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Primae Noctis by neotantrika Rated: MA 6 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: First Date Fic.  But with the usual neotantrika steam.  NC-17

Recommended by: lisahoo
Recommender's comments: Nice interior monologue from Jim.  Beautifully written steaminess.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Completed: Yes
[Report This] Added: August 02, 2007
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: December 22, 2018 Title: Primae Noctis

Wow. Just...wow. This might be my favorite post-“The Job” date fic ever. I am blown away. So sweet I’m the first half. I especially liked the kite scene where Jim nods at the kite man with an acknowledgement that yes, Pam is amazing and beautand she is so easy to fall in love with. So romantic.
And that second half? Oh my. Oh, yes. Possibly the sexiest inner monologue ever. And also awkward and funny. Just sweetness all over with the sexy. Perfectly JAM. Loved it!!!

Summary: It's 1954, Dunder-Mifflin's brand new office has opened and a handsome young man is in charge...and he's falling for the switchboard operator. Super AU
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: You Don't Know Me, Another Decade
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11248 Read Count: 46043 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2007 Updated: May 04, 2009
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed
Date: September 30, 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Emerald Ceramic

It’s been 9 years since this was updated and I’m begging BEGGING for this to be updated! OMG it was so good and steamy! You captured that 1950’s sophistication so well! And his mom with Alzheimer’s...it just hit so close to home for me. Of you’re still around...come back and finish this one!! Please!!’

Vox by sophia_helix Rated: MA [Reviews - 15] 38
Summary: Past Featured StoryMEMBER'S CHOICE - "She didn't analyze it. Not talking to him had been weird and hard and lonely; talking to him made her happy."
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9822 Read Count: 13403 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2007 Updated: November 25, 2007
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: August 30, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I WISH it could have gone like this! Stories that are too angsty give me stress, but this had juuuuust the right amount. I thought you captured Pam’s inner voice very well. Well done!

Summary: Past Featured StoryWe all loved the big declaration, the single heartbreaking tear on Casino Night. But what if Jim had decided to go for it a long time ago, and what if he'd gone about it a subtler, darker way?

Oh yes, there will be smut.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8281 Read Count: 46948 ePub Downloads: 16
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: October 24, 2009
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: September 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I realize I’m 9 years too late on this fic, but I HAVE to leave a review! Wow!! I have to fan myself and clutch my pearls at our dear Jim! Yes, he may have been a little OOC, but it was still believable. Top marks all around!

Summary: Jim has become an expert at lying, but when tragedy strikes, there's only room for the truth. Jim, Pam and a trip down memory lane that goes further than they knew. Takes place around Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Drama, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7661 Read Count: 26901 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2010 Updated: March 21, 2010
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Date: December 09, 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Sunday at the Met with Jim

I am a sucker for good AU, even if it’s just slightly AU. And this is amazing. Oh, so romantic and sweet. Love it!

Summary: Pam loves him. If there’s one thing he’s sure about, it’s that.
It’s just right now, he’s not so sure she should.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Let's Spend the Night Together
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2019 Read Count: 4287 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2011 Updated: March 03, 2011
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: September 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: It's a man's man's man's world

Oh, this was beautiful! You perfectly captured Jim’s self-doubt. Excellent work!

Summary: The moon bounce is still there when she leaves work that evening.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Claustrophobic Spaces, Fluff, Oneshot, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1309 Read Count: 3337 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2015 Updated: January 10, 2015
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: September 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Moon bounce

Romantic and a little silly is my favorite kind of story and this hit both of those notes (with just a shadow of angst to balance it out). This fic was recommended and I’m so glad I read it!

Author's Response: I’m so glad, too! Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review, and to whoever recommended my story to you! PS, I love your user name :-)

Summary:

Checking in on Jim's thoughts a week after certain events.
*double update: Chap 8 + 9 posted**
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Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Drama, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3843 Read Count: 15860 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2016 Updated: April 06, 2018
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Fifth Night

Ow! Poor Karen! This line just about killed me;

“At this point loving the woman who sits behind him at work is just a reflex, a habit to break. And he will, with time.”

Life is really hard when you’re lying to yourself, Jim.

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Unspoken

Ah yes. This definitely left me satisfied and smiling. 😉 I loved every chapter of this fic. And I especially loved the way Jim and Pam communicated without speaking. That has been such an important part of their relationship and you included it in such a lovely (and HOT) way here. Thank you so much for this one!

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Merger

Ugh ugh ugh! Again, you’ve captured the “essence of Jim” here and I can tell that because I want to slap some sense into him. Haha!

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Hangover

Oh...the darkest point in the series for me. And I actually kind of liked Karen (until she said that thing about Pam). This is the point at which I really started disliking Jim.

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Moving to Stamford

Ugh ugh ugh! The feels! Of course he would still keep everything, but also want to forget. You have such a good feel for Jim’s inner “voice.”

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Casino Night

Ugh...here comes the angst! Like I said before, this story makes me want to reach through and grab him by the shoulders and tell him to keep the faith! So good!

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Diversity Day

One of my favorite JAM moments! I love how you worked in that BJ script note.

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: In the beginning

Ohmygosh! Be careful, young Jim! You just want to reach through the screen and tell him that the path is long, but he gets there in the end. Love it!

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: September 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Wedding News

One of my regrets about the show is that we didn’t get to see this time in Jim and Pam’s story. It’s why I love fics like this one. Hearing that she had canceled the wedding would have thrown Jim for a loop and I think you captured that here. And Angela! Good for you!

Whisker Burn by BigTuna Rated: MA [Reviews - 5] 25
Summary: My contribution to our (hopefully growing) collection of beard smut, in which Jim grows a beard and Pam is turned on by it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Married, Oneshot, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Beardy Jim Halpert
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2630 Read Count: 3578 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2018 Updated: April 05, 2018
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed
Date: September 30, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Whisker Burn

I didn’t know how much I needed this in my life until I read it! And having moved across the country twice, I like how you incorporated how tiring it can be. Hahaha!

Summary:

Safe and Sound Cover

Life as they knew it is over. Everything has been and can be taken away in the blink of an eye. Despite this, they found each other. But can they ever find home?

Inspired by A Quiet Place.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Larissa Halpert, Pam, Roy, Ryan
Genres: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Explicit sexual content, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Possible Triggers, Secondary Character Death, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56650 Read Count: 16774 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2018 Updated: June 05, 2021
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed
Date: August 30, 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Day 263: Evening

Oh my goodness this was amazing! I’m new to the site and this has to be one of my favorites so far! It’s a fun twist to both The Office and AQP. I’m keeping my fingers crossed for no angst but I know I’m probably wrong. Eeeek!

Summary:

People always assume that Pam Beesly is as sweet in the bedroom as she is an all other realms of her life. A missionary-only type of girl, the girl you treat like glass.

Little do they know, she just wants Jim to shatter her, break her into little pieces. She decides she's done waiting for what she wants.

It's always the quiet ones.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4656 Read Count: 4927 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: May 27, 2018 Updated: May 27, 2018
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: September 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Quiet Ones

Wow! Just wow! I know it’s been a little while, but I sincerely hope you continue to write more. I love this version of Jim and Pam!

Nonverbal by BigTuna Rated: MA [Reviews - 14] 30
Summary: Past Featured StoryIn which Jim and Pam work through their communication issues...in a way. A sexy way. A reimagining of the S3 episode The Return.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4493 Read Count: 4718 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: May 27, 2018 Updated: May 27, 2018
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: October 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This really hit that sweet spot between romantic and hot! I love this exploration of their ability to communicate without words. I always think back to the first episode “Jim said mixed berries? Yeah he’s on to me.” and I think you captured the spirit of that connection very well here. And it was HOT!

Summary:

It's been a while since Pam's been on a date. Good thing Jim's there talks her through her first few attempts. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Danny Cordray, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23434 Read Count: 11894 ePub Downloads: 19
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2018 Updated: November 07, 2018
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: October 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Suppose You Never Ever Called

Oh my goodness! This is lovely and steamy and it makes me wish this is how the show went! AND it incorporates those Cordray dates we never saw? GENIUS!

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: October 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Beneath the Sheets of Paper Lies My Truth

Love the Jim POV here. And Pam beats him at his own game with the stealth dafe! I honestly feel like I’m reading something that could have happened on the show that’s how well you have captured their voices. Well, the show might not have been this steamy. Hee Hee!

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: October 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Will You Feel Anything At All?

KPoor Pam! She’s had a difficult seven months, not to mention the day she had. I actually really love it when Pam is mean to Ryan...he deserves it usually. And Jim explaining how much he loves Pam and merely likes Karen by pointing out how he can’t remember Karen’s office wear? So sweet...so sexy...so very JIM! And wow! What a third date!! YAY!! I’m gonna need you to write LOTS more dates!

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: November 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Break My Fall

What? That’s it?? It’s over??? This cannot be! I love this Jim and Pam! I want stories about this Jim and Pam forever until their 80 years old with lots of great grand children in Austin! I’m now bereft and humbly beg you to keep writing!

My favorite line from this chapter? “Real Life Jim was showing Fantasy Jim who was boss and she loved that this was so much better than she ever thought it could have been.“ Oh, Pam, my friend...you deserve this and so does Jim.

I also loved how they both had the idea to surprise the other one. These two have always had a great unspoken connection and this reflected that. So romantic and sweet! This story really had it all. Bravo on the story, Coley. Please write more!

Author's Response:

Okay, this review makes my whole day! Thank you so much for your too-sweet words. I’m so glad that you enjoyed reading this and I know, it was a shorter story, but I needed to dip my toes in before committing to anything too long (twss)

But don’t worry! I’ve got at least 3 other stories planned and 2 of them already started, running all across the board emotion-wise, and don’t even get me started on Christmas... more is coming ;)

And for real - thank you so much for reading! 

Summary: In which there is some smut and a mirror. Inspired by Michael's line in season 4: "You're talking about Jim and Pam, if they're having sex. What it looks like."
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3722 Read Count: 3929 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2018 Updated: June 21, 2018
Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1
Date: November 10, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: What It Looks Like

Wow. Oh my. I need a cold drink now. Maybe my own tall glass of sun tea. 😂

Seriously, this was so nicely done and in character. Jim’s confidence and him saying it comes from how Pam makes him feel was just so sweet and in character for him. That combo of sort of directing Pam and asking permission? Yeah that was amazing. And there’s Classic Pam being hesitant and cautious before Jim helps her break out of her shell...love that. Great story all around!