Penname: kaywinnit Real name:
Member Since: November 16, 2006

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Falling by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 103] 45
Summary:

This is for kath and Code Name Remax, both of whom wanted a fic in which Michael spilled the beans he has so miraculously been holding thus far....

Begins the night of the Christmas party (or rather, the two Christmas parties...)


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Holiday, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14417 Read Count: 61555 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2006 Updated: December 25, 2006
Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation

Oh. My. God.

So perfectly painful. I can totally see Michael doing this.

Now please write more and fix it.

Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim receives a gift the day after Christmas. And then another one the next day. And again for the 10 days after. Is it a joke, or has his True Love come forward?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66510 Read Count: 94106 ePub Downloads: 38
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2006 Updated: January 20, 2007
Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: On The First Day of Christmas

Dude. The night before last I totally had a dream that resulted in me waking up completely convinced that Pam's art class was responsible for giving these gifts. And now you go and give us a big hint in that direction. I feel so prescient.

Also? Apparently this story is so good that I'm having dreams about it.

Author's Response:

Wow.  Now that's a review you don't read everyday!  :-)

There are certainly many things still to be discovered..... 

Summary: Past Featured Story

MEMBER'S CHOICE TOP NOMINEE - Jim and Pam must interact in network sponsored live chats to promote their documentary. Angst (and maybe some smut) ensue.

Story now complete.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Pam/Other
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51174 Read Count: 147756 ePub Downloads: 48
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2007 Updated: November 16, 2007
Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: October 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: THX

I was going to post a comment a couple chapters ago about how much I'm loving this story, but then MTT was all down so I didn't get to.

I was giddy with how much I was loving this story last time, but now you've got me all depressed. I was hopeful that the line "...there are other funny, sweet, smart women out there. He just needs to try to find a way locate one in his real life." (from J/K) meant that he wasn't gonna date Karen, because while Karen's plenty smart and I don't hate her the way some do, I don't think "funny" or "sweet" are words I would use to describe her.

But now you've gone and made him date her and he's all "there's no way JIM would give PAM another chance" and I just...waaah! :(

I want to tell someone how depressed I am about it, like I do with tv shows, but those people are not fanfic readers and will just look at me funny. *sigh*

I also totally have a scene in my head for how Jim and Pam could figure out they're talking to each other. That's right: I'm creating fanfiction fanfiction.

So that's an extremely long way of saying this story rocks. But also I'm sad so can you give me some glimmer of hope please? Also, write, like, three chapters a day, ok? Or maybe ten. Or twelve. WANT MORE.

Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: October 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: ETA

waitwaitwait--

jhalpert@gmail.com is the address Pam told TeamJim to create to pretend he was JIM. And they've emailed back and forth with him using that account. I guess it was to a different account of hers, but I can't help but feel like, when she's used to getting stuff from that account from TJ, which she clearly enjoys getting, she would be really likely to notice that this email is from that account.

Author's Response: AGH! You are right. I knew I'd slip up at some point. Going to change that NOW

Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: October 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: ETA

Thanks for fixing. Now I can go back to enjoying the warm glow of Pam & Jim being nicer to each other after the raw (but totally believeable) meanness of the previous chapter. :)

Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: November 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: AFAIK

Wow. Only Pam and Jim would be able to do this, pretending to be not themselves knowing they are but being unwilling to face it even when they desperately want it...what a mess. It's the kind of thing I never would have thought of, but you pull it off so well.

The second time I read this chapter it made me cry.

PLEASE tell me you're going AU with this story. So far it's conceivable that this isn't AU, and, oh my god, if you're going to make Jim not break up with Karen for THE REST OF THE SEASON? I can't take it. I just can't.

Summary: A series of IM conversations between Jim and Pam. Just a lot of fluffy season 4 fun! Spoilers through season 4. by the way I'm bad with titles.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10914 Read Count: 37739 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2008
Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: October 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Jellybean Poison and The Cheater's Guide

These are fun!

You should definitely put the rest of the chapters up here. I particularly enjoyed trying to not giggle along with Jim & Pam in the the fifth chapter.

Summary: It's Halloween again. Ensamble episode in novel format, served with a side of Jam. Set after 'Money'.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4867 Read Count: 7027 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2007 Updated: November 12, 2007
Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: October 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: PBandJ Make.... Grilled Cheese?

"You a Browncoat too"

um...Yup. Among other things. Many other things. Teevee is my friend.

Author's Response: Shiny. I\'m a ficwriter over at fff.net (using a different handle), so it\'s sweet to see another Browncoat in a non-Firefly setting.\r\n\r\nPlus you might dig something else later in this story.....

Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: October 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: PBandJ Make.... Grilled Cheese?

Ha. Enjoying it. Spent awhile trying to fully pronounce "Imaginatory… ily" in my head...nice Michaelish word.

One little nit to pick: the baby isn't Boomer's--it's Sharon's, or Athena's. Yeah, they're the same cylon model, but the show differentiates between the two of them, and I think Dwight would too.

(I guess this is where I'm supposed to hang my head in embarrassment over my dorkdom, but a) not ashamed; BSG is awesome and I have long since made peace with my obsessive fannish nature, and b) I'm posting this at a fanfic site, so....yeah.)

Author's Response: Wow, that is a level of precisness that is amazing. Thanks, and no head hanging! nice to see some BSG love out there. As dorky as Dwight is to have Starbuck\'s flight suit, while I wrote it I was thinking \'It would be frakkin awesome to be Thrace for Halloween.\' Lol.\r\n\r\nNow I feel dorky for asking, but, your handle. Kaywinnit? You a Browncoat too or am I just overstepping my geek line?

Summary: In science, the term "observer effect" refers to changes that the act of observing will make on the phenomenon being observed.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Other, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, Married, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19046 Read Count: 17044 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: January 25, 2008
Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: January 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Be whatever you like, you're my redhead.

Gyarg.

This fic makes me... uncomfortable.

I'm a JAM shipper to the core, and this version--with Jim idolizing Pam instead of, like, bestfriending her, just...the problem is that you portray it in such a convincing way--you've thought it out well, with the way the documentary affects Pam, and all that time apart making Pam larger than life for Jim--and that makes my insides hurt. Pathetic, I know. I keep wanting to quit reading but you write the story so well that I keep coming back.

I'm never gonna go for the Pryan, never ever, but in a fic like this, I can at least understand people who do.

Ok. I'm going back to my happy place now, where Jim and Pam are best friends. Best! Friends!

Author's Response: Heh. Thank you?

Summary: Jim's biggest fan guides him through Season 3
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13735 Read Count: 39955 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2008 Updated: April 11, 2008
Reviewer: kaywinnit Signed
Date: February 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: You Don't Know Me, But I'm Your Biggest Fan

ahh...your lovely metaplots where the airing of the show affects the events just never get old. (Or repetitive; you keep finding new twists. Which is fun.)

Question: What is the postmark on the envelope of that letter? That's definitely the first thing I'd look for if I got a letter from somebody.

Author's Response: Thanks! I don't know what it is, but I love me some meta. Thank you for reminding me that I had to deal with the postmark! Sadly, Jim is kind of dense that way, but he'll catch on. Just watch. Thanks so much for your review.