of a sudden he’s this new man. And then when he was telling her to bite her lip for him at work? Oh my god, that was awesome. COLEY.

I can’t even say I feel sorry for Karen considering I knew where this was going from the beginning, but again, it was raw and realistic and Pam’s little train of thought while Jim was telling her about the rest of his day was so on point.

Ugh. I loved the crap out of this whole thing.

Also: Business school students???? COLEY.

Alright, I’m done for now.

Author's Response:

The whole “Roy sucks” bit is possibly my favorite thing I’ve written in the last 6 months so it makes me happy that y’all loved it too. 

Thank you SO much for all these too kind, too sweet comments - they made my day. I’m so happy this story seems to be loved because I really loved writing it.

no comment on the business school student.  

Peppermint by dwangela Rated: T [Reviews - 7] 15
Summary: Jim and Pam get competitive. There are consequences.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kevin, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: Secret Santa Fic Exchange 2018
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1826 Read Count: 1525 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2018 Updated: December 30, 2018
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: December 30, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Peppermint

Oooo girl. I never knew how poetic your writing was. That was cute and angsts and pepperminty all at once.

(It also made me highly rethink the fact that I made my 10 year old students play this at our Christmas party, but like, whatever).

Author's Response:

My writing always seems to take on this natural rhythm, so I’m glad to hear that it translates well from my head to paper.

I played this for the first time at a school event, so rest assured that it’s teachers such as yourself that led me to writing this.

Summary: To make the documentary more interesting, the production crew hire some actors to create a romantic subplot
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1170 Read Count: 1417 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2018 Updated: January 01, 2019
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: December 31, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha! I love this idea. I can’t wait to find out what more you have in store!

Summary:

“I’d rather she be alone and than with somebody.”

 Jim and Pam reflect after dealing with Ryan and Kelly.

 Set during Angry Andy (season 8) 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Ryan/Kelly
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 661 Read Count: 1209 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2019 Updated: January 22, 2019
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: January 22, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So sweet! I definitely see/saw during the show the way that both Jim and Pam had this whole “I’m dating someone else but you’re not allowed to see anyone” feeling. Nicely done a86;a039;

Idle Thoughts by Kuri333 Rated: MA [Reviews - 6] 13
Summary:

Kisses, touches, past experiences, and Pam can't help but remember.

 


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1496 Read Count: 1736 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2019 Updated: January 29, 2019
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: January 29, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Idle memories

“Could we have our third date now, Jim?”

Oh my god I love that. I can hear the nervous urgency. And the Roy memories make total sense. This was adorable and cute and sexy all in one!

Author's Response:

Thanks so, so much!

I like the idea of this "fancy new Beesly" trying to take control of her own things, including this kind of things: her own needs or wants. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Will They or Won't They AU with Pam and Jim as next door neighbors.

“Pam, come on. Don’t do that.” The sound of his bare feet on the wooden floor following behind kept me in motion through the dining room, looking under chairs for my sandals. I summoned everything I had in me not to look at him in his currently half-dressed state.


“Don’t do what? Jim, I’m fine. Really.”


I’m just in love with you and you only want to be friendly neighbors. And, also, since I’m being honest with myself, my body is not loving the unsated high of being as aroused as I just felt with your hands on me like that.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21879 Read Count: 18798 ePub Downloads: 17
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2019 Updated: March 07, 2019
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: February 02, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Your Body's Looking Good Tonight

“We’ve accidentally made out a few time” DC WHAT THE FUCK I NEED THE REST OF THIS YESTERDAY

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: February 02, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Your Body's Looking Good Tonight

Alright. This is my actual review (although the first one pretty much encompasses everything I’m feeling anyway).

I’m kind of obsessed with modern day but same age Jim and Pam, so I’m entirely into this.

Super quirky part of this that I liked, but everyone usually picks Eagles or Phillies and all of a sudden Jim is a hockey fan and I kind of dig it and want more of that please.

The fact that they’re comfortable enough to just go into each other’s places and pay for each other’s takeout makes me all warm inside and needing literally a lifetimes worth of back story. So. I’m prepared to sit here forever.

“It’s just beer” NAH GIRL IT AINT IM GIDDY TOO.

He bought pizza for her and stocked his fridge with beer for her and IM GONNA NEED MORE OF THIS PLZ.

Also, they’ve made out. Partially clothed. You *are* prepared to fill us in on all of this, correct? Good, I thought so.

UGH GOOD JOB FAM.

Author's Response:

I love EvErYtHiNg about this review but mostly that you, like Coley, noticed the significance of the pizza and beer. That warms my heart. 

Oh, and I'm prepared. Are You prepared?

xo