Penname: DoomGoose Real name: Goose'du'oom
Member Since: December 03, 2019

Bio:
A bored IT guy.
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Revenge by Donnamour1969 Rated: M [Reviews - 50] 47
Summary:

Set in Season 3, immediately following "The Convict," wherein Jim gave Andy false information to woo Pam. Pam surprises everyone, however, by agreeing to go out with Andy. Unbeknownst to Jim, Pam is seeking revenge against him for his brilliant prank. But will Pam take things too far? Will the turntables?

AU bit of romance, humor, and maybe a little angst.  Rated M for adult language and situations.

 

Disclaimer: I own nothing belonging to The Office. No copyright infringement intended. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21540 Read Count: 6976 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: February 29, 2020 Updated: April 05, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: March 10, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was nice. In my mind they traded and it's a win win win, but somehow I don't think that's where you're going with this.

Date Line by Comfect Rated: T [Reviews - 406] 95
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Post Casino Night AU where Jim goes to Australia, and Pam follows.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87001 Read Count: 204670 ePub Downloads: 38
[Report This] Published: March 09, 2020 Updated: May 27, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: April 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Sky Walking

Ah, a little resume massage never hurt anybody! It'll be interesting to see how they rope Ryan into the plan, looking forward to that.

I enjoyed the date and time discussion. As someyeho has trouble with timezones just in North America, I can relate to that sentiment.

Looking forward to more, keep up the good work. You are always out with an update before reading in bed for me, so I really appreciate it.

Author's Response: I hope this most recent one managed to hit your bedtime still, even if it was a bit late! Thanks :)

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Date: May 27, 2020 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81: The Job, Part 2 (Finale)

This was a wonderful finale. Of course we all expected everything to all fall into place, but your writing of it had me smiling the whole way. Well done, I will miss this story for sure, but I look forward to whatever you have in store for us in your future writing endeavours.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to have had you reading along! It may be a bit before I jump in again (as you know, I update a lot so I really need the inspiration to strike hard). I do have a fairly large back catalog of stories--and of course all the people (like you) still updating!

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Date: May 25, 2020 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79: Beach Games

I really liked the introspective take on the coal walk, that help show just how much Pam has grown in the last months since everything changed.

Looking forward to the finale, I trust it won't disappoint, you haven't yet!

Author's Response: Thank you! One of the great things about fanfic is that characters can think things they don't say--unlike in the show :) And thanks for your trust!

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Date: May 25, 2020 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78: Women's Appreciation

Happy to see everything all coming together, sad that it means the end of an era. I've been reading this story every night for almost 3 months now, so I'll be sad to see it end.

You have done a fantastic job keeping this going that long though, and I think you deserve a break! I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up, and then whatever else you move on to writing.

Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with this so long! I think it's important to actually tie things up and not just let it go on forever, because endings are important--but it is odd to actually think about this ending.

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Date: May 23, 2020 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Cocktails

Glad Pam has something to do there, I was worried she'd be bored while Jim shot hoops!

Jumping back to the start of the chapter, I really loved the mutual support thing they have going on there.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you noticing the small things at the start :)

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Date: May 22, 2020 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76: Business School

The prettiest art line is pure cheese in this new context, loved it. Gils comments showed a nice growth and progression in Pam's work, and that was really nice to see. Of course one can't forget Michael, and one of his gem moments.

Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! Cheese is a specialty...

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Date: May 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75: Phyllis's Wedding

Is it bad that I wished for a really of the original Roy scene but with addes sass from Pam? Anyway, I'm okay with the yadda yadda there too, I just can't help wanting the Pam sass.

Going straight for my SciFi nerd heart with the Han Solo-ing, I will admit.

Also Pam not having all the answers to her feelings, felt pretty on point. I'd be almost disappointed if she didn't have some thoughts on being engaged again so soon.

Yet another enjoyable fixit, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I could have added that, but I didn't have specific sass in mind, so I just yaddaed it....

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: May 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74: Back from Vacation

I was worried about you, almost broke your streak!

Lovely update, from the adorable kid to the house, I enjoyed it immensely. The jinx was another nice touch.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun with it. And I might be late, but I have too much invested right now to skip this (watch me fail anyway for some random reason now)...

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Date: May 19, 2020 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73: A Benihana Christmas

Nice spin on the CIA prank, I liked that.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Date: May 19, 2020 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72: Merger Part 2

I liked the contrasting perspectives on Jan there, something that we never get to see directly addressed, so nice to see that here.

I'm also thankful for friend Karen, maybshe live long and prosper.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your attention the details :)

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: May 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71: The Merger

Friend Karen is best Karen, looking forward to that! Let's just hope she gets that Jim is taken, that Halpert charm can cause collateral damage sometimes!

I enjoyed the introductions, great tongue in cheek there, and manager Jim strikes again.

Looking forward to Michael's disaster of a plan!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will work on Friend!Karen.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: May 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70: Branch Closing

This chapter had a great emotional arc, the dip of the branch closing, high of moving in, low of telling Roy, and eight back to ending on a high. Always an enjoyable read, good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I realize I did put a lot on one chapter, so I'm glad that worked for you!

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Date: May 14, 2020 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68: The Coup

Glad you're only doing the episodes that strike your fancy, write what comes to you!

Manager Jim running interference was a nice touch.

Author's Response: Thank you! I like the idea that non-angsty Jim is maybe better at his job.

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Date: May 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67: The Convention

The Kelly characterisation here was great. The bulldozing into a double date was on point, and getting banned from another restaurant was just icing on top.

We're definitely still wil you here!

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to stay true to both the universe I've made and the actual episode.

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Date: May 12, 2020 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66: First Day Back

That's great, reminds me of the Asian Jim cold open. I was especially amused by the various bribes offered by jim, particularly Ryan's new number for Kelly, that's just downright cold.

Author's Response: Yeah, that is definitely the vibe I was going for. Thank you!

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Date: May 10, 2020 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63: Flights

Nice, glad they're coming home. Also good to know that this won't take nearly as long as getting there ;)

Author's Response: Not nearly! Thank you!

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Date: May 09, 2020 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62: Pool

Really looking forward to the back in Scranton stuff coming up, Australia's been fun, but the rest of the ensemble could use some love!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope it will live up to it.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: May 07, 2020 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: It's All About the Climb

I feel like I've said it all before at this point, but I'll say it again.

Your writing is great as usual, and the fluff continues to be very sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you! I try to please, and fluff is a specialty.

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Date: May 07, 2020 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: Drawings

Roy wearing a hoodie becoming a kangaroo got a chuckle, that was just entirely unexpected, good job.

Looking forward to your take on the greatest hits of AUS3, that sounds interesting. It'll be nice to be back in the office with these two.

Author's Response: Thank you! 

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Date: May 05, 2020 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59: Koalas!

Oh boy, lilo and stitch was a long time ago. Another enjoyable low fat chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Date: May 04, 2020 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58: I'm On A Boat!

Looking forward to the Bearslys ;)

Short, to the point, fluffy, and excellent as usual.

Author's Response: I mean, they're always short ;). Thank you!

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Date: May 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57: Choices, Choices

The Meredith dig was on point, that got a chuckle from me.

I look forward to the next one, this was great as always.

Author's Response: Thank you! I try to bring in as many people as I can...

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Date: April 11, 2020 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Gift Shop

Excellent as usual. Looking forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's up now.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: April 01, 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: I Scream for Ice Cream

Uh oh. Are they sending Dwight?

Another just in time for bedtime reading update... Though to be fair I pretty much read all day now.

Author's Response: I also write these before bed, so that seems like a non-coincidence. I hope you are enjoying! Thanks for the review.