Penname: warrior4 Real name: Eric
Member Since: May 31, 2018

Bio:

Author of the Month March 2020

I've been writing fanfiction for awhile now. Just recently discovered The Office and figured I'd try my hand at that as well.

At first I thought of having all my stories in the same universe, but then I had some AU ideas. So any stories that occur within a common universe will be in a given series.


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Summary: Past Featured Story

NOW COMPLETE! Jim gets in an accident on June 10, and Pam gets to help. Only AU in that it deviates from main timeline between S2 and S3 (no different worldbuilding premise).

Disclaimer: I do not own the Office or its IP.

Challenges Challenge Entry Q2 2018


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Helene Beesly, Jan, Jim, Jim/Pam, Larissa Halpert, Other, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Challenges: Hospital JAM, Sister Sister
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63095 Read Count: 108621 ePub Downloads: 31
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2018 Updated: July 21, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: June 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 19: June 11: An Awakening

You did promise Jim would wake up, and wake up he did. Looking forward to seeing what comes next.

Author's Response: Heh, that was a kind of minimalist chapter, wasn't it? But I really wanted the hi/hey transition out of it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: June 12, 2018 Title: Chapter 18: June 11: Waiting Room

A very nice chapter showing the growing friendship with Larissa and Pam. I'm glad to see the next chapter will have Jim waking up. It'll be interesting to say the least to see what his reaction will be. Also it'll be nice to see the plot move along more. As nice as these Pam and Larissa chapters are I think by now we, as a reader, know they're getting on as good friends so it'll be good to see the story progress.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I wanted to really hammer home the Larissa-Pam connection before I let Jim wake up so that I could play the three of them off each other now he's up.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: June 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Interlude III: Jim's Head

Just got done reading this. Very imaginative. I really like the interaction Pam has with Larissa. Theses interludes into Jim's head have been fascinating as well. Slowly getting clearer and clearer. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens when he wakes up.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Jim will definitely get to wake up soon, and we'll see how he reacts to the Pam-Larissa thing that's been building.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: June 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 36: June 12: Pam's Chair by Jim's Bed

D'awwww, how cute. Nice to bring back the teapot. It's a great story device.

Summary:

It's been a while since Pam's been on a date. Good thing Jim's there talks her through her first few attempts. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Danny Cordray, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23434 Read Count: 11894 ePub Downloads: 19
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2018 Updated: November 07, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: June 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Suppose You Never Ever Called

That's a very interesting take. I went to Netflix right after reading this and re-watched their phone conversation. I feel this fic kept the feel of that conversation. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: June 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Beneath the Sheets of Paper Lies My Truth

I loved the back and forth Jim and Pam had here. Very cute and a lot of fun.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: October 04, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Will You Feel Anything At All?

Well worth the wait. You did such a great job here restoring the Jim and Pam banter we all love before getting into anything more heady. Looking through the fics I've put on my favorite list I'm struck that many of them show how strong Jim and Pam's connection is. Even if there are roadblocks in the way and even if the connection is frail at times, it's still there.

Clearly it's not frail here, rather it's hard and strong. >;) I really like that now that they've re-connected they're finding that out too. Can't wait to see what the last chapter brings.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: November 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Break My Fall

Just cause it was short doesn't mean it wasn't good. This last chapter starting out with Penny was a great way to calm things down a bit before the big finish. Lots of other more subtle touches too that added a lot of depth. Like how Pam was planning for 2 weeks before actually calling off the wedding. Adding in things like that really rounded off this chapter.

But of course Pam and Jim take center stage. Their reunion in the parking lot was a lovely image to bring to mind. How all her nervousness is dashed aside just by the simple fact they're together again. Then the dash to get back to her apartment and everything else that it brought. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you! I know I sound like a broken record but seriously, thank you for taking the time to read and review each chapter! This was my first time jumping back into fanfic after almost 10 years, and considering the talent on this site (present company included), it was a little nerve wracking to take on such a beloved couple but I loved every second of it and your comments always made me feel like I was at least hitting close to the mark :)

Summary:  A one shot collection of Pam’s pregnancy: Pam tries to get used to her stomach growing, Jim stares at her like she’s a superhero, and Michael won’t stop crying.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Pregnancy/Babies
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 519 Read Count: 1485 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2018 Updated: June 20, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: June 20, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Showing

Short and cute to be sure. Keep an eye on proofreading. There was one point where you said, "Are you applying," when I think you meant to say, "Are you implying." Other than than, not bad.

Summary:

An Office Prequel from Jim's perspective (at least mostly). 

James Halpert starts his first day at Dunder-Mifflin just to earn a paycheck. Little does he know that accepting a job as a paper salesman would change his life more than he ever thought possible.  


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8123 Read Count: 3016 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2018 Updated: July 14, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: June 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very fun. Everyone's in character quite nicely. Jim and Pam are hitting if off right away which is fun to see. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the review! I love all the characters for the office and I wanted to write something episode-like. :) I’m glad you found them in character! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: June 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very nice. All classic Jim, Pam, and Dwight very nicely in character. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;

Summary:

 One-Shot

Jim receives a phone-call from a very drunk Pam the night of her wedding. With her wedding opening a fresh wound in his heart, he doesn't talk long before silencing his phone and going back to sleep. 

Pam wakes up with fuzzy memories of the night before, horrified at what she might have said in the voicemails she left Jim. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3982 Read Count: 1836 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2018 Updated: June 24, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: June 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Fourteen Voicemails on the Night of June 10th

Clever idea to be sure. At first I was hesitant to read this since I figured it was a story where Pam did marry Roy, and I'm not a big fan of those. So I was pleasently surprised to see it wasn't. Jim's realization of what Pam was actually telling him and their reunion was very sweet. Good story.

Summary: College AU. A few months into their freshman year of college, Jim and Pam meet through her roommate and it all spirals from there.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5030 Read Count: 2003 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2018 Updated: July 05, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: June 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Farming and Walruses

Very cute. Lots of fun playful banter between everyone here. There was only one thing that was kind of distracting. The "(read: literally make out)" part when everyone is leaving the dorm. If that's what you're trying to get across, then just say that. Like I said it was a little distracting, for me, to read it like that.
Otherwise, very fun. Keep going with this.

Author's Response: Well first off, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Second, thanks for pointing that out! I went back and read it myself after I saw your review and I can totally see what you mean. I'll make sure to be more careful moving forward. Thanks!

Summary: It's 1963 and West Scranton High's new math teacher Jim Halpert has a secret. When it rears its ugly head and puts both him and librarian Pam Beesly in danger, how will he react? Will they be able to outrun his dangerous past or will his enemies catch up to him, once and for all?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43374 Read Count: 14892 ePub Downloads: 32
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2018 Updated: August 21, 2020
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: March 10, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Okay, I'm not even done reading this chapter yet, but I have to write this down in case I forget it when I do get to the end. "Clear and Present Danger." *Looks up as his personal bookcase to the title of said novel with lead character Jack Ryan.* Nice.

Duck, cover, and kiss your butt goodbye. Loving all the historical references in here too. Satisfies my history nerd as well as adds a lot of depth to this story.

Ok, now that I HAVE reached the end of this chapter, onto more reviews. Yes I can tell it's a rushed proofreading. A few typos or grammar errors here and there. Nothing to distract from the main story mind you, and through context it's obvious what you're trying to say. I still have stuff like that pop up all the time in my writings so no harm no foul.

I kinda like Pam's confused thoughts here. Yes she's gotten to know Jim these past 9 months, but there's still this whole other side of him she doesn't know. Now here they are in the back woods of Kentucky (pick me up some Bourbon while you're there please ;) ) in a small remote cabin and told to stay there for a week. Yes I can easily see how that would be unsettling.

Once again you write Jim's concern for Pam really well. It seems he's working up her list of needs. First immediate physical needs. Get her out of danger, patch up the shoulder, keep her safe. Next food and some other supplies to make a hard situation a bit more manageable with some staples from home. Then his promise that he'll answer all her questions to look out for her emotional needs. Great way to build that all up.

Then of course that cliffhanger. Ugh! We all write them because they're fun as a writer. We all loath them as a reader, but it just leaves on wanting more.

Author's Response: I was wondering it anybody would catch the Jack Ryan reference! It was a total fluke, but I looked it up later to check because I felt like I *knew* that was a Jack Ryan book. I’m so glad you caught it and enjoyed it! I’m really working on trying to incorporate real events into the story, but I will admit to my own ignorance about many of the things that were happening at the time this story is set. I’m doing research and trying to not go into too much detail so that I’m 1-wrong and 2-detracting from the story I want to tell. So I’m glad you are enjoying the references that are there and they’re adding to the story! I’ve since gone back and proofed a bit better so feel free to reread 😉 but thank you so much for looking past the mistakes and leaving such a great review! I love hearing what you guys think. I hope to deliver on the cliffhanger very soon!

Author's Response: I was wondering it anybody would catch the Jack Ryan reference! It was a total fluke, but I looked it up later to check because I felt like I *knew* that was a Jack Ryan book. I’m so glad you caught it and enjoyed it! I’m really working on trying to incorporate real events into the story, but I will admit to my own ignorance about many of the things that were happening at the time this story is set. I’m doing research and trying to not go into too much detail so that I’m 1-wrong and 2-detracting from the story I want to tell. So I’m glad you are enjoying the references that are there and they’re adding to the story! I’ve since gone back and proofed a bit better so feel free to reread 😉 but thank you so much for looking past the mistakes and leaving such a great review! I love hearing what you guys think. I hope to deliver on the cliffhanger very soon!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: August 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue

Oh yeah, Jim's a teacher and she's the librarian. Anyway this was all sorts of a fun way to wrap this up. I just loved that Jim just waltzed into the library like that. No hiding, no secrets. I'm kinda thinking that when he saw Kelly standing there at the desk he intentionally did all that hugging and kissing. Knowing Kelly won't (can't) keep something like that secret, him showing such sweetness to Pam is him saying "I love you," "I don't mind who sees us together," and also a subtle staking of territory. That last one, knowing that Kelly will spread the rumor far better than any overt display in the teachers lounge or something. Maybe I'm reading to much into this.

The new/first word of the day is the cherry on top of this chapter. A perfect way to show how he feels about her.

I've loved reading and following along with this story. Bravo for keeping with it and seeing it through to the end. It was exciting, suspenseful, steamy, sweet, and full of adventure. Beautifully detailed throughout everything as well. Thanks for weaving this story, it's been a blast.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: August 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*Blows out a big sigh of relief*

Not that I really doubted they'd be okay, but still considering the last chapter and how well written it was, the feelings were still there.

Love that once Pam is awake there's nothing that will stop Jim from getting to her side. Very sweet.

I'm kinda sad this will be wrapping up. I still have questions. Who was Ryan working for? Are there Russians involved? What other kind of stuff does Jim get into in this spy role? A tribute to you as a writer that you leave the reading still wanting more.

Also loving the canon adapted lines. Jim turning down David to stay with Pam, the "it's a date," lines. Oscar as the doctor was a nice way to get him in there too.

Like I said it'll be bittersweet to see this wrapped up, but it's been a great ride throughout everything.

Author's Response: Thank you, warrior! I have to admit that I don’t have the patience or time to do a lot of digging into who Ryan could have been working for and keeping it historically accurate. Plus I didn’t want that to take away from the heart of the story: Jim and Pam, obv! I kind of like leaving some things unanswered, though, so I’m glad you feel wanting more instead of “ugh unanswered questions!” 😆 But yeah, it was definitely the Russians. As always, thank you for reading and reviewing and sticking with me!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: July 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Very dramatic to say the least. Great detail through everything.

Ryan as a right proper bastard here. It feels very fitting. He's always the guy who gets kicked around, not taken seriously. In this context when he has this strong of an upper hand it makes perfect sense he's behave like that.

You can feel the desperation of Jim and Pam here. I love how at the first opportunity they fight back. They don't go down without a fight. Their first and overwhelming motive to see the other one safe. Great writing to bring that out.

PLEASE don't leave us hanging for to long with that cliffhanger.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried that Ryan was a bit too OOC but then again, how could he not be when he is the big bad, you know? So I’m glad that his characterization makes sense given the setting. I hope to get the next one up soon!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: June 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

No didn't really see it coming, but at the same time, with everything Jim's been describing, it also makes sense. Smarmy weasel that is Ryan it does tend to fit.

Fun to have the motel be named the Radish Inn. Love the nods to canon you make with things like that.

Also seems like Ryan knows what he's doing. Get there late at night when their guard is down. Say everything he has to in order to wiggle into their room. you can just feel the tension and hear the dramatic music at the end of this chapter.

Really looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: I’m so glad it was a surprise! I thought for sure I was giving it all away. And I had so much fun writing the little bit with Mose, haha! I was worried it’d be too silly but I’m glad it seems to fit. Thanks as always, warrior!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Quick pause while reading. "Run across hot coals..." Nice canon reference there. On with the chapter.

Wait a sec, speaking of canon reference, switching the Casino Night declaration? Oh jeez, pull out my heart and stomp on it. Oy.

Ok, I'll just say all the canon references, though turned around are making this fun to read.

Ahhhhh, that's better. Jim's awake and more importantly saying those words to Pam. Had me going there for a second.

Ok, on to more important things. Very real emotions for Pam. Her fear and desperation while driving felt very real. Also good for her to not back down from Jim during their little spat. Pam's getting some steel in her spine and I love that.

She's also getting quicker on the uptake for things. Coming up with fake names and making up the hunting accident story. Granted Pam's always been pretty sharp, so it's nice to see that translated here too.

Protective Jim is in effect again. He's beaten, bloodied, and bandaged, but he's still thinking of making sure they're safe. Good on ya Jim.

Great chapter as per usual. Really looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: I always love reading your reviews, Warrior! Thank you so much. I too like to think that Pam is learning a bit about how to be spy-adjacent and on the run, as well as not hiding her feelings! I hope you continue to enjoy, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 12, 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Quick pause in my reading of this chapter otherwise I'll forget to mention this in my review. I do have to wonder, which pistol she's mentioning there when she said she's seen everything? ;)

And then it all comes crashing down on them. Yeah, that's a very exciting chapter. Kinda figured we'd be in for something like that fairly soon.

The action scene itself was very descriptive. The feeling of time seeming to slow down, small details becoming razor sharp in focus, senses heightened, all a very real feeling of the flight or fight response. Good on Pam to mostly keep her head. Yes it takes her a bit to catch up, but when she does, she just acts. Good to see that. Same with her packing up all the supplies she can. First Jim took care of her. Now it seems it's her turn to take care of him.

I doubt they're out of the woods though. Really looking forward to seeing where we go from here.

Author's Response: Thank you so much as always, warrior! And yes, she’s seen everything everything, if you catch my drift. I’m so glad you enjoyed the action scene. I’ve had that in my head for so long (I think I started this story knowing that Pam would eventually shoot someone) and it was kind of tough getting it out. So I’m so glad you liked it! And you are likely correct on them not being out of the woods just yet. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: March 08, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

First and foremost, welcome back. Glad to see you writing again and that this story's progressing.

Nice nod to a few canon elements in the dream sequence there. It's a bit of trick to add canon elements when the story is AU like this, but that was a great way to do it.

I like the concern Jim has for Pam here. Nice to see their feelings are still on track with each other. Still a lot of mystery to everything going on with Jim though. However that just compels the reader to want more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, warrior! I am so glad to be back and to see so many familiar names. Thank you so much for your review, it means so much! I hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: April 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

First off, because I noticed them a couple typos. "looking for all the world like the car that ate the canary." What kind of car would that be? A Buick? Chevy? Ford? They didn't have Yaris' back then so I think we can rule that one out.

"They’d spent the rest of the previous day in the bedrothe bandage on her wound after showering (again)" Yeah not quite sure about that one which is why I mention it. Through context I kinda get what you're saying. Figured I'd mention it is all.

Okay, now that that's out of the way. First off another very warm and sensual way to start things off. Love how they connect like that. In more ways than one. You've got them paired so well that it's lovely to read.

Also glad we're getting more into the meat of this story. The sexy fluff is fun don't get me wrong. But I'm dying to know what's going on with the rest of everything.

There you go again Pam being well matched for Jim. Her pointing out that Josh is now quite likely an enemy was a brilliant way to show that. It seems like until she said that, Jim couldn't quite wrap his head around that concept. Now that she's pointed it out though, it seems he's forewarned about this new potential threat. And of course forewarned is forearmed. I can almost see the gears turning in his head as he starts to process all this.

Great job as always.

Author's Response: Lol! Definitely a Buick. Thanks for pointing all those out for me! And for your well thought out review, as always. I am interested to hear what you think about upcoming chapters! I might have a twist or two in store...maybe!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: July 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So this is actually pretty exciting! It was fun to see our favorite characters in this setting. I'm glad we just kind of sped through all the early Jim and Pam angsty days of the show. I'm not at all familiar with the novels this is based off of. So that'll be fun to see. All in all I liked it. Lots of typical JAM moments, but in a new world. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was glad to get past the will they/won’t they unrequited love stuff. There will still likely be some angst, just of a different kind. I hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: March 22, 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ok, I'm going to review as I read otherwise I get the feeling I'll forget what I wanted to write. So without further ado;

Love Pam's after effects of the shower. Yeah, got a feeling that will stay with her for awhile. Until other memories replace it. ;) Love the descriptions of the meal. Simple, mismatched, but perfect.

Grrr. I'm reading this at work and we just got a call. Back to reviewing as soon as I'm able.

Ok, an hour later and now that that's all done, back to this chapter and back to reviewing.

No bearded Jim anymore? Ok. Nice to see the start of real honesty. Keep it up. Yeah, I agree with you there Jim, Roy's an asshole. Glad that's all out of the way before any of this all started.

A little heartbreaking to hear about Pete. However if there is a silver lining it's that through that Jim got into his current job and eventually met Pam. So that's a good thing, right?

D'awww what a great use of that line from Casino Night. Very different feelings with this setting. Very nice.

Oooh! There's a twist! Josh as the potential bad guy? Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Good on you Pam. Not running away or anything. Not that she could go anywhere really. Still I love that she's still there to support him. Also that she's not scared to want his support too. Her asking him to lay down next to him was just all sorts of sweet.

Great chapter. Hope to see more soon.

Author's Response: I have to admit that I was inspired by you and “Silver Wings” to try and find ways to incorporate pieces of dialogue in ways that maybe change what they mean or the impact they have. So much good stuff is there for us to use, you know? And I know, I know. Bearded Jim is one of the best Jim’s but I just loved the idea of her being able to see his whole face while he was being so vulnerable with her. The beard will come back, lol. Thank you so much for another great review!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: March 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Uh, yeah, steam. In more than one way. Jim the gentleman here is nice to see. Like I said last time he's taking care of her needs. I just wonder how long it's going to be until he starts taking care of her wants. Or maybe she'll be the one who moves forwards for more of those wants.

Great update. Looking forward to more as ever.

Author's Response: You I sat there thinking “this entire chapter takes place in the shower, should I add some substance?” And then I thought “nahh, I can do substance later!” 😉 Glad you enjoyed! I have some thoughts on how other things will get taken care of in later chapters...can’t wait for you to see! Thanks for reading and reviewing!