Penname: DoomGoose Real name: Goose'du'oom
Member Since: December 03, 2019

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Summary: They bond over fabric softener on two occasions. 
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Kids/Family
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 850 Read Count: 846 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2020 Updated: May 26, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 26, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Fabric Softener

Very cute, that had me smiling almost the entire time.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: Dunder Mifflin Scranton's annual charity event is a Bachelor/Bachelorette Auction. With so many singles in the office, it's anyone's guess who will end up with whom. AU set late Season 3. Romance/Humor/Light angst
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16027 Read Count: 6166 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2020 Updated: June 18, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 31, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's a good hook, I'm in to see how this goes.

The tone for this chapter felt right on the money with Jim's hot/cold reactions to Pam.

Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you! So far, so good then. Chapter 2 is up now.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: June 06, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well, Jim said it himself, so no surprise there that Karen dipped. I hope Mr. Blonde can make Karen happy, because the way we're all hoping things go...

Of course Todd packer had to be there. Not gonna lie, completely forgot about him, that was just great. And Pam's comment to Phyllis asking if Bob could beat him up for her was fun. That got a chuckle.

Looking forward to seeing how this plays out!

Author's Response: Thank you! I had thought about using Roy to compete with Jim, but I thought Packer added a sleazy dynamic that was fun to write. So glad you're enjoying this so far. Ch. 3 is up now!

Summary:

 "But her heart broke that night, too. She lost her partner in crime, her best friend, and the man she loves because she was too scared to screw everything up. "

 

Jim finds Pam crying in the hallway instead of Dwight, he tries to figure out what's wrong but she doesn't want him to know that he's the problem. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5230 Read Count: 2662 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2020 Updated: June 19, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: June 19, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was getting worried there wasnt going to be a turnaround but thankfully it got there! In the end there I don't know if it's just me or what but for some reason it felt like they had the same 'voice' during the confession. That could totally be a me thing though. A lovely outcome there though, all nicely tired up with the promise of a brighter future to come. As always your monster oneshots are a joy, I look forward to your next endeavour!

Love Ain't by JennaBennett Rated: K+ [Reviews - 35] 51
Summary:

Sometimes Jim doesn't get Roy.

A version of Booze Cruise where Jim rocks the boat. 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5177 Read Count: 3241 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2020 Updated: July 04, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: June 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The way you're talking sounds like he's somebody you should hate

Admittedly I found myself having to go back over a few lines because I got lost, but overall I really liked it. The subtle brazeness of Jim in this chapter is a sight to behold, as is the internal turmoil that results from it. We all wish they had said something more substantial on that deck, and this was a great possibility. I really hope we get a part two... Or more!

Author's Response: Thanks DG! 

Part 2 is on the way, it should be up sometime soon. 
I was a little worried about it being clear who was saying what... There’s definitely less he said/she said than I would normally have in a story... I hope the second chapter is a little clearer. 

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 05, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Come over, let me show you what he can't

Aww, thanks for that! Even if you didn't think a part 2 was needed, it is definitely appreciated! That ending was pure fluff and I loved it.

Going back a bit, the 'Roy is dense' bit is always a classic. I love/hate how he's like 'Yep, thats fine, never really wanted to get married anyway,' and just expects Pam to take it. The threat of Roy's violence was unexpected, but you built it up very nicely with the little background bits like Pam remembering what her Mom said all those years ago.

And of course, the Dunder Mifflin Posse + Jim to the rescue was great, I love that Roy got put in the brig.

Thanks for part two! It was great.

Author's Response: Thanks DG! 

I feel like the Roy who spends wedding savings on Wave Runners would be all over calling off a wedding and continuing as is... 
I figured if someone was getting put in the brig in this AU it would be Roy (& not Michael). 
I’m glad having part 2 worked! 

Summary: Past Featured StoryShe’s trying to be honest, isn’t she? So, in all honesty, she wants him to fail the interview.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4248 Read Count: 8817 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2020 Updated: June 28, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: June 27, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So just caught up on this one. The characterizations here feel pretty on point, and the emotion is really raw. I could feel my gut twisting in the previous chapters as Pam just let him leave, and now the panic/elation/fear of confrontation. I love the way you ended this chapter, the little things Pam does speak volumes. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with to follow this up.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it... 

From it outside it look like baby steps but these things are hard to Pam and I hope it shows. 

Thanks again! 

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: June 28, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This was a lovely alt, all the same staples as the canon events, but spin in such a way that it all has a little more meaning. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!

Summary:

Pam reflecting on her life. 

Post Casino Night.  


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 377 Read Count: 734 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2020 Updated: June 27, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: June 27, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: At the bottom of the ocean, you'll find rest, but not happiness

I really liked this, water allegory always plays really well with our favourite pair. The imagery of the slow transition to relying on Jim was really on point.

Author's Response: Thanks, DG! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) 

Summary: Jim and Pam meet at a convention and share a one-night-stand. Or, so they believe. Will it turn into more? 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46034 Read Count: 17560 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2020 Updated: September 20, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: August 01, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Room 214

I am so excited to see Jim fight for Pam's hand. I demand a du- wait, sorry, wrong genre.

I am still excited though.

Author's Response: Yes, it's always great to write Jim with a little more courage. Thanks so much for the review. CH. 6 is up now!

Infliction by Dernhelm Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 14
Summary: Past Featured Story'She was so soft, and warm, and yielding, and you didn’t expect of her to hide a knife behind her back.'
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 484 Read Count: 1333 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2020 Updated: July 03, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was admittedly a pretty tough read for me, you certainly can paint a picture. The emotion you evoke with this imagery is... not pleasant, which is probably what you were going for, so well done on all counts.

Summary:

"The veil of complacency that she had worn for a decade had fallen from her eyes and she now saw everything anew."

A series of episode related oneshots taking a look at what was going on in Pam Beesly's mind.  


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7146 Read Count: 6759 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2020 Updated: February 19, 2021
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 07, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night

Ouch, my heart. This screams the need for an AU resolution. With your great writing, the angst may just do us in. You don't want to be responsible for that now, do you?

Author's Response: I certainly do not. 😂I hope the painful journey will payoff in the end though and she has a lot of growth and change before she is truly ready to be with him. Thanks for the comment, DG, as always! 

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 08, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Initiation, Diwali, Merger

Can't hate you for writing this, especially with the great insights into Pam in one of my least favourite times in jam, but of course I can still implore you to have mercy on our aching hearts and get to the heart melting fluff asap. I know you're capable of it, I read Virtus!

This was a really great chapter, all pleading for fluff aside.

Author's Response: I promise brighter days are ahead for them. Hang in there. :) 

Zoom meetings by Kuri333 Rated: M [Reviews - 74] 82
Summary:

During mandatory lockdown there is still work to do, and Pam is nothing but a professional.

Contemporary AU lockdown JAM. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23943 Read Count: 9179 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2020 Updated: November 18, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 08, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Initiating

This is a fun and different take, I am definitely interested to see where you go with this.

The Roy barging in bit was great, just what one would expect from him.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Connecting

Walking around in the background of a call wearing PJs? That was totally me before I finally got back to work a few weeks ago. I love the unique and relatable spin to their classic arc, and I hope they continue to grow their relationship. The part with Roy ordering pizza - just - off. Boy do I really hate that guy.

Well done, looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

As a friend of mine said two weeks into lockdown: my "real" clothes are probably thinking I've died.

Thanks very much for reviewing! 

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Error

Very cute! I especially loved that Pam went out of her way to deliver food to Jim, that was a very feel good moment. I am of course also glad that they finally met in person. While seeing Pam struggle with her relationship with Roy is saddening, I can only hope it leads to less pain all around this time. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

I wasn't sure about Pam sending food to Jim, but then I remembered that during quarantine here a lot of people were doing it. Grandmas to their grandchildren, Moms to their kids, and even I sent some cookies to a couple of friends because I'd made too many. So, this is more or less what Pam is telling herself this is about. Of course, is a lot more than that.

She is moving forward, and it's not easy, but she's going to.

Thanks very much for reviewing! 

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Leaving

I'm glad to see Pam found the determination she needed to get out of her rut. Roy not caring enough to fight for the relationship hurt, but I'm thinking he'll realise what he's missing once she's gone for sure. Let's just hope that Jim can give her some more reasons no to tread that path again!

I really like the tone you've set with this chapter, it's somber with a hint of hope near the end there, and I really look forward to seeing where things go from here.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Roy hasn't really understood that Pam means business yet, so he kind of lets her go. But he'll catch up, soon enough.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim returns to Scranton from Stamford in a world where Karen doesn't exist. Pam wants to pick up where they left off on Casino Night but Jim tells her he's done all the pursuing so far, and he'd like be pursued (read: seduced). "Give me a reason to come back." 

Inspired by the Taylor Swift song "I Think He Knows". 

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18104 Read Count: 20431 ePub Downloads: 23
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2020 Updated: April 14, 2021
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 11, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am all aboard for a Karen-less Scranton and an accepted coffee nondatedate. I can't wait to see how you spin this, really looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Incantation by Dernhelm Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 7
Summary: A different take on the Beach Games speech.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 220 Read Count: 789 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2020 Updated: July 12, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 12, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A Spell Pamela Morgan Beesly Put On Jim

It was a good weird, kinda like a lyric or some other type of poem. I'm admittedly not that familiar with poetry types, I detested that unit in school. But the imagery was definitely appropriate, I liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you, DG! I'm not too familiar with poetry types, but I'm glad that this piece was okay :) 

Summary: The teapot letter has been found by Pam.  But in Season 3.  What will happen when she finds it during her time of pining?  What if Karen finds it?  Set a few days after “Ben Franklin”.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2624 Read Count: 1132 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2020 Updated: July 15, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Pam Finds It

I love how it starts with the drudgery of a day in the office, and quickly escalates into emotional turmoil and tension. Pam's brazenness and bravery in your telling of this chapter are extraordinary, and quite amazing. I really look forward to seeing where you go from here.

Espionage Act by oncelet Rated: T [Reviews - 11] 12
Summary:

The CIA needs receptionists, too. A short, silly story where Pam ends up a clandestine operative. Post Negotiations. 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3649 Read Count: 880 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2020 Updated: July 16, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, that was great. I'm not really a fan of angst, and it saddens me when JAM doesn't get their act together, but nonetheless I can appreciate this story. I was disappointed when I went back to the table of contents and saw it marked complete! Please share more, it's a lovely idea and I can't stop my self from holding out hope that they would find their way back to each other in the (hopefully) coming events. Jim not smiling back hurt. Please fix.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I can try to fix it, but it might just make it worse. I'll try my best!

Paradox by Dernhelm Rated: M [Reviews - 61] 77
Summary:

In different places and different times, Pam meets Jim, and these meetings change both their lives. 

Two pairs of human feet
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Drama, Romance, Suspense, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Possible Triggers, Secondary Character Death, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44527 Read Count: 4356 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2020 Updated: December 19, 2022
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Stranger in the Woods

I wouldn't say it was creepy, it was quite intriguing! As someone whos never watched any of the shows and only really heard of them in passing, I'm really excited to see where this goes because I really don't know what their arcs look like.

Sad that Pam's the victim of teenage drama, but what good protagonist isn't? I liked the hint of the supernatural feeling that you got with the lost in the woods and Pam's methodical backtracking still leading to the same place, kinda spooky.

Of course Jim is a time travelling sarcastic alien. Makes perfect sense lol.

I really look forward to seeing where this goes next.

PS I hate mobile.

Author's Response:

Thank you, DG! To be honest, I try to avoid tropes from these shows and just borrowed these or those elements for the atmosphere. 

Hope you'll like the next part :)  

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: July 25, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning of Everything

Jim insipiring Pam to paint was my favourite moment of the chapter. One does have to wonder how much Jim the time travelling alein cheats with foreknowledge of Pam's likes and dislikes though! I'm glad that you were able to turn Pam's worst first date around though, it was really sweet.

Author's Response:

Thank you, DG! I'm dying to discuss all of these moments, but I can't. What I can tell you is that it's a pure coincidence that Jim showed her something that inspired Pam to paint... aaand I have to shut up here because of spoilers :(  

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: The Belated Gift

Of course Pam gets painted like a French girl by a crazed french painter, why not? That was a really fun adventure for them to go on. And the ending,Jim giving her the button for if she wants to see him again and her immediately pressing it... That had me smiling, it was great. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes next.

Author's Response: Thank you, DG, I really appreciate your feedback! The next one is here :)

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: September 23, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: The Things to Remember

Some very sweet moment with Jim and Pam this chapter. You also teased us with enough details of Jim's "Job" to get me curious, because from the snippets you gave us it sounds like there might be a time-travelling Michael, and that is just hilarious and terrifying at the same time.

Author's Response: Thank you, DG! I think that if there was some time-traveling Michael Scott, there also would be a while crew that followed him and fixed the results of his follies... and I like this idea a lot!