Reviewer: kells8995 Signed
Date: September 02, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: love again
So like another reviewer mentioned, at first I was sort of confused. By another re read and I think I've got it.
Wow, what an asshole Jim turned out to be. Sadly I've seen seemingly nice guys do heinous stuff like this before.
I thought this was really good.
Author's Response: Yeah, I tampered with the pronouns some and added more names. I wrote this in like, five periods and I kept confusing myself. That's when I realized it needed to be fixed.
I really wanted to explore this idea of perfectionist Jim who just, wants everything a certain way and then he's all thrown for a loop. And he's still a young guy, you know? I have a thing for Jim that isn't all love and puppies.
Thanks for the review!