Penname: agian18 Real name:
Member Since: October 19, 2017

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Summary: It's 1963 and West Scranton High's new math teacher Jim Halpert has a secret. When it rears its ugly head and puts both him and librarian Pam Beesly in danger, how will he react? Will they be able to outrun his dangerous past or will his enemies catch up to him, once and for all?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43374 Read Count: 14958 ePub Downloads: 32
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2018 Updated: August 21, 2020
Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: March 22, 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ah. You did the thing where you say the title in the story. Am I berating myself silently for only just understanding it now? Maybe.

This was so sweet! I love that Pam sees the kiss as more of something to break her than the shower (because the shower almost broke me, chick, let me tell ya).

I also loved all of the little callbacks to the show. “The Paper Salesman.” I will laugh about that one for a long, long time...

Author's Response: I’m a sucker for the “put the title in the story” lol, but also I wanted to really drive home what the title means, cause it’s kind of abstract? Or maybe I’m just into it that trope. 🤷🏻r05;a92;a039; Thanks friend! I’m glad you are liking it. I got kind of worried about writing myself into corners but I think I made it make sense without backtracking too much or messing with the character development that I’ve been working on. Does that make sense? Anyway, as always I appreciate your reading and reviewing and let me tell you can’t wait to read that 45 chapter fic you’re working on! 😉

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: April 05, 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

“I bet that’s a game I’m better at than you. Want to find out?”

Ya OKAY BT, I SEE YOU.

Author's Response: Narrator: And in fact, he was better. At least, up until that point. 👀

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: April 22, 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I mean. The “stay still” bit. You’re an evil lil genius, ya know that?
I LOVE that we kind of get to see a little role reversal for Pam’s inner monologue! She’s in love with him but doesn’t want to say in case he doesn’t feel the same. But then he comes right out and says he turned down the job offer to stay with her. Ugh. Confident Jim is so...*swoon*

Author's Response: Confident Jim is one of my favorite Jims. Right up there with “stay still” Jim 😉

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: May 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh wow okay, so it's gonna be like that, huh?
How do you write a gun/knife fight so poetically? I feel like it's the opposite of poetic. But when there were wood shards mixed in with the carrots I was mesmerized? And then, ya know, hyperventilating because gun.

Author's Response: I’m like, way proud of the wood in the carrots thing. Seriously. So I’m glad someone noticed and I’m glad it was you!

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: May 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love the code names. I love Pam being so freaked out over Jim. I love the "I love you" and how it was repurposed and how he needed to tell her that he loved her once he was better. I loved that he's totally rifling through a hospital to SNEAK OUT EVEN THOUGH HE'S NOT BETTER. Ugh. Friggen Bonnie and Clyde over here and I'm obsessed.

Author's Response: Jim absolutely is about to steal supplies and book it out a back door and I am here for it.

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: June 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sometimes when I review a chapter, I wait until I'm finished. Other times, I have to pull up a side by side window to write my thoughts immediately as I'm having them. This is one of those times, because I jut read "Radish Inn" and FELL OVER. BT. Please never leave us again.

"But standing here, in the arms of the man that she loved and that loved her back, she was untouchable." Wow. Wow okay. "Untouchable." Hmm. I'm not FEELING THINGS because of ONE WORD. Nope. I'm not.

"Well yeah, of course." Yeah. So casual. Of course. YOU DORKS.

I'm sitting here in a mush of emotion and then you just throw in a "With real conditioner!" to make me giggle. I appreciate that. Always thinking ahead.

"Twiggy little prick" god you're just full of one liners today.

Okay. I only say Ryan coming in this chapter, and was going between him and Gabe when you said "Twiggy little prick." I would like to PUNCH HIM WITH A KNIFE. YOU REALLY LEFT IT LIKE THAT?? RYAN STRIDING IN ON AN UNCONSCIOUS JIM?? Honestly thought I'm a little ticked at Pam. She knows they're in danger. GIRL I KNOW UR LOVE SICK BUT YOU'RE ALSO BEING CHASED BY A MURDERED--WAKE HIM TF UP HE CAN SLEEP WHEN YOU'RE OUT OF THE WOODS.

Author's Response: Twiggy little prick is my favorite part of this chapter, lol! Also it never even OCCURRED to me that it could be Gabe. Man, I’m kind of wishing he was the bad guy instead. Then it’d have been “that bony creepy weirdo” instead of twiggy little prick. Damn, hindsight really do be 20/20.

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: August 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue

Just gonna go reread this entire beauty from beginning to end because it was just EXQUISITE. BYE.

Summary: Jim and Pam's first date. Set immediately after "The Job". 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10120 Read Count: 12824 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2018 Updated: August 14, 2018
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: August 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: After "The Date".

Wow! I loved how you wrote our Jam. The banter was on point, their confessions at dinner were very believable, and the “after date” was steamy. Great job! I hope you write more after this :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have another get-together JAM fic on Archive of Our Own that I haven’t cross-posted yet because I’m not sure if it’s done, and this one is kinda better written hahah. my username there is corinneelaine if you wanted to check it out! Thank you for your kind words :)

Summary: AU. Pam moves from Scranton to Philly because she scored a new job at a new rising company called Athlead! While out one night celebrating in Philly Pam decides to let lose and enjoy herself only to realize the next day that was with her new boss, President and CEO Jim Halpert.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71978 Read Count: 46516 ePub Downloads: 18
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2018 Updated: February 04, 2020
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: January 24, 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh boy! Shits about to go down. I am mentally and snack-ily preparing myself for this smack down (I bought popcorn).

Also. This is super random, but one of my favorite parts of this story is that you dress them in immense detail. Is it weird that I picture a Jim and Pam paper doll as I read those parts?

Snort-worthy comment of the chapter goes to:
“Jeez, Beesly, how many clothes did you bring?”
“The same amount of shoes that you brought.”

I am oddly entertained and super all for fashionista Jim.

Author's Response: Hahaha I don't know why but Im always terrified that my writing doesn't have enough details and its blain so I got super over board and yes I have actual cut outs of their outfits in a notebook so I don't repeat hehehehehe Im a loser who fines immense joy in this. Thanks again18!!! 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: January 28, 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh wow. That was intense. But let me saw that what you did was real and raw and very well done. Pam being up in her head through shock, and then having a snap into reality and needing to be out of the clothes, and Jim helping her through the panic attack was very powerful. It takes a lot of courage to write something like this, and you did an excellent job! I can’t wait to see how they overcome.

Author's Response: OMG thank you so much for this review I want to frame it haha I was tell warrior in his review I suffer from sleep paralysis and panic attacks so I was able to bottle that feeling and write it, but the actual sexual assault took some research. Thank you so so much again18 for reviewing, I get so excited when you do.

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: November 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oooo you know what I liked here? Even though Pam got upset and left the party, she told Jim right away what was bugging her instead of tucking it away. See, your story is this interesting kind of AU where we’re not wrestling with “oh, poor Jim and Pam who can’t speak their mind” and I like that. I also love the way you have the rest of the ensemble set up. I typically *don’t* like it when Jam stories have ensemble elements, because, well, I’m here for Jam, but you do it it so well, and it’s so entertaining and on point that I love it! Keep it up! I love this lil number.

Author's Response: A girl who speaks her mind right hahah Thanks so much for reading and sticking around!

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: January 20, 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

“Still haven't decided if I wanted to make sweet love with her or just fully devour her.”

LOL. Have I told you how much I love the Jim of this story’s universe?

I also love how Darryl is the voice of reason. Who cares that you’ve only known each other two months, Jim? Marry the girl!

Also, entirely okay with there being a duel in Canada. Just sayin’.

Author's Response: I still fangirl when you comment haha just love your work!! Darryl just seems likes the voice of reason for anything in life, like he's THAT friend haha. Canada should be pretty exciting!

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: October 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Okay, I’m obsessed with this story, especially because it’s so un-Office but still Jim and Pam. You’re doing a great job with the characters, and I can’t wait to see how Jim and Pam get together!

Also, “This wasn’t bitch beer, Beesly,” made me SNORT.

Author's Response: I literally just screamed when I saw your comment. I had to read your pen name twice. I like love you!!!! You are an amazing writer and just omg I'm fan girling right now. You are just amazing!!!! And thank you so so much!!!! I'm glad I made you snort!!!!

Summary: Pregnant Pam is tired of being treated gently. Jim steps up to the challenge. 
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5406 Read Count: 9633 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2018 Updated: February 01, 2019
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: September 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this idea! And it’s so well written. Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hoping to have the next chapter up tonight :) 

Summary: College AU. Jim and Pam meet as college freshmen and immediately feel a strong connection. Lots and lots of fluffy sweetness.  
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49622 Read Count: 23940 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2018 Updated: May 04, 2019
Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: September 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It was a classic “oops we fell asleep and now we’re cuddling” but, but I love how you did it—all clothes, and Pam actually jumping out of bed before Jim had a chance to realize it. It gave them this sense of innocence that don’t ishally see. I love this story! I can’t wait to see them finally fall for each other :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I’m glad that played well. I really want them to fall for each other in an organic way, although for plots sake there will be a few speed bumps! But would it really be JAM if there wasn’t? <3

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: December 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ahh! I missed the crap out of this story. I'm so excited for Pam to meet Jim's family. I love that he has her as his cell background. Super cute. Also, super weird, but I love that they're super boring teenagers that are waiting to have sex, especially since in "real time" they probably jumped the gun. It think it's so cute. Anyway. I'll stop blabbing now. Can't wait for Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: September 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh my god, don’t wrap it up! Please no! Lol. I vote “drunk Halloween Jim who talks a lot about how much he likes Pam when he’s drinking and Pam has to take care of him after” but that’s just my preference 😉

Author's Response:

I like that idea very much *grins evilly and flexes typing fingers*

Ooh, and it would give me a chance to incorporate Jim's lame Halloween costumes and Pam's adorable ones. 

Niiice. <---please read in Kevin's voice. Thx ;)

Reviewer: agian18 Signed
Date: September 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I thrive on conflict 😬 I love how you’ve been incorporating little lines from the show, but in tour own context. I see a lot of authors try this and it just seems forced or way too cheesy, but you’ve done it seamlessly. I also liked when Pam realized that she might be overreacting. And making the first move! I like modern day Beesly. I can’t wait to see how Jim digs his way out of this one!

Author's Response:

Oh yay I’m glad those are working haha. It’s one of my favorite things in fic, when done right. 

I have two more chapters almost done! Gosh, teenagers are a pain.  But never fear, our babes will work it out ♥a039;

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: September 10, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, yup. If Facebook was around when Jim was figuring out his feelings for Pam, he definitely would’ve been the Facebook stalking kind. I love seeing this new present day element added! Can’t wait for Darryl’s party!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I’m relieved and happy to hear it’s coming across as true to the character haha. 

Darryl’s party is in the works! Hoping to have it posted tonight, and it will be a longer chapter than the previous ones! Looking forward to introducing Drunk!Pam, a la The Dundies episode :D

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: September 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love college AUs! There aren’t enough of them. I can’t wait to see where this goes!

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: September 10, 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You have everyone written so seamlessly into the college life! I love it. I also love how you incorporated Karen and Jim having a history back in high school, and how Pam is already jealous. Awesome work!

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: September 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It will be interesting to see Jim and Pam in a more present-day world (I'm assuming, anyway, since there is an emoji keyboard). Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I figured since I was doing an AU anyway, I might as well set it more present-day. I was in middle school when the show first aired! And it’s whole new set of challenges that come with today’s media-saturated world! I think I’ll probably have the emoji thing come up again, but that’s about it. Maybe have Ryan trying to get Jim on Tinder ;D

Summary:

What will Pam and Jim take to remember the other when Jim goes to Stamford? And who will influence their separation along the way? And why am I feeling the need for some angsty-ness?

Starts out between Season 2/3 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, In Stamford, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12151 Read Count: 4441 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2018 Updated: January 04, 2021
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: November 04, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Hers III

Oh wow. I LOVE how introspective Pam is being. So rarely do we actually get to see how she processed Jim being gone, more so it’s usually, “Pam got a new apartment and was sad, OOOO JIM SHOWED UP ON THE FRONT STEP!” so this is great. I love the bit in there that you have about how she doesn’t want to overthink the song choices on the CD, too. And taking his handset? Wow. I LOVED that move. So much. Can’t wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this! A review from you is such a treat. I’m glad you like it. And it makes me thrilled that the handset part worked for you! I was concerned it might too much, but it just wouldn’t leave my mind. So glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: Some mornings are different than others for Pam and Jim. Plotless fluff. Set against seasons 4, 5, & 6.
Categories: Present, Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Kids/Family, Married, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5018 Read Count: 2507 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2018 Updated: October 04, 2018
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: October 04, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Some Mornings

Oh my goodness, that was so precious. You captured so many little things that sounds so mundane in the reality of life, but are so much more with Jim and Pam. Love it!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks, Agian18! Most things are better with these two, right? I appreciate your nice review. 

Practical Magic by Coley Rated: MA [Reviews - 23] 61
Summary: Past Featured Story

Pam wants to dress up for Halloween. Jim doesn't. What else is she supposed to do? 

Submitted for the 2018 Halloween Contest! 

halloween readers choice

halloween dundies


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Dwight/Angela, Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Mark, Michael, Mose, Phyllis/Bob Vance, Ryan/Kelly, Stanley
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Series: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26866 Read Count: 15571 ePub Downloads: 24
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2018 Updated: October 31, 2018
Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1
Date: October 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Charmed

I know that I constantly praise your brilliance, so you should honestly be expecting this. You write Jim and Pam so well, and each of your stories gives them their own little quirks. Aside from the fact that all of the sexy parts of your story are always beautifully and masterfully written, the characters are what I fall in love with. I think one of my favorite parts of this was when Pam reached out to Jim after watching the scary movie. Just the fact that they need each other, above all of the silly bets going on. Ugh. Coley. Never stop.

Author's Response: Oh geeze, you're way too nice to me! I love it though, let's just keep writing JAM forever.