Penname: rational Real name: Tess
Member Since: April 26, 2020

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Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim Halpert loves his wife. He loves his children. He doesn't love being a werewolf… but then, who would? 

Humbly submitted for the 2018 Halloween competition. 

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Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Cece Halpert, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Horror, Inner Monologue, Kids/Family, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Series: Halloween Writing Contest 2018
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4336 Read Count: 6182 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2018 Updated: October 18, 2018
Reviewer: rational Signed 1
Date: May 22, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Aww, this is so sweet!

Summary: Starts during Season 3, Episode 18 (The Negotiation). Pam and Jim are in the break room alone, and Pam’s trying to apologize to Jim for Roy attacking him. Jim is dismissive and goes so far as to say Pam and Roy will probably get back to together. What would have happened if Pam exploded in a fit of anger?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12724 Read Count: 26616 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2018 Updated: December 07, 2018
Reviewer: rational Signed 1
Date: June 07, 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Sunday Afternoon Delight Part 2

I liked this! Honestly so good to see Pam actually say what needed to be said, and of course some honesty led right to them getting together! They were both so cute once they'd cleared the air with each other and moved onto the dating. And the making out all over the place! Both of them with their plan to wait for sex, but then fortunately Pam realized, wait, they've known each other for years and been in love for ages and lost enough time as it is, why why longer? Thank god because their first time was so sweet and also so hot!

Notices by Comfect Rated: T [Reviews - 123] 38
Summary: Moments when Pam, Jim, and Roy notice each other. Not a continuous narrative, but now complete.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48000 Read Count: 53463 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2019 Updated: February 12, 2019
Reviewer: rational Signed 1
Date: May 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 44: Happy

I'm sure you've noticed that I've been working my way through your fics. I haven't been reviewing, which is honestly not really like me but I haven't had it in me. Things have been so crazy. But your fics have been helping me get through it, so first let me say a general: thank you so much and I love your stories and you're fantastic! I really appreciate the effort you have put into each and every one of your stories. They are all wonderful in their own ways.

Now for specifics: This story in particular has been just AMAZING. I'm a sucker for angst with a happy ending, so I've really enjoyed reading these internal monologues across all these painful times. You do such a good job getting in the heads of the characters so that they feel *real*.

While I have to admit that I'm mostly (unsurprisingly) talking about getting into the heads of Jim and Pam, I also really liked the glimpses into Roy's mind. Like you, I don't like him much, but I want to see him be a real person with three dimensions, not just an obstacle. You did that. He makes choices that make sense for him, given what he thinks and how he thinks about stuff. It was actually really nice to see him start to grow up and think about how to be a better version of himself there at the end.

This made me cry so many times! I mean, season 3...it's just so hard watching Jim and Pam make themselves miserable, choosing the wrong way to interpret things over and over, but for completely understandable reasons! Both of them trying to protect themselves, but really just ensuring that they stay stuck. But it's so worth it to see them finally figure their shit out and be happy at last!

Author's Response: Thank you for this review. It's really wonderful to hear that my writing is still getting read and that it is speaking to you--especially this story, which I really enjoyed writing for exactly the reasons you identify. Thanks for reading, and thanks for letting me know how you feel!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A look at Pam’s Season 3 journey through the eyes of her art instructor.

“Marla always started off the term asking students to fill out a survey about themselves... There wasn’t much on Pam’s paper; a few neatly written words that she worked as a receptionist, hadn’t taken art classes since high school, and liked watercolors best.”

Safe and Sound Cover


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4287 Read Count: 5114 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2019 Updated: July 14, 2019
Reviewer: rational Signed 1
Date: May 30, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really like this! Looking at this through the eyes of her art teacher is clever! And Pam choosing to draw that moment where Jim was walking away made me cry a little, but it was so good to see her really express herself honestly.

Author's Response: thank you!

Date Line by Comfect Rated: T [Reviews - 406] 95
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Post Casino Night AU where Jim goes to Australia, and Pam follows.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87001 Read Count: 204308 ePub Downloads: 38
[Report This] Published: March 09, 2020 Updated: May 27, 2020
Reviewer: rational Signed 1
Date: May 27, 2020 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79: Beach Games

This is a great story! So fun! The travelogue was really something I didn't realize I needed in these days where I'm mostly locked in my house. I loved seeing them work everything out in Australia, and I'm really enjoying all the little changes to canon that are made by them already being together. I particularly like the fact that Pam's courageous act of flying to Australia to track down him seems to have lead to her having a breakthrough in her art as well, so that Gil no longer thinks all of her work is motel art at her show. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with the next part!

Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't really envision how much travelogue it would be until I also needed it to get out of my house even if just fictionally. I'm really glad you appreciated the story--your comments on Pam are exactly what I was trying to convey, so I'm so glad that came across. Thank you!

Summary: In the Booze Cruise episode, Roy's motivated to set a wedding date because Captain Jack tells a story about getting married to the love of his life. But what effect would it have on Roy if the story was about how Captain Jack happily avoided marriage? Let’s see what happens.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Katy, Pam, Roy
Genres: Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10993 Read Count: 8831 ePub Downloads: 31
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2020 Updated: June 18, 2020
Reviewer: rational Signed 1
Date: June 07, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is an interesting take on how this could have played out differently. It really makes a lot of sense that Captain Jack could have unwittingly pushed Roy a totally different direction with his story. I loved Jim just obviously seeking Pam out after seeing Roy and Katy together, not even thinking twice. I also loved the two of them on the bench, feeling like they just couldn't separate from each other. I'm so curious to see what happens now that both Jim and Pam are single!

Diversity Jim by Comfect Rated: T [Reviews - 80] 46
Summary: Moving the Asian Jim prank up to just after Diversity Day, with JAM results.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27270 Read Count: 23836 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2020 Updated: September 08, 2020
Reviewer: rational Signed 1
Date: August 23, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Prologue 2: In Which An Idea Is Hatched

This is fun so far! You know, Dwight can be a jerk and an idiot, but stealing Jim's biggest client is pretty high up there on the list of truly malicious things he's done. I'm so curious to see how this change in timing with the Asian Jim prank leads to movement with JAM!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're with me on that being a really pointlessly malicious move. I hope you enjoy where I go with this!