Penname: warrior4 Real name: Eric
Member Since: May 31, 2018

Bio:

Author of the Month March 2020

I've been writing fanfiction for awhile now. Just recently discovered The Office and figured I'd try my hand at that as well.

At first I thought of having all my stories in the same universe, but then I had some AU ideas. So any stories that occur within a common universe will be in a given series.


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Reviews by warrior4
Summary: AU. Pam moves from Scranton to Philly because she scored a new job at a new rising company called Athlead! While out one night celebrating in Philly Pam decides to let lose and enjoy herself only to realize the next day that was with her new boss, President and CEO Jim Halpert.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71978 Read Count: 46516 ePub Downloads: 18
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2018 Updated: February 04, 2020
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Kinda cute little moment there as they got past their awkwardness. I do like that they both seem more mature afterwards. I'm sure there's still underlying tension, how could there not be, but you had them both handling themselves well after that first meeting.

Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for keeping up with the story seriously means a lot! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: September 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'll add to what another reviewer has said. There are a few errors that distract as one reads. Probably the biggest I saw was the line; "But nine bedrooms and seven bedroom its get's extremely lonely." More than likely you wanted to say something like; "But with nine bedrooms and seven bathroom it gets extremely lonely." A lot of times when I've finished writing a chapter I'll leave it alone for a full day. Get my mind off writing and go do something else. After a day has gone by I'll go back and start re-reading what I've written and I find I catch a lot of the errors I didn't see before.

Other than that we've basically transplanted Dunder-Mifflin here. It'll be interesting to see the characters bounce off each other like that. Of course it'll also be interesting to see the Jim and Pam relationship unfold with this kind of start.

Author's Response: Thanks for another review!!!!! I love that idea about leaving it alone for a day before going back to it. I think I will definitely do that. Thanks so much :):);)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: December 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Kinda figured Pam would get in trouble as some point with all the mention of robberies and such. Glad she didn't get more hurt than just some cuts and scrapes. Protective Jim is great. Roy remains terrible. Glad he's a country away in this story rather than just downstairs in the warehouse. Glad to see an update too.

Author's Response: I'm always astonishes how you manage to review so quickly with a newborn, blows my mind every time. Thank you so much for always reviewing Warrior means a ton!

False Claims by shutterbug Rated: MA [Reviews - 10] 5
Summary:

An arrest. A trial. A prison cell. 

Jim and Pam fight to keep their hopes alive, while Dwight tries to uncover the truth. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5340 Read Count: 2002 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2018 Updated: September 23, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: August 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Arrest

Interesting premise. It'll be interesting to see where this one goes. Good job at introducing drama into this story even in a short intro chapter. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hey, Warrior! Thank you! It goes to...well, I hope it goes to interesting places. I'm glad I can intrigue you! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: September 16, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: The Night Before

Good emotional depth. Thinking about what could be coming down the pipe is sometimes worse than the actual event. I get the sense this is what's happening here.

Author's Response:

Thanks! :) 

I definitely get like that--fear the unknown, imagination running out of control. It's easy to get more worked up than necessary. Thanks again for reading and commenting!  

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: September 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: The Trial

I for one appreciate the liberties you took with the trial. From your story summary we knew this was going to happen, so better to get it over and done and bring us closer to seeing how it all gets resolved.

Now just because it was quick, doesn't mean you didn't write it well. Very good at getting into Jim's head here. Especially there at the end. Most assuredly not boring.

Summary: Pregnant Pam is tired of being treated gently. Jim steps up to the challenge. 
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5406 Read Count: 9633 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2018 Updated: February 01, 2019
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: September 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the concept. As a father-to-be at the time of writing this I can empathize with Jim. Still Pam has needs too, so to see how they communicate those will be interesting to see.

Author's Response:

Oh wow, congratulations! How exciting! 

It’ll be interesting to see how this develops with feedback as I go, because usually I don’t post WIPs but I am trying to pace myself with writing this one.

And we all know Pam isn’t the best at communicating her feelings, even at this point in their relationship, so it might take a while to get it out.

Thanks for your comment :) 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: September 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like how you've got Jim and Pam portrayed here. Even though they're married now and have so much history, they're still over-analyzing every look, thought, and feeling they have for each other. Feels like the leftover remnants from before they got together. Used in this context it makes for a good read.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: October 20, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really liked the cute moment when Jim felt baby kicking for the first time. It was a very special moment for me when I did the same and I think you captured that moment well.

I love how you've got Jim and Pam so closely connected. It's great to see. Looking forward to seeing how the rest of the afternoon goes for them.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: February 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Glad you finished this one up. I love that Jim and Pam are re-connecting like this. That though things aren't like they used to be, they can still find ways to show each other how much they love each other. Just lots of great little moments even while things are hot and heavy. Great way to bring things to a climax here.

Summary: AU ending to the Dundies episode. Pam doesn't get a ride with Angela. 
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Other
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8951 Read Count: 5749 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2018 Updated: September 06, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: September 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One small quibble was that the BBQ at Jim's was after the Dundies, but it's a small quibble. Very sweet and steamy first chapter. Onto the second.

Author's Response:

Ooh dang, you’re right! I’ll just take that line out, I don’t think it changes much if she’s never been there before!  

Thank you so much for your feedback! I have a 3rd chapter in the works as we speak :)  

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: September 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like the concept of this chapter. It's a nice change of pace from from the usual stories where Pam has things figured out about where to live and such and then gets together with Jim. To flip that should make for a compelling tale. I'd like to see where this ends up.

Water's Edge by Awimoweh Rated: K [Reviews - 5] 6
Summary: An AU conversation after Pam's speech at the beach.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 552 Read Count: 2130 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2018 Updated: September 06, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: September 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: High Time

Very sweet indeed. Good job for your first story. I liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks Warrior!  And you are my very first review!  Glad you liked it.  Wow, it feels good to get a review --- I'll be sure to review more often now; getting feedback is great!

Summary: College AU. Jim and Pam meet as college freshmen and immediately feel a strong connection. Lots and lots of fluffy sweetness.  
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49622 Read Count: 23940 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2018 Updated: May 04, 2019
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 04, 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This was delightful. Great images of a warm Halpert household. Pam coloring with Vanessa was sweet as well. I'm so glad to see how you've been building their relationship in this story. They're wonderful with each other and it makes it fun to read. Onto the next chapter.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 04, 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm going to agree with Jim here. That was a while coming, (twss) but it was worth the wait. Considering how you've built up this relationship, when they finally get to this point, it's great to see them connecting like this. Great detail and very steamy.

Congrats on the kiddo. From one new(ish) parent to another, your in for one of the hardest things you'll ever love. I know things will get busy for you soon, but hopefully you'll be able to find some time to keep this going. Best of luck to you.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: February 05, 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You're being a tease in the best possible way with this, you know that right? Very detailed here. Very easy to see in the minds eye all the goings on. Betsy knocking on the door, yes, frustrating for our two heroes, but funny for the reader. Glad to see this updated.

Author's Response: That’s the goal!! Haha but thank you, I’m so glad it all plays well and is easy to picture. Appreciate the feedback as always 😊

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: February 05, 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Nice good at home fun here. Your Larissa is in fine form. Great to see them so comfortable with each other.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: December 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Very cute. Kind of a filler chapter in that there's no real plot development. However it's very sweet and nice to get this Jim and Pam's backstory for why they'd pick Cece and Phillip.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: December 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good to see this story back. Looks like things are about to heat up for the holidays. Nice to see Jim and Pam so sweet with each other. Also I have this vision of this story Dwight coming into his room with all his stuff gift wrapped just like in the show. Probably where the idea came from in the first place.

Author's Response: Exactly! I try and pull little things from the show as much as possible to keep a familiar tone to it :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: October 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Very good. Meeting the parents is always one of those interesting moments in a relationship. I liked how you had them just basically a normal family. Nothing felt rushed or out of place. Just another step in the wonderful relationship you have these two walking down.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: October 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well worth the wait considering everything you've got going on. Congrats by the way.

So this was just all sorts of sweet and adorable. You've really got them paired nicely in this story and it's a lot of fun to see. Good description that makes it easy to see the scene in the minds eye. The dialogue feels natural as well. Looking forward to more as always.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: September 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

"In Vino Veritas", in wine (or in this case beer and jello shots) truth. Good on Pam for not pressing anything further in a compromising situation. Lots of fun.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: September 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute start. Looking forward to seeing how this one will turn out. Lots of good description that sets the scene out well too.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: September 09, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Short and sweet. Still a very fun tale you've got going here.

Author's Response: Thank you! I’m glad you’re enjoying it, the feedback is invaluable! :) 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: September 09, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Still all very sweet. I was grinning the whole time I was reading it. Can't wait to see where this is going.