Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: March 31, 2020
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The story seems to repeat, you may want to fix that!
Otherwise it was good, I liked it. On a more mechanical note, I'd suggest using the line break built in to your word processor instead of making your own. As a mobile user id appreciate it, as an unbroken line of text does not wrap on mobile.
If you can't find the line break in your word processor,it's also available in the tinyMCE editior.
Author's Response:
Fixed the repeating issue, thanks for letting me know about that! I don't know how that happened lol. I'll try the line break tool, I've never used it but I'm sure I can figure it out.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!! (: