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I like this story, and I hope you'll return to it one day! I would love to see the confrontation between them... though poor Pam, she doesn't deserve all of this...
And I really enjoyed that Jim took Toby's place at that time. I can't imagine how painful it would be for Toby to deal with aggressive Pam... and Jim kinda needs it. Hehe :)

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Oh my, I love this chapter so much! My inner teenager screams in delight, because this sleepover was just... perfect. Perhaps, my favorite moments are the scene with braids and mirror and spooning. Those are just too sweet to keep calm, so I don't. Thank you!
Oh, and I googled all of the nail polish colors. Jim definitely has a good taste :)

Oh, such a great update! I really fell Jim's anxiety about Pam's absence and worry along with him. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad the emotions are coming through clearly!

I love this. It's so simple, and yet so heart-achingly beautiful.

Author's Response: Thanks Dernhelm! And thanks for taking the time to review, hugely appreciated 😊

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I truly enjoy this story. Perhaps things between Jim and Pam are going too fast, but come on, and things were going too slow in the show, so that's a nice improvement.
Also, I love the interaction between Pam and Angela. That's great that they have some kind of friendship, and even with Jim's presence, they keep it.
Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, my personal frustration with how things worked so slowly on the show is why I write fanfiction, lol. So glad you are enjoying that and what I'm doing with this AU. More very soon!

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I register to say 'Ohmygodohmygodohmygod!' Your story is fantastic, and I like every tiny piece of it (I'm still don't know what I feel about the whole cheating Roy thing, but that's in character, I guess). Please, continue!

Author's Response: Thank you very much indeed! Glad you've enjoyed it so far. I haven't done this before, so the encouragement really helps.  :0)

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I hate when they are so miserable, but I absolutely love the chapter! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

Author's Response:

Unless I'm struck by falling masonry, you are promised a happy ending - hopefully before the year is out.

Thanks for keeping with the story!

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I can't believe I read this story only now. It's unbelievably warm and cozy and makes me smile and make a lot 'awww' noices. Just wonderful!
And it's nice to see that Jim gave Pam some salesmen's advice. Perhaps, he has more cards in his hand to play (I hope to see them!). And, of course, the successful hunting. I have a sudden urge to watch 'The Mummy'!

Author's Response: Glad to have you here. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it so much. It's been fun to work on and add in all those moments to make one go Awww. 

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Ohh...
It's so obnoxiously when some random person tries to touch your child ('it's just a hug/kiss/touch, what harm could it cause to a baby?') or gives you unwanted and unwelcome advice. I felt that discomfort when I read the scene in the supermarket. And I like so much the way Jim acted it that situation!

Author's Response: Thanks. Jim's reaction to creepy lady was what my sister used to do when people would reach for her while she was pregnant. It usually worked too. Glad you liked the chapter.

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Yay! Update! And the amazing one!
I love that despite all the insecurities, they can talk about themselves. And even though I would be delighted with the happy kiss, I like and appreciate Pam's concern about this whole dating thing. My fingers are still crossed :)
P.S. I've read a pretty angsty fic earlier, and your story increased my mood very much!

Author's Response: I’m so glad you’re happy to see an update! You’ll have to tell me which angsty fic - sometimes I’m just in the mood for some good angst! 

Awwwww! Just awwwww!
*I'm sorry, I temporarily lose my ability to form a coherent sentence. It's the sort of fluff that makes me grin like an idiot, and I like it.*
Pam's apartment! Michael being Michael! Dwight missing Jim! Friendly Karen in Scranton! That's lovely icing on the top of the lovely story! Thank you so much for this fantastic journey!
*Sorry for the number of the exclamation marks, but I'm really excited.*

Author's Response: I was worried it was a bit too heavy on the fluff, so I’m glad to hear it was bearable. I very much appreciate all the exclamation marks! 

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I read this chapter with a big smile on my face. It's fantastic! I like the sea metaphors for their relationships, and how they finally reached the land. And I like how third persons made the points (especially Karen; God, I love this Karen!). And... well, I probably like everything about this chapter! My fingers are crossed for the update :)

Author's Response: Haha, I’m glad you like this Karen! That can be a hard thing to pull off. Don’t cross your fingers too hard for the update, it might take a while...