Penname: Ami17han Real name: Ami
Member Since: November 22, 2006

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Another Saturday Night by 69 cups of noodles Rated: M [Reviews - 19] 18
Summary: It's Saturday night and everyone's got their own plans.
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4229 Read Count: 7397 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2006 Updated: December 12, 2006
Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 9
Date: December 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Pam

Pam uses art better than she uses words.

I am still waiting for this to be true on the show. 

This has been a great series overall. Excellent job getting into the minds and motivations of each of these characters. 

Occasionally We Stop and Stare Past Tiny Paintings by Pemulis Rated: K [Reviews - 43] 33
Summary: A peek into the lives of the Office staff away from the office.
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2366 Read Count: 5192 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2006 Updated: December 12, 2006
Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 9
Date: December 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

klepto Angela - what a great detail!

and dials China. priceless.

Michael's inspiration is AFV and Bob Saget. Kiss his BUTT! 

Jurassic beet farm. Best. Line. Yet.

 Loved it!

10 Reasons Jim Hates and Loves Christmas at Dunder Mifflin by Semby Rated: T [Reviews - 21] 10
Summary: Original hesitant title was "Five Christmas Moments in the Office that Jim Really Disliked, and Five That Actually Made Him Really Happy" so that should also be a pretty clear summary. 10 random Christmas moments Jim had over the years - skipping over this Christmas entirely, so no spoilers.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Angela, Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Phyllis
Genres: Angst, Holiday, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4016 Read Count: 20727 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2006 Updated: December 12, 2006
Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 9
Date: December 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

but for once Roy had done exactly what he would have done – and Jim had nothing to gloat about.

I'm always on the lookout for good Roy moments. I really liked this one. 

It's amazing to me when Michael actually gets something right. I like those moments, too. Bravo/Brava for a good chapter. 



Author's Response: Thank you! I like Roy getting his good moments in every once in a while too. He had to be a decent, considerate fiance at least some of the time or she wouldn't have stayed with him all that time (she was no Fancy New Beesly yet, but even Old Settling Beesly wouldn't have put up with a guy who never ever made her happy!)

Falling by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 103] 45
Summary:

This is for kath and Code Name Remax, both of whom wanted a fic in which Michael spilled the beans he has so miraculously been holding thus far....

Begins the night of the Christmas party (or rather, the two Christmas parties...)


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Holiday, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14417 Read Count: 61577 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2006 Updated: December 25, 2006
Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 10
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Best chapter ever. You nailed girl - every one of them. Roy, Pam, Karen & Jim. This makes me care about each character that much more. Well done.

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 9
Date: December 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Because this was real life, and real life was decidedly more messy than fairy tales, the tradeoff being that it was also markedly more visceral, emotions less obtuse, desires more pronounced.

This is EXACTLY why I love and adore your writing style.  You've done a great job catching the "real life" moments. This is a great Christmas Eve Eve/Last night of Hannukah present. Thanks!

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 10
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Another overall great chapter. I wonder if Roy would be so confrontational. Would he be able to put 2 & 2 together so quickly (even with it spelled out for him). I think you really caught Jim, though. Evasive, tortured. Awesome.

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 10
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Michael's Mediation

Yikes, what a chapter. I felt icky in all the right places. I don't think this is over the top at all. I'm continually amazed at the things Michael says and does. I really liked this chapter, however, I'm too dense to figure out why it's in this series. Great tension.

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Roy

make them safe somehow

This is why I love Roy. He is simple and knows he wants it simple. and safe. 

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Karen

there didn't seem to be a damned thing she could do about it

I don't know if this is the Karen I picture. I will go with it, because I trust your writing!

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 9
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Jim

ooohh. give me more Jim & Karen tension! 

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Pam

was that Roy had taken care of more than a few little details

I love this little revelations that Pam seems to keep having. It is so true, no matter how much someone makes you cr azy, it's hard to have perspective inside the relationship. Great work, as expected.

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed
Date: December 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Roy

Omigod, Styx. Hee heee.

Distant younger cousin. Only Michael could say that and mean it.

Another great set of perspectives. Lovin it! 

The New Year's Resolution by 69 cups of noodles Rated: MA [Reviews - 158] 39
Summary: Karen and Pam decide to throw a party and Jim hopes that by New Year's he'll have some things resolved. Spoilers through Benihana Christmas.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14688 Read Count: 70345 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2006 Updated: January 01, 2007
Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 9
Date: December 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: for self-assigned penance

That was a really good chapter. My favorite moment is when Karen leans over and says she's going to get Pam & Roy hooked up! 

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 9
Date: December 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: for problems with easy solutions

Ewww. Ouch.This one hurts. It's a great chapter. vicious Karen, I like it.

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 8
Date: December 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: let's make believe that we are wealthy for just this once

"Shabby replacement, no. Rebound chick is open to interpretation though."

"Yes," he simply says.

Two best lines in this chapter. I am really enjoying this storyline.

However, the rest of the dialogue between Jim and Karen seemed a little too verbose. 

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 8
Date: December 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: i wish the world was flat like the old days

He slides his fingers under the neckline of her sweater, gently pulling it off of her shoulders with both hands.

This is HOTTER than any of that other "erotica" out there. Woo. I need a minute.

My True Love Gave to Me by time4moxie Rated: MA [Reviews - 250] 82
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim receives a gift the day after Christmas. And then another one the next day. And again for the 10 days after. Is it a joke, or has his True Love come forward?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66510 Read Count: 94117 ePub Downloads: 38
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2006 Updated: January 20, 2007
Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 10
Date: December 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: On The Second Day of Christmas

This is shaping up to be a classic. I'm loving it and losing my mind, all at the same time. Very clever.

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 9
Date: December 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: On The First Day of Christmas

I like this! I can't wait for more. Is it really Pam???? I HAVE TO KNOW! I really like all of the little sweet moments between them. Great job.

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 9
Date: December 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: On The Third Day of Christmas

Another great chapter.

I wonder if Karen would have just called, instead of coming over.

Oh god the suspense is killing me. I love it. 

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 10
Date: December 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: On The Fifth Day of Christmas

Karen sometimes just assumed he wasn't really serious when he went against something she said...Resigned to his fate and the change in his plans, Jim headed upstairs for a shower.

This is a great insight into Jim's character. He is unwilling to put up a fight, no matter who it is, Michael, Pam or Karen. 

“Don't you think I deserve a better explanation than just 'I can't'?” The irony was not lost on Jim.

In my best Kevin voice "Niiiiice." 

“I think the world of you Karen, I really do,” he said.

I can really hear Jim say this. 


“Tell her that I hold her blameless in all of this. I don't think I could bear to lose her friendship as well. Tell her I still want her around.”

Classy Karen. I love how you have written her. 

 

Jim seemed a little to "teenage girly" at the end on his bed. But then maybe he gets a little bit giddy thinking about Pam!  This has been AWESOME!!! Keep the chapters coming!

Different Names (For the Same Thing) by sideviewhotel Rated: M [Reviews - 10] 6
Summary: Jim compares. [Spoilers through Benihana Christmas]

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: None
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1433 Read Count: 3151 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2006 Updated: December 30, 2006
Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 8
Date: December 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Different Names (For the Same Thing)

Two separate things and maybe he just planned to keep them that way.

Oh yeah. This line makes the whole story. Very interesting. I hope this has more to come! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I wasn't sure if it was a good way to wrap it up or if it was going to come across as a cop-out. :3 So, your review makes me happy. ;)

I don't know about more, but.. we'll see. My muse tends to visit me in spurts and I'm starting to wonder if this visit was just a Christmas present. :(